She’s a Russian Trojan Horse.
He’s a fool in love and the de facto head of what’s left of his crime family.
It all goes as expected. Sadness, heat, revenge, peace, friendship, losses and gains.
As the youngest, Seb is the last story of this generation.
In some ways, this was the best of the series… in other ways, it was the worst.
For me, the author took it too fast where it mattered and too slow where it didn’t. I wanted more - a stronger connection between the MCs and more focus on them verses the action surrounding them.
The storyline is hard to handle. It’s a fresh cut for Seb in that he’s getting his own drama, family role, and HEA, but there’s also so much insertion to finish out the arc from the previous books… or rather set up the next generation arc from the offspring of those characters. In a way, that sort of stole the spotlight from Seb and his lady. Yet, even in that, I felt discontented.
Even in the wrap up of the series’ storyline, the author hit hard in some places and left others dangling in the air. We get a lot from Nessa, but barely nothing from the rest of the series. Examples - Cam’s little brother and his father <<< why make that such a big deal in Nero’s book (3) if it wasn’t ever going to be tied up by the end of the series? Did Cam and Nero ever get married and have kids? What did Dante do for a living if not mafia … it’s hard to imagine him as some stay at home dad while his model wife makes the living.
Anyway, I expected the author to make one final weave to include ALL the previous characters so that the series ends with a final page in the script of their futures, but it didn’t. That was disappointing. I don’t think the series ended neatly. I don’t feel satisfied with the closure of this generation before/after skipping ahead 18 years for this book’s epilogue to set up the next generation’s series. Yes, a Vampire Academy type situation for mafia children sounds exciting, but it’s hard to jump on that series when this series feels so inconclusive.
Back to Seb and Yel.
The dungeon scene is a perfect example of why I hate and love this author’s style. It’s intense. I understood it. It’s fiery. Yet, the “daddy” inclusion is like flying down the road at 120 mph and jerking up the emergency brake. It was unnaturally forced in there and just seemed like a shock sticker for the hell of it.
The twin bro plot felt cheapened. There seemed to be no reason for this relationship dynamic to go from twin bond to bitter hate. Their bond couldn’t have been that special if it was broken so easily, and all that basically occurred off page, which further disconnected the reader from understanding it.
Even the connection between Seb and Yel is mostly built off page… ie the author tells you it’s happening, but doesn’t show you. I love the result of their connection, but I wish more time had been taken pouring the foundation of it and less time in the fluffy plot points… such as the mute dude’s obsession with Yel, which went absolutely NOWHERE. Why lay all that ground work of him looking, watching, etc only to have it be nothing of importance to the story?
The breakdown of the all for one family unit. This is a far cry from book one and a mob daughter and son forced into marriage - no questions, they did it because of both love, duty, respect, and fear of their families. This book seems like a different universe. I understand it … for real life… but the mob doesn’t work like real life. It’s a lifer thing. Yet, here we have each family just breaking apart and going their separate ways, doing their own thing, and basically saying fuck the larger family now that I have my own lil family. I didn’t get that. I didn’t appreciate it within the world that the author created as a whole and then segmented for the sake of safety and peace.
I SAY ALL OF THIS AS A FAN. I say it in constructive criticism. I say it all because I have rarely ever read two, much less six books, in any series. By two, I’m usually bored and done. The fact I read all of the series speaks to the author’s raw talent. This could’ve, should’ve been five stars across the board, but too many little things held it back.