The sequel to The Princess' Pet is, in some ways, an improvement and a bit of a disappointment. The writing quality is markedly improved, showing better editing throughout, with only a few typos and awkward phrases here and there that didn't draw my attention as much this time around. The writing is solid, consistent, and this sequel is as much of an easy, enjoyable read as the previous one.
Story wise, the BDSM and the general smuttiness of the book take a back seat, which to me was a bit of an issue- removing the dominance fantasy left more space for their relation to develop, and and in turn it becomes too obvious that this is a very unhealthy relationship between a controlling vampire (both literal and figurative, as she's royalty) and her literal slave, whose jealousy borders dangerously on codependency. It doesn't help that the first book took great pains to essentialize Selene's particularly possessive and predatory behaviours as innate to vampires- even though none, save maybe one, of the over vampires of the story exhibit such behaviours.
It's a suspension of disbelief thing: I was willing to ignore the unhealthiness of it all when it was smutty bdsm, because this is unfortunately what I've come to expect from fantasy with bdsm themes- but I expect more from other, more vanilla fiction.
This particular corner the story wrote itself to is hard to escape: how do you deal with a relationship so imbalanced when you wrote a world where nobility (pureblood nobility, because yes, this is also about race) has literal right of life and death? Well, you bend the rules of the world. Obstacles are conveniently removed. Characters' personalities can be shifted, more or less discreetly, and more or less organically. It isn't particularly subtle, at least in this book, but the ending and, I guess, the development of their relationship throughout the story, presage improvement, if there's ever a sequel.