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The Alpha's Unwanted Mate #2
The Alpha's Unwanted Mate: Book 2
This is book 2 of The Alpha's Unwanted Mate.
Celeste always thought her life would change for the better, the future she had foreseen was one like no other; a mate that would love away her pain, a mate that would see only her, breathe only her.
However, when she found herself mated to Zillon Macre; her lifelong crush as well as the future alpha of her pack, her dream remained just that, a dream.
Her life did not change in the way she wanted it to, instead of being better, it changed for the worst. Her insignificance didn't dissipate, it augmented, and somehow it left her unwanted...
By her pack members...
Her family...
And lastly, her mate who only craved for her twin sister.
Celeste always thought her life would change for the better, the future she had foreseen was one like no other; a mate that would love away her pain, a mate that would see only her, breathe only her.
However, when she found herself mated to Zillon Macre; her lifelong crush as well as the future alpha of her pack, her dream remained just that, a dream.
Her life did not change in the way she wanted it to, instead of being better, it changed for the worst. Her insignificance didn't dissipate, it augmented, and somehow it left her unwanted...
By her pack members...
Her family...
And lastly, her mate who only craved for her twin sister.
400 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 29, 2022
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March 13, 2024
If I could give zero... I would.. I'd even give it negative.
No, yuck, ew.
If you in anyway have Zillon as your ideal man, or book boyfriend. Get some fucking help. And for the people who know me... Should know how fucking bad this mf has to be for ME to say that... Also the FMC drove me mad and not in the good way. I HATED her, like yeah I get it she's an omega but omg have some sort of self-respect or backbone like I thought the first book was bad, in comparison the last book is like a best seller. Because EW I dislike this so much no actually hate. I don't hate a lot of books. But I do this one. I hate the characters. I hate the story. I hate the love interest. I EVEN DON'T LIKE THE SMUT. Istg the only reason they're together is because they're mates. That mate bond/sexual tension and plain horniness is the only reason they're even talking. Like he just hurts her and doesn't care, AND SHE'S NOT EVEN INTO IT IN THE SLIGTEST. Worst couple I've ever read about.
No, yuck, ew.
If you in anyway have Zillon as your ideal man, or book boyfriend. Get some fucking help. And for the people who know me... Should know how fucking bad this mf has to be for ME to say that... Also the FMC drove me mad and not in the good way. I HATED her, like yeah I get it she's an omega but omg have some sort of self-respect or backbone like I thought the first book was bad, in comparison the last book is like a best seller. Because EW I dislike this so much no actually hate. I don't hate a lot of books. But I do this one. I hate the characters. I hate the story. I hate the love interest. I EVEN DON'T LIKE THE SMUT. Istg the only reason they're together is because they're mates. That mate bond/sexual tension and plain horniness is the only reason they're even talking. Like he just hurts her and doesn't care, AND SHE'S NOT EVEN INTO IT IN THE SLIGTEST. Worst couple I've ever read about.
September 25, 2023
Maybe closer to 3.5 ratings… perhaps
This review is for both books, seeings how I read them as one on the Passion app.
I’ll start by saying I do understand the other reviews for this book. It is extremely long winded, it is slow in numerous places, and it is in heavy need of an editor. It’s not just grammatical errors, it’s using the wrong names, the wrong tenses, and sentence structure. I also have a sneaking suspicion the author kept a thesaurus on hand while writing. But surprisingly enough none of that prohibited me from reading and finishing this book quicker than it deserved.
The story was good. The characters quite likable, including Celeste and Zillon. Liam and Fredd were the perfect amount of comic relief without being annoying or too obvious, plus they knew when to lighten the mood and when not to.
Even the characters I didn’t like I respected how they were portrayed.
I have a special place in my heart for Kaheel, I seriously wish the book ended differently. No matter how much I adore Celeste and Zillon, I yearn for Kaheel to be a part of their happiness. I don’t say this often about other author’s characters but damn this was a horrible missed opportunity for the book to take an unexpected twist into MFM territory (and I know the author wouldn’t be adverse to this considering the joke Liam made about holes).
I am mentally rewriting the end in my mind and that is the version I would reread thousands of times! It would’ve been a twist no one saw coming, unlike the ending that I guessed 95% of before reading it.
Sidenote: I can go with Celia staying away. She definitely doesn’t need to be in any sequels. I may be in the minority but she sure as shit doesn’t need to be officially mated to anyone. She needs to find love the old fashioned way so she knows how it feels to love and be loved without the benefit of the mating bond that she disrespected repeatedly. Plus I never want to read about her again, especially if she ends up with Kaheel. That is one book I will happily skip.
So quick wrapup: this is a very long book in need of editing, but I am not sorry I read it. Though in full it doesn’t have a high reread value, there are sections of it I will happily peruse again,
AND there are other sections I’ve mentally rewritten with three distinct people moaning in ecstasy… ;)
This review is for both books, seeings how I read them as one on the Passion app.
I’ll start by saying I do understand the other reviews for this book. It is extremely long winded, it is slow in numerous places, and it is in heavy need of an editor. It’s not just grammatical errors, it’s using the wrong names, the wrong tenses, and sentence structure. I also have a sneaking suspicion the author kept a thesaurus on hand while writing. But surprisingly enough none of that prohibited me from reading and finishing this book quicker than it deserved.
The story was good. The characters quite likable, including Celeste and Zillon. Liam and Fredd were the perfect amount of comic relief without being annoying or too obvious, plus they knew when to lighten the mood and when not to.
Even the characters I didn’t like I respected how they were portrayed.
I have a special place in my heart for Kaheel, I seriously wish the book ended differently. No matter how much I adore Celeste and Zillon, I yearn for Kaheel to be a part of their happiness. I don’t say this often about other author’s characters but damn this was a horrible missed opportunity for the book to take an unexpected twist into MFM territory (and I know the author wouldn’t be adverse to this considering the joke Liam made about holes).
I am mentally rewriting the end in my mind and that is the version I would reread thousands of times! It would’ve been a twist no one saw coming, unlike the ending that I guessed 95% of before reading it.
Sidenote: I can go with Celia staying away. She definitely doesn’t need to be in any sequels. I may be in the minority but she sure as shit doesn’t need to be officially mated to anyone. She needs to find love the old fashioned way so she knows how it feels to love and be loved without the benefit of the mating bond that she disrespected repeatedly. Plus I never want to read about her again, especially if she ends up with Kaheel. That is one book I will happily skip.
So quick wrapup: this is a very long book in need of editing, but I am not sorry I read it. Though in full it doesn’t have a high reread value, there are sections of it I will happily peruse again,
AND there are other sections I’ve mentally rewritten with three distinct people moaning in ecstasy… ;)
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September 16, 2024
I completed Book 1 and 2 as one book by listening to the story on an app. I enjoyed the story. It had some of the typical alpha/omega/luna/rejection/redemption and so on. Overall I think there was some original parts that are not always found in these stories which was nice. The writing was good, but could have been better. The version I listened to was absolutely horrendous. There were many times I wanted to stop, but the story was good enough that I pushed through. Definitely worth reading or listening to, just don’t listen to the version on the FreeFM app. (I actually like the app but this particular story was AI generated audio, which was so bad)
October 31, 2024
Wonderful series
What a great book this was!!! You have strong characters along with caring characters not weak ones. The story had a beautiful flow. These 2 books are worth reading!!! I hope you we enjoy them as much as I have!!!
What a great book this was!!! You have strong characters along with caring characters not weak ones. The story had a beautiful flow. These 2 books are worth reading!!! I hope you we enjoy them as much as I have!!!
April 6, 2023
Terrible
This books is filled with so mistakes and ramblings and repetitive drivel that its difficult to read. Predictable and boring story line.
This books is filled with so mistakes and ramblings and repetitive drivel that its difficult to read. Predictable and boring story line.
October 15, 2024
The story line is good but that's about it. None of the characters are likeable. It was a struggle to finish. And it needs editing really bad.
December 30, 2024
DNF/CNF 🙈 I just couldn’t get past the FMC no matter how hard I tried.
September 16, 2023
this was ruff
I did not even truly want to continue with this read but pure stubbornness and unwillingness not to know how it finishes pushed me forward. I did enjoy the plot but the writing, grammar, and spelling are atrocious. I understand this writer comes from GoodNovel but I feel like they need to edit their writers work more before publishing them!
3 stars for decent plot
Is it worth reading? Ehhh… I’ll let you decide yourself. I personally would not recommend.
I did not even truly want to continue with this read but pure stubbornness and unwillingness not to know how it finishes pushed me forward. I did enjoy the plot but the writing, grammar, and spelling are atrocious. I understand this writer comes from GoodNovel but I feel like they need to edit their writers work more before publishing them!
3 stars for decent plot
Is it worth reading? Ehhh… I’ll let you decide yourself. I personally would not recommend.
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