Cordelia had always known she would marry Prince Alain, mostly because they'd been friends since childhood and it just made sense they'd end up together. But when Prince Alain all but orders her for her hand she realizes that love doesn't seem to have much to do with their relationship, and refuses him. Angry words are exchanged and Cordelia's brother takes the Prince off to win Cordelia's love the old fashioned way. Questing! Followed by a 'secret' tail of the King, Cordelia's parents, a battalion of royal bodyguards, every Wee Folk that could be spared, and of course, Cordelia herself.
Contrary to the idea the summary might have given you, Cordelia's pretty useless for the first half of the book. The two boys defeat some bandits and send them back to Cordelia's home a la Don Quixote, so she turns around and goes home so she'd be there to meet them. Eventually she does go back after the two idiots and finds them being seduced by a comely young thing, and there's a magic battle (Cordelia's family are all-powerful witches and warlocks), but in the end the whole plot of the book is Cordelia and Alain's high school-style lover's spat and they get jealous and masked ball and yada yada happily ever after.
Cordelia is all powerful and super beautiful but doesn't know it and every boy and man she meets falls in love with her and her only flaw is a quick temper and some mood swings. But she does have some lovely scenes, my favorite of which is her arrival at the masked ball where the men are all going gaga over her and it's the first time she ever dressed up and went out so she never got this kind of reaction before. She seems genuinely appreciative of the attention, and satisfied that she managed to outdo her romantic rival. The fact that the party-goers were all agents of her rival was icing on the cake. And her talk with her mother afterword was heartfelt and lovely. But if she has any other cute scenes they were lost on me. She wasn't memorable or likable.
Her brother Geoffrey is the standard historical romance leading man. He's a scandalous rogue who sleeps around no qualms about it. But he's chivalrous about it and polite, getting the lady to set the limits and respecting them even if she was only trying to goad him on. He's a good friend to Alain and is a well-written brother character to Cordelia. You don't read their conversations and think 'cousins maybe, but not siblings'. There's a great scene at the ball where he's talking to Alain but watching Cordelia, and he's calm and rational to the one but mentally he's skipping synapses at seeing her let go and flirt. He's got the best lines, too.
"Am I not knight enough for you?" he countered. "Or enough for a night?"
(Christopher Stasheff, M'Lady Witch, p.125)
But Alain was by far the best of the three characters. He's the only one who learned something, going from a stiff, polite courtier to a... Okay so he didn't learn much. But he got to go adventuring and he learned about himself and his feelings for Cordelia and how women should be and want to be treated. He's a sweetheart who has an unfortunate habit of throwing himself into the fray to rescue those in trouble when he would be better off hanging back to plan something better, but even that impulse he conquers at the end when Cordelia needs rescuing.
There are at least 18 books before this one, excluding the 10 in the Rogue Wizard series because Cordelia's brother is in it but he's off-planet so there's probably not much development relevant to the other books. Yeah, other books, something I was unaware of since Goodreads said this was the first in the series. And it is in the sense that it's the first in the Warlock's Heirs series about the second generation. 10 more are in the Warlock series about Cordelia's parents. So you'll find right off that there's a lot of backstory and character introductions to get through. Because heaven forbid she earn her own friendships and relationships and not just rely on all the people her parents knew.
That might be unfair. The bandit Forrest seems to have stuck around at the end of it, but I don't care to read the next book to find out for sure.
For it was cruel to me, as I shall not be to you, dear readers. Beware: this is no high fantasy I speak of, but high sci-fi. Yup, despite no mention of the science fiction side to this world it is, in fact, mired in it. Robot horses, AI, time travel, intergalactic anarchist groups, explosives, interplanetary humanitarian missions, this is a science fiction book set on a planet whose first settlers wanted to recreate the Medieval era, with plenty of anachronisms from up to the 15th century thrown in to make it, if not accurate, then comfortable.
I had no warning of this, it just started coming out of nowhere during one of those backstory bog-downs I mentioned earlier.
The verdict? That said, maybe the series is a good read if you start from the beginning and have a little warning about the sci-fi, but the Goodreads, Amazon.ca, and back-of-book summaries gave no indication this was anything other than high fantasy. Look at that cover! Is there anything sci-fi about that cover?! I'll recommend it for a cute, light-headed teenage romance that goes nowhere important but only if sci-fi fantasy is your kind of thing.