i wholeheartedly believe that once your stage directions surpass more than a page then you’re better off just writing a short story or something...like this was very much telling & not expressing, which was ironic, considering this is a script. anyway this still managed to hold my attention just bc there’s so much happening btwn the characters; the main cast felt very lively even on the written page. it was the characters that made this so intense; the story itself was just okay, it was predictably horrifying, copious amounts of dramatic irony, etc etc. i know cao yu deliberately modeled this after western tragedy (oedipus rex???) but i think i didn’t take to this one because of exactly that reason, since it felt like something i’d read/heard before
i don’t think i’ll ever reread this outside of class since it didn’t personally resonate with me & the stage directions are astonishingly tedious lmao, but i think this does have the potential to be great on stage! but since against all odds this still freaked me out pretty badly i will not be looking for an adaptation god bless.