This was my first Pike book in many, many years, and I was a bit curious to see what I think of them now as an adult. I know I read at least a couple of them in my younger-years but I barely remember them. I picked this one up at a used book store a while back, and, seeing as how I'm a fan of witchcraft within the horror genre, I figured this would be a good one to reintroduce myself to Pike - it also seems to be a more popular one from what I've noticed.
In Witch, our narrator, Julia, is a seventeen year old girl who explains that she uses her "white magic" to help and heal others, like her mother did before she tragically died of a hemorrhage three months ago. She learned all about her powers from her mother, which include the ability to heal others' wounds as well as see a little bit into the future.
One day, when Julia is peeking around with her visionary ability, she witnesses a young man die in a hold-up at a liquor store / gas station / something of that sort. She's terrified by this vision and is determined to prevent it from coming true when she learns that the young man in question happens to be her best friend's new boyfriend.
Julia ends up diverting fate, but not exactly as she planned, and with her interference comes grave consequences. One of the people responsible for the hold-ups becomes the target of Julia's rage as she seeks revenge, further putting herself and others in harm's way. What will become of this diverted and distorted future she's caused?
Going into this, I was expecting a rather straightforward horror story with more of a focus on actual witchcraft. While there is a bit of explanation in the beginning by Julia in regards to the source of her powers and how they function, her identity of being a witch is actually just a plot-point of this novel, and not the primary one.
I actually was engaged almost from the start - I was surprised to see how smooth and competent Pike's writing is. It's nothing fancy or poetic but his style flows well and is very readable. Maybe not so much of a surprise with this one, but the characters were slightly more layered and believable than you'd typically find in a Fear Street book. (Sorry Stine)
There's also some nice humor in here in the form of dialogue, which is a bit raunchy at times (Pike doesn't restrain himself like Stine, to say the least), but altogether convincing.
Pike came out of the gate with a lot of potential for this book and I was interested to see where it went. Unfortunately, it became clear early on that this is without a doubt NOT a horror novel, and not the one I was looking for.
Once stuff goes down at the gas station/store from Julia's vision, the tension begins to ramp up and the story turns into a revenge thriller, that, while I admit, was very action-packed and even gripping at times (I read this book in a day), it felt a little odd and out of place to be having gunfights and such. Definitely not what I was expecting. As the book progresses upon this new plot point of Julia hellbent on getting revenge, the violence (and body-count) continues to mount rapidly until the story becomes too ambitious for its own good. Yes, it's tense and enthralling, but it's also a bit ridiculous and unconvincing. Characters are dumb; they act in unbelievable ways, going against what we knew about them in the first half; logic takes a backseat in favor of action and violence; there's also a bit of "plot armor" or "plot convenience" in the second half that further stains the story's credibility. Now, being a 90's YA horrorthriller book, you might say one couldn't expect it to be too realistic, and you're right - but this one goes a bit over the top for me, so much so that it never comes back down to ground level.
The story escalates quickly and then keeps moving at a breakneck pace; character development and reasoning be damned.
Once we do get to the climax of the story, the witch aspect comes back around and plays into the denouement in a big way. I won't say too much because spoilers and stuff, but it's (supposed to be) very spiritual and emotional and... it ends up (in my eyes) being very melodramatic and hard to take seriously. It didn't help I was already a bit detached from all the wild fast-and-furious type action we got just moments ago. The ending itself was okay, nothing wrong with it but at the same time it didn't appeal much to me simply because I didn't care all that much what happened.
Summary:
Solid first half, and some very engaging/thrilling moments throughout, but unless you're good at shutting off part of your brain and forgiving the author for the moments of "shocking" violence... you'll likely find, like I did, that the unrealistic nature of it takes you right out of the story. Some of the plot twists and reveals don't fully make sense, and you just have to go with it.
I got some enjoyment out of this book, for sure, but I feel like I've been a little duped. Pike's writing is solid and the book started out with promise, but unfortunately he chose sensationalism over sense, and a clusterf**k of ideas are crammed together in the guise of this suspense/thriller.
Overall I give this one a 3 / 5 - I liked it but not enough to make me seek out more works by Pike. I might try another one of his books in the future but I'm in no hurry for that and I'll be more careful about which one I pick up next.