Some Instructions

by Stanley Crawford

From "Putting Things Away" to "The Marriage Almanac" (not to mention the pedantic "Index," in itself a comic wonder), Stanley Crawford gives the married, the unmarried, and the formerly married a classic satire on all the sanctimonious marriage manuals ever produced.Starting with the complete title, Some Instructions to My Wife Concerning the Upkeep of the House and Marriage, and to My Son and Daughter Concerning the Conduct of Their Childhood, a boorish narrator sets down some seventy-three pieces of advice to his wife, young son, and two-year-old daughter, intended to foster and maintain domestic tranquility in an age of anxiety.Taken literally, our neo-Victorian head of the house is a male chauvinist pig of sorts, but what reader would deny that the sources of Crawford's satire run deep in the American grain?Some Instructions is the madly precise fantasy of a husband and father who has stepped through the marital looking glass just to see, from the other side, the perfectly kept house and the well-functioning marriage and family.

Genres: Fiction, Novels

192 pages, Hardcover

First published January 1, 1978

About the author

Crawford is the author of "Gascoyne," "Petroleum Man," "Log of the S.S. The Mrs Unguentine," "A Garlic Testament: Seasons on a Small New Mexico Farm," "Mayordomo: Chronicle of an Acequia in Northern New Mexico," "The River in Winter," and "Some Instructions to My Wife Concerning the Upkeep of the House and Marriage and to my Son and Daughter Concerning the Conduct of their Childhood." He lives in new Mexico with his wife, RoseMary, where they own and run a garlic farm.

Reviews

[Adam · Rating 4 out of 5]

Mordant and uproarious, hysterically obsessive, cold as death and close to home. Rarely have such imperturbable pretensions to omniscience been so resoundingly vacuous. How bad/good is it? The Perfectest Husband on Planet America has kindly deigned to provide scripts and schedules and lists and diagrams for every imaginable element of domestic life (and death!), a meticulousness so rarefied it would require legions of lackeys to inflict the type of order herein detailed unto derangement which he pretends his wife alone can accomplish... and yet, he cannot omit to instruct her that dishes are best washed in hot water!?! As in, "Please have a time machine ready for me in the morning, here is your abacus, should your woeful incompetence need anything more I suggest you bring your sewing kit, chop chop!" The book is a cornucopia of false analogies, delusion, and duplicity. It will have served its benignant and benighted purpose if it gives the reader (especially male) due pause before ever again suggesting anything to or expecting anything from their significant other. It's quite short and can be quickly read, but if you take breaks you can sustain the glee of encountering the absurdities afresh. For example, in the Index under the heading MARRIAGE:

animals of
building the
buildup of pollens in the
burning down the
clothes of the
condition of the
daily pregnancy of the
displaying to the public eye
ecologically sound
eyelids of the
fences of the
fruits and vegetables of the
fuels of the
future of the
flashing eyes of the
garden of
geese of the
goats of the
hat brim of the
house of
ideal
joint partners of the
language of the
as monument
others'
power failure within
quadrifocal-stereoscopic vision
second and third helpings
textures of the
threats to the integrity of the
tools of
true wealth of a
upholstery of the
vehicles of
weather of the
weeds of

[MJ Nicholls · Rating 3 out of 5]

A pastiche of Victorian domestic manuals as a satire-of-sorts for prim-and-proper American attitudes to hearth and home. The execution is flawless but sinks into boringness due to its adherence to the arch patriarchal voice.

[Thomas · Rating 4 out of 5]

very funny parody of victorian era marriage manuals, with our male chauvinist and quite possibly autistic narrator overexplaining how to do basic domestic tasks to his wife like she was a complete simpleton. he starts by saying that a house is like a marriage, and keeping the house correctly will do the same for the marriage, and then there's all these increasingly strained parallels where the fridge is also the fridge of marriage, and as you keep food in the fridge to keep it from spoiling, so you also keep important things from your marriage to keep them from spoiling as well. at one point he explains to his wife how to shop for groceries at the supermarket, and he suggests that she could consult a map of the nearest supermarket that he has made as it should be relatively accurate, although sometimes supermarket owners like to arrange the shelves a little. also features some very good asides to his children, including revealing to his son that all 18 years worth of clothing, toys and other items have been purchased in advance. definitely the most chuckles i have gotten from a book in quite a while.

[Nita · Rating 3 out of 5]

A winning conceit stumbled in its execution which was, generously, mid. Suffers from a muddled narrative point of view. Is this a joke? Is it head on? Both? Not written will enough to deliver on the ambition. Meh

[Stephen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Let’s just say it is a book that is definitely dated but it is dated in the best possible way.

[Pilum Press · Rating 5 out of 5]

Fascinating exercise illustrating the sublime weirdness which can issue from attending to voice.

[Melissa Duclos · Rating 2 out of 5]

This book has more premise than plot, and while it is funny, I also found it a bit tedious. Because there is really no "story" to speak of, the tension in the book comes from the reader attempting to see through the tightly controlled surface of the book, and in a sense, create the story for yourself. The book as a whole can be viewed as a metaphor for another type of book--Revolutionary Road, say--which perhaps is just too painful a story for the narrator to address directly.

While I think I learned a lot from reading this book about narrative, I'm not sure I really enjoyed it.

[Andrés]

Bought with high hopes, but did not find it particularly interesting. Have yet to finish it. Began it in 1984 (or thereabouts). May try it again if I hear it calling my name one day - I haven't sent it to the used book shops, so... you never know.

[Lee Klein · Rating 4 out of 5]

Notice how similar the cover is to Notable American Women, and note that this wonderfully sad joke of a book by Mr. Crawford was recommended by Mr. Marcus.

[Eve · Rating 5 out of 5]

I like to think I am a better wife from having read this book. I will certainly read it to my children in the hope that they will grow to be better sons and daughters.

[Michael · Rating 3 out of 5]

I did a video review of this book.
You can watch it at: http://www.wingchairbooks.com/2010/11...

[Brendan · Rating 3 out of 5]

A fascinating concept, but not a particularly interesting execution.