I’d give 2 stars only, and even this rating seemed high. However, since I was able to finish it, I thought it probably deserved a 2.
This book is instalment #3 in the League series, taking place (my guess) 30 or so years after the events of book #2 (which portrayed Syn and Shahara). In this book, Devyn, the son of the legendary Sentella member and expert hacker Syn, took centre stage. Devyn had it all – not only was he the son of Syn and Shahara, he was well-trained in almost everything that his parents were skilled in, including medical, flying, combative, hacking etc. He was extremely rich and he was doing things for a good cause. Oh, and let’s not forget that he was also good-looking and physically attractive. He had envious family ties - his parents loved him, and his family were friends with people who had enormous political influence in the universe. Devyn would be your model hero character.
Alix was the unfortunate female lead who had a tough life living as a slave under her father’s brutal control. She learned on her own to become an engineer on her father’s spaceship. As a slave, she often had to “serve” ship crew sexually to “relieve” their needs. The villain of the story, Merjack, used Alix as a spy to gain evidence of Devyn’s criminal activities. Alix was forced to comply because Merjack held her mother and sister hostage.
The attraction between Alix and Devyn was instantaneous. It wasn’t simply because Alix resembled Devyn’s ex-fiancee, it was that he felt an irristible pull towards her. Although Alix felt mutual attraction towards Devyn, she continued to struggle with her spying purposes and how it would be wrong to fabricate evidence against Devyn.
So, after reading about one-third of the book, I could honestly tell you that nothing really happened, other than that we were introduced to the characters and that Alix was able to get herself onto Devyn’s ship to work as an engineer. The plot building was extremely slow in the works, and the whole situation was a joke because Devyn appeared to think with his penis and not his brain in Alix’s presense for a good part of the book. Given the nature of his activities, one would expect that he did a thorough background check on the girl before hiring her. But oh no, he decided on the spot that it was okay to just let a stranger onto his ship. The actions actually didn’t really pick up until pretty much near the last quarter of the book, and even then it was over so quickly that I barely noticed the climax.
Okay, let’s talk about chemistry... Normally, I’d feel the sizzling effects between two well-written characters. In this case, there was none, zilch, nada. There was absolutely no chemistry whatsoever between Alix and Devyn. It just felt as though they went from lusting for each other suddenly to loving each other. The transition was so abrupt under the circumstances that it was not very convincing. Seriously, I didn’t care much for neither one of them. I found myself more interested in other secondary characters such as Vik (the mecha) and Zarina (a princess and the daughter of Nykyrian and Kiara from book #1). Sadly, the interactions between Alix and Devyn, or simply their internal (horny) monologues, took up too many pages of the novel and there weren’t enough dedicated to the other characters in my opinion.
Before Alix’s intended treachery was discovered, she often had these internal struggles in which she battled with herself on what she should do. I know she had suffered a lot in her past and that I should probably give her a break, but she was just that annoying, so I found myself skipping/skimming the passage whenever it had to do with her. On this, I must say that the author had failed to create a character that could have been captivating and moving given the premise of the story, but instead she turned out to be flat.
It was obvious that the author tried to introduce some humor in the story, but it sucked big time. There was a lot of bantering going on between Devyn and his crew and friends. Even Devyn himself often tried to lighten up Alix’s mood by making humorous remarks. Unfortunately, it often failed to amaze me. I normally would very much appreciate a little humor and bantering in the dialogues, but for some reason the author just didn’t do it right for me. I just felt that she had it all in the wrong and inappropriate places. Meh!
I must also mention that there were many grammatical errors in the book. The editor didn’t do a very good job in cleaning things up. The mistakes were so obvious that I’d often re-read the sentence and then go huh??!! As an example, on pg 321 of the paperback that I was reading, “...there wouldn’t be a single soul who’d step forward on his behalf. Not a one...” Really? Not a one? What the heck was that?!? There were numerous similar errors like this throughout the book but I didn’t keep track. I just remembered this one because it was close to the end of the book.
One thing that I think the author did well on was on the length of the novel. I thought the first 2 books of the series were way too lengthy and the stories kind of dragged on. Thankfully she made it decent this time – it was long enough for a novel but not too long. If it was long like its other two predecessors, I wasn’t sure if I could finish this book.
Overall, I still liked the futuristic setting of this series. It was unique and held lots of potential. I just hope that the next books in the series are able to make up for the dissatisfaction I felt for this book.