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Lone
Professor Seth Anderson has finally found sanctuary in Brier, Iowa. Even better, he's found Raphael "Rafe" Dirisio, a strong, giant of a man who owns the town pool hall, and Seth has never felt so comfortable, safe, or close to anyone. When Seth is asked to give a series of lectures in Washington, DC, it seems only natural that Rafe come along. But in a few surreal days, Seth's true nature is exposed and he brings both their lives crashing down around them.
Because Seth is not only a werewolf, he's also something much, much worse...
Gay / Dark Fantasy / Shapeshifter / Werewolf / Fantasy / Witchcraft / Magic / Exhibitionism / Public Places
270 pages, Kindle Edition
First published May 3, 2009
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Rowan McBride
13 books262 followersBorn an Air Force dependent, Rowan McBride traveled the world and totally missed the 80’s as most Americans know it. In exchange, xe’s gotten to walk in clogs, break an arm at Mt. Fuji, and say prayers at a Korean Buddhist temple. So far it seems like a fair trade. Although xe graduated from high school in Hawaii, xe didn’t learn to hula and make leis until going to college in Iowa. After leaving the Midwest, xe moved to Washington, DC and very nearly got xemself a Juris Doctor degree. Now xe’s chilling out in Texas, diabolically planning road trips that could span years.
People say xyr life is random, and that’s probably true. Rowan comforts xemself with the working theory that a random life makes for good stories. When that doesn’t work, there’s Pocky. Lots and lots of Pocky.
People say xyr life is random, and that’s probably true. Rowan comforts xemself with the working theory that a random life makes for good stories. When that doesn’t work, there’s Pocky. Lots and lots of Pocky.
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March 11, 2013
I was disappointed in the book because of the characterization. The MCs both have tons of potential, and I really liked aspects of them, but they weren't fully realised.
Seth has a PhD in mathematics and lectures at university, as well as being extensively published. So him whining "Seth bad?" to Rafe like he was some kind of barely-human shifter throwback completely pissed me off. Seth hates being referred to as puppy, so why would he talk like one? At the very beginning of the story Seth speaks normally; he's quiet and shy and submissive, but normal. 1/3 of the way in suddenly he starts talking like he's auditioning for Flowers for Algernon. Now arguably this is because So I don't buy into him being unable to articulate just because he is becoming a more whole person. Because he doesn't come across as more whole at the end, he comes across as having regressed.
And Rafe's character is poorly done, because he has this realisation that because he's a big strong guy he's spent his whole life having to be extra-careful and considerate of his lovers. He's itching for the chance to completely let loose with wild animalistic sex, and the opportunity to be dominated. He tells us this. So why is this so poorly explored?
Additionally I think in a good m/m romance our MCs should always save themselves through their own actions and skills, relying on and trusting each other. In contrast this book introduces a Deus ex Machina that solves all the unsolvable problems for them. That just sucks.
Finally the ending was unsatisfying. It's clearly a set-up for a 2nd volume, but it was just meh. I won't be trying the follow-up when there are so many other, better, stories out there. I will try another from this author though, because the good bits show me that's they can do way better than this.
Seth has a PhD in mathematics and lectures at university, as well as being extensively published. So him whining "Seth bad?" to Rafe like he was some kind of barely-human shifter throwback completely pissed me off. Seth hates being referred to as puppy, so why would he talk like one? At the very beginning of the story Seth speaks normally; he's quiet and shy and submissive, but normal. 1/3 of the way in suddenly he starts talking like he's auditioning for Flowers for Algernon. Now arguably this is because So I don't buy into him being unable to articulate just because he is becoming a more whole person. Because he doesn't come across as more whole at the end, he comes across as having regressed.
And Rafe's character is poorly done, because he has this realisation that because he's a big strong guy he's spent his whole life having to be extra-careful and considerate of his lovers. He's itching for the chance to completely let loose with wild animalistic sex, and the opportunity to be dominated. He tells us this. So why is this so poorly explored?
Additionally I think in a good m/m romance our MCs should always save themselves through their own actions and skills, relying on and trusting each other. In contrast this book introduces a Deus ex Machina that solves all the unsolvable problems for them. That just sucks.
Finally the ending was unsatisfying. It's clearly a set-up for a 2nd volume, but it was just meh. I won't be trying the follow-up when there are so many other, better, stories out there. I will try another from this author though, because the good bits show me that's they can do way better than this.
January 5, 2014
I loved this book! For me it was perfect, but I do understand why others would have issues with the story. I will warn people now, this book isn't exactly great if you want a straightforward, honest relationship. It was understandable for me but I know others don't like that.
So the story starts with Rafe and Seth. They have bee together three months and there is a secret Seth is keeping from Rafe. You see, the reason he keeps it is because he knows he won't be able to stay with Rafe, but he wants him so badly he keeps a secret. A pretty huge secret at that. And things are good. Rafe protects Seth and loves him. He sees them having a future together.
After Rafe finds out the truth, the relationship changes. He finds it hard to see Seth as the person he fell in love with. Understandable, all of it. I just love the way that was dealt with. Nothing felt rushed or forced to me.
The paranormal aspect in this book is really cool. I'm not talking about regular shifter stories. This has a different style to them. Especially Seth. He's not your typical shifter which is part of the appeal for me. I'm a sucker for shifter/vampire stories, don't get me wrong. But when I can read something new, it's even better.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and I recommend it to those who want to try a different shifter story.
So the story starts with Rafe and Seth. They have bee together three months and there is a secret Seth is keeping from Rafe. You see, the reason he keeps it is because he knows he won't be able to stay with Rafe, but he wants him so badly he keeps a secret. A pretty huge secret at that. And things are good. Rafe protects Seth and loves him. He sees them having a future together.
After Rafe finds out the truth, the relationship changes. He finds it hard to see Seth as the person he fell in love with. Understandable, all of it. I just love the way that was dealt with. Nothing felt rushed or forced to me.
The paranormal aspect in this book is really cool. I'm not talking about regular shifter stories. This has a different style to them. Especially Seth. He's not your typical shifter which is part of the appeal for me. I'm a sucker for shifter/vampire stories, don't get me wrong. But when I can read something new, it's even better.
Overall, I really enjoyed this book and I recommend it to those who want to try a different shifter story.
March 24, 2018
I really enjoyed this take on shifters and other Nightkin. I'd love a sequel.
October 30, 2012
Surprisingly good plot, but some elements that made me uneasy
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.
Rating: 8/10
PROS:
- Two men who are vastly different and yet equally protective of each other. Each uses his strengths to cover the other's weaknesses, and their devotion is touching.
- Interesting subversion of the dominant/submissive dichotomy. This isn't BDSM; there are no toys, no bondage, no whipping, etc. But the werewolf stories I've read in the past (not that I've read many, I admit) have incorporated a fairly rigid idea of the sexual roles of the two characters. Those roles are stretched and explored in this story, which I found compelling.
- Additional, intriguing element to the typical werewolf-human love story. Again, I haven't read much fiction about changelings, so it could be that Seth's nature isn't really that unusual in werewolf stories, but I enjoyed it.
- Lovely, entertaining interaction between the two main characters and Rafe's family when he takes Seth home for the first time. I enjoyed that part of the story very much.
CONS:
- At times I felt that Seth's doglike nature was taken a bit far. It's not a book ruiner, by any means, but a few too many simplistic, Tarzan-like sentences (example: "Rafe mad at Seth?") began to grate just a touch.
- Sex scenes that didn’t do much of anything for me…except make me cringe when one of the guys asks the other to stop and it doesn’t happen. No, it’s not rape, because the protests don’t last long and the one who’s being taken enjoys every minute of it, or so we’re told, but yikes.
- Quite a bit of jealousy and self-loathing and despair and other angsty feelings that always make me a little uneasy.
Overall comments: This is a good book, as is evidenced by the fact that I read it in one day. I found the plot more interesting than most other books in this genre, if only because it contains some elements I haven’t encountered in any other stories (yet, anyway). It isn’t a sweet, light-hearted, “everything’s coming up roses” novel, though, so you might rethink this one if you’re looking for romantic comedy.
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.
Rating: 8/10
PROS:
- Two men who are vastly different and yet equally protective of each other. Each uses his strengths to cover the other's weaknesses, and their devotion is touching.
- Interesting subversion of the dominant/submissive dichotomy. This isn't BDSM; there are no toys, no bondage, no whipping, etc. But the werewolf stories I've read in the past (not that I've read many, I admit) have incorporated a fairly rigid idea of the sexual roles of the two characters. Those roles are stretched and explored in this story, which I found compelling.
- Additional, intriguing element to the typical werewolf-human love story. Again, I haven't read much fiction about changelings, so it could be that Seth's nature isn't really that unusual in werewolf stories, but I enjoyed it.
- Lovely, entertaining interaction between the two main characters and Rafe's family when he takes Seth home for the first time. I enjoyed that part of the story very much.
CONS:
- At times I felt that Seth's doglike nature was taken a bit far. It's not a book ruiner, by any means, but a few too many simplistic, Tarzan-like sentences (example: "Rafe mad at Seth?") began to grate just a touch.
- Sex scenes that didn’t do much of anything for me…except make me cringe when one of the guys asks the other to stop and it doesn’t happen. No, it’s not rape, because the protests don’t last long and the one who’s being taken enjoys every minute of it, or so we’re told, but yikes.
- Quite a bit of jealousy and self-loathing and despair and other angsty feelings that always make me a little uneasy.
Overall comments: This is a good book, as is evidenced by the fact that I read it in one day. I found the plot more interesting than most other books in this genre, if only because it contains some elements I haven’t encountered in any other stories (yet, anyway). It isn’t a sweet, light-hearted, “everything’s coming up roses” novel, though, so you might rethink this one if you’re looking for romantic comedy.
October 11, 2012
I have mixed feelings about this story. The story had great potential and I really enjoyed the concept of the Nightkin and would have loved to have that explored a lot more (always love a good paranormal book). The beginning of the story was good and Rafe and Seth seemed to be interesting characters. Then things changed when we find out exactly who Seth is. His character changed and it seemed like the author just completely forgot about how Seth was portrayed in the beginning and it started to become very frustrating reading. Seth's mannerisms and speech began to come across very child like and honestly he became an annoyance to read. It is a shame since this book had so much potential to be a new and different world. I really wish the author had not changed the character so much.
May 31, 2010
Three words: Beautiful, deep, and memorable.
Seth is just the kind of character I love - submissive, caring, timid at times, but practically invincible inside. No one wants to mess with him, and those that make the mistake of pushing him too far only do it once.
Rafe is the perfect matching character - Alpha, strong, loving, and willing to forgive, will to keep trying. His flaws are human but his recovery from them is the major difference that defines a 'good man' and a 'normal man' in their simplest terms.
There is action but mostly REACTION. The aftermath, the time when pieces must be picked up and somehow, someway, put back together - when hearts must be mended and some sort of compromise found.
There is angst but not in the flashy 'woe-is-me' type; Seth does not think badly of himself out of true guilt, but because he honestly BELIEVES himself to be flawed and unworthy. Rafe comes to the point of possibly giving up on everything but not because he's weak, rather because with what he's faced with would bring anyone to their knees. Again, it's the choices he makes that define who he is inside, same with Seth when he's able.
The ending was beautiful and wrapped things up nicely. Not in that 'tied-with-a-bow' type thing, just ... steady. Hopeful. Hinting at a work in progress and two souls willing to keep trying no matter what.
Normally I wait until I read a novel at least two or three times before marking it as favorite; I don't have to wait with this one, I know it will be with me for a long time.
Seth is just the kind of character I love - submissive, caring, timid at times, but practically invincible inside. No one wants to mess with him, and those that make the mistake of pushing him too far only do it once.
Rafe is the perfect matching character - Alpha, strong, loving, and willing to forgive, will to keep trying. His flaws are human but his recovery from them is the major difference that defines a 'good man' and a 'normal man' in their simplest terms.
There is action but mostly REACTION. The aftermath, the time when pieces must be picked up and somehow, someway, put back together - when hearts must be mended and some sort of compromise found.
There is angst but not in the flashy 'woe-is-me' type; Seth does not think badly of himself out of true guilt, but because he honestly BELIEVES himself to be flawed and unworthy. Rafe comes to the point of possibly giving up on everything but not because he's weak, rather because with what he's faced with would bring anyone to their knees. Again, it's the choices he makes that define who he is inside, same with Seth when he's able.
The ending was beautiful and wrapped things up nicely. Not in that 'tied-with-a-bow' type thing, just ... steady. Hopeful. Hinting at a work in progress and two souls willing to keep trying no matter what.
Normally I wait until I read a novel at least two or three times before marking it as favorite; I don't have to wait with this one, I know it will be with me for a long time.
October 28, 2016
I expect GR to start bombarding me with werewolf books recommendations now :( I don't like werewolves, I like Rowan McBride. Because in his books there is always much more than you think - more layers, more questions. This book started so... cheap horror movie-like. But somehow it turned out surprising and deep and touching. Okay, I must say I really liked Seth's dual nature (I see from some reviews people hated it). I think it was pretty clear when and why he reverted to childlike/puppy-like behavior. I also liked how he's struggling with autistic traits of his character. And Rafe was really great. Well, not at once - leaving Seth alone in a seedy bar to go for cigarettes was pretty stupid. But later he was awesome, and human, and I liked how it was not easy for him to accept Seth but he still did it.
June 28, 2015
Man this book had me hooked from beginning to end. I loved this book, I was it was a series because I would love to see more of Rafe & Seth. Seth was a shifter I hadn't read about yet and I was awe'd and wanted more. He was so sweet and cute, but when he lost it he was powerful and domineering. Loved the Bad Seth, Good Seth aspect. I wish we could have learned more about Rafe's heritage and his supernatural abilities, I felt like if we did it would have been a 5 star read for me. I really enjoyed this, still disappointed that I won't get a sequel, I feel like it shouldn't ended there.
June 8, 2009
this really was a great heartwarming story. The other reveiws do it justice.
November 13, 2012
Giving 2 stars for its originality. It's VERY original and I like it.
BUT....
It's not for me, didn't enjoy this book. And for PETER'S SAKE before a book is release with Italian phrases LET A ITALIAN READ IT. The Italian phrases are embarrassing wrong! One is a nonsense (about 'cooling the pain'!!! It CAN'T BE SAID that way!!!). Google translator is not a good source, ok?????People, please, if you are thinking in be a writer... better let a native speakers control if you decide to use phrases in other language, or it can be embarrassing, as it happen in this case.... OK????
BUT....
It's not for me, didn't enjoy this book. And for PETER'S SAKE before a book is release with Italian phrases LET A ITALIAN READ IT. The Italian phrases are embarrassing wrong! One is a nonsense (about 'cooling the pain'!!! It CAN'T BE SAID that way!!!). Google translator is not a good source, ok?????People, please, if you are thinking in be a writer... better let a native speakers control if you decide to use phrases in other language, or it can be embarrassing, as it happen in this case.... OK????
May 22, 2009
If i could give more than 5, i would have.
A wonderful story: really different from all the werewolves-story i read till now. Overwhelming emotions, beautiful dialogues.
Seth's character is so complexed but so loving. And Rafe is so true!!!
The plot is amazing and well paced.
A must read absolutely.
A wonderful story: really different from all the werewolves-story i read till now. Overwhelming emotions, beautiful dialogues.
Seth's character is so complexed but so loving. And Rafe is so true!!!
The plot is amazing and well paced.
A must read absolutely.
August 18, 2009
Lone is an interesting book with a very intriguing world created for paranormal and supernatural beings. The characters and writing are tight and solid and the book reads incredibly fast from the first scene to the end. Unfortunately, there are some problems with the book from character problems and repetition but these may or may not bother other readers. For those that enjoy well-written, creative plots with high angst, heavily melodramatic characters with a lack of any self-worth yet redeemable qualities – you may like this offering. Even with the problems I found, I enjoyed reading the book and look forward to future stories set in this creative world.
The world built is with beings called Nightkin, supernatural creatures including vampires, werewolves, warlocks, witches, and Seers. Most are born, not created, and exist with a magic imbuing them with their various powers. This magic is recognizable by all Nightkin and thus it’s handy to know who to stay away from. Of course no supernatural creation is complete without the requisite abomination and in this case these are Ravagers. Mutated beings who have more strength, cunning, and ability than their counterparts yet lack reasoning and emotion subsisting on rage and lust alone. The Ravagers are usually killed at birth or hunted mercilessly until they are killed, rarely living past twenty years.
Seth Anderson is one such Ravager, but he’s managed to elude death by constantly moving and rarely engaging unless forced and then he obliterates anyone coming after him. He certainly takes to heart the phrase “ashes to ashes and dust to dust.” He is a small, innocent looking man standing only 5’5” and lacks any strength in his human form. He’s an intelligent, shy, emotionally fragile man who has been beaten, ridiculed and hunted all his life. He has absolutely no concept of self-worth and believes totally and completely he is a monster worth destroying. Yet his own self-preservation wins and he continues to elude death and discovery by living in the middle of nowhere Ohio and rarely allowing photographs.
Rafe is a local pool house owner who’s been dating Seth for three months and declares his love on a short weeklong trip to DC. Rafe at 6’6” is attracted to Seth’s vulnerability and cute appearance, taking on the role easily as protector. Rafe has an unending supply of patience and love and even when expressing anger, remorse, and sadness he yields to Seth’s needs. The transition of thinking of Seth as his lover to knowing Seth’s supernatural side is not a hard transition for Rafe. His easy going demeanor and belief in love conquering all allow him to accept actions and facts that should send him running. Rafe is too good to be true, just as Seth is too needy but they compliment each other in their uneven relationship.
Seth is certainly a sympathetic character with his emotional and self-esteem problems. Having no concept of love or positive behavior towards him, he has trouble accepting Rafe’s constant positive comments and steadfast support. Seth always looks for the hidden meaning, the negative connotation and is quick to jump on any hint of negative reactions or fear and scorn. This does wear somewhat on the course of the story as while it’s understandable that Seth would struggle with his self worth given his past, he drags on in an angst filled and melodramatic funk creating problems and issues that Rafe has already forgiven. Seth simply can’t believe that Rafe would love him and this is the crux that takes Seth the entire novel to accept. It wears over the course of the novel and individual tastes will vary on this overused and exaggerated drama.
The plot was interesting, if basic at its core. The tension and drama almost entirely stem from Seth and his inability to accept Rafe’s love and the few additional scenes of Rafe struggling to accept Seth’s new personality. A definite problem was that once Seth’s supernatural being is exposed, he completely changes. Seth goes from an intelligent, articulate, submissive but not weak man prior to the exposure to inarticulate, fearful, dog-like behavior and emotion. Even when in his human form, Seth rarely is able to express any sort of intelligent discussion and emotion, lapsing back into repeated phrases such as “Bad Seth, Good Rafe” and dialogue that reads as if taking to a pet - “Rafe is tired. Rafe is shelter. Good Seth?” Seth then continues the trend with often submissive behavior and acting even more like a dog than previously, going so far as to be jealous of a family pet that gets Rafe’s attention. Considering how long Seth has survived with this part of his personality, able to become some rock star in the math world, it’s strange and disconcerting when he reverts back to the most simplistic and basic behavior and language. It made absolutely no sense and definitely created problems between the characters and the story. Some of this behavior was understandable but not all of it. It’s really no wonder Rafe got emotional repeatedly at the transformation from Seth as an equal lover to now a pet in the relationship.
Another problem evident were the dangling questions that were not addressed and instead the story ended abruptly with a happy ending. Seth ruminates very near the end, asking himself what he offers Rafe as Seth takes everything he needs from Rafe but offers nothing in return. This essential part of their dynamic is never addressed and there *is* no answer for what Seth offers. Seth eventually is able to say he loves Rafe, which certainly could be the answer but other than outright physical protection and loyalty this emotion still fell flat from Seth. This couple would benefit from a sequel where their dynamic is more explored and understood as the relationship grew and matured. Considering the secondary characters, especially the scene stealing Dorian, no doubt future books will give a look back on Rafe and Seth.
The tight writing and descriptive prose without overindulging in details did create an enjoyable read with interesting and fully realized characters, even if they had drawbacks. Seth’s emotional angst and melodrama ran long towards the end with the repetition of simplistic language and behavior but will definitely be a subjective aspect to the character. Seth is like a stray pet taken in and requires the same amount of patience and constant affection where even one outburst could take considerable time to get over. With this in mind, the story will either appeal or not but I enjoyed it. The author’s writing and ability to infuse emotion within the prose is wonderful and never takes the drama into the ridiculous. His world building is intriguing and will entice readers to want to read more (if that was his intent) and I look forward to more in what I hope will become a series.
The world built is with beings called Nightkin, supernatural creatures including vampires, werewolves, warlocks, witches, and Seers. Most are born, not created, and exist with a magic imbuing them with their various powers. This magic is recognizable by all Nightkin and thus it’s handy to know who to stay away from. Of course no supernatural creation is complete without the requisite abomination and in this case these are Ravagers. Mutated beings who have more strength, cunning, and ability than their counterparts yet lack reasoning and emotion subsisting on rage and lust alone. The Ravagers are usually killed at birth or hunted mercilessly until they are killed, rarely living past twenty years.
Seth Anderson is one such Ravager, but he’s managed to elude death by constantly moving and rarely engaging unless forced and then he obliterates anyone coming after him. He certainly takes to heart the phrase “ashes to ashes and dust to dust.” He is a small, innocent looking man standing only 5’5” and lacks any strength in his human form. He’s an intelligent, shy, emotionally fragile man who has been beaten, ridiculed and hunted all his life. He has absolutely no concept of self-worth and believes totally and completely he is a monster worth destroying. Yet his own self-preservation wins and he continues to elude death and discovery by living in the middle of nowhere Ohio and rarely allowing photographs.
Rafe is a local pool house owner who’s been dating Seth for three months and declares his love on a short weeklong trip to DC. Rafe at 6’6” is attracted to Seth’s vulnerability and cute appearance, taking on the role easily as protector. Rafe has an unending supply of patience and love and even when expressing anger, remorse, and sadness he yields to Seth’s needs. The transition of thinking of Seth as his lover to knowing Seth’s supernatural side is not a hard transition for Rafe. His easy going demeanor and belief in love conquering all allow him to accept actions and facts that should send him running. Rafe is too good to be true, just as Seth is too needy but they compliment each other in their uneven relationship.
Seth is certainly a sympathetic character with his emotional and self-esteem problems. Having no concept of love or positive behavior towards him, he has trouble accepting Rafe’s constant positive comments and steadfast support. Seth always looks for the hidden meaning, the negative connotation and is quick to jump on any hint of negative reactions or fear and scorn. This does wear somewhat on the course of the story as while it’s understandable that Seth would struggle with his self worth given his past, he drags on in an angst filled and melodramatic funk creating problems and issues that Rafe has already forgiven. Seth simply can’t believe that Rafe would love him and this is the crux that takes Seth the entire novel to accept. It wears over the course of the novel and individual tastes will vary on this overused and exaggerated drama.
The plot was interesting, if basic at its core. The tension and drama almost entirely stem from Seth and his inability to accept Rafe’s love and the few additional scenes of Rafe struggling to accept Seth’s new personality. A definite problem was that once Seth’s supernatural being is exposed, he completely changes. Seth goes from an intelligent, articulate, submissive but not weak man prior to the exposure to inarticulate, fearful, dog-like behavior and emotion. Even when in his human form, Seth rarely is able to express any sort of intelligent discussion and emotion, lapsing back into repeated phrases such as “Bad Seth, Good Rafe” and dialogue that reads as if taking to a pet - “Rafe is tired. Rafe is shelter. Good Seth?” Seth then continues the trend with often submissive behavior and acting even more like a dog than previously, going so far as to be jealous of a family pet that gets Rafe’s attention. Considering how long Seth has survived with this part of his personality, able to become some rock star in the math world, it’s strange and disconcerting when he reverts back to the most simplistic and basic behavior and language. It made absolutely no sense and definitely created problems between the characters and the story. Some of this behavior was understandable but not all of it. It’s really no wonder Rafe got emotional repeatedly at the transformation from Seth as an equal lover to now a pet in the relationship.
Another problem evident were the dangling questions that were not addressed and instead the story ended abruptly with a happy ending. Seth ruminates very near the end, asking himself what he offers Rafe as Seth takes everything he needs from Rafe but offers nothing in return. This essential part of their dynamic is never addressed and there *is* no answer for what Seth offers. Seth eventually is able to say he loves Rafe, which certainly could be the answer but other than outright physical protection and loyalty this emotion still fell flat from Seth. This couple would benefit from a sequel where their dynamic is more explored and understood as the relationship grew and matured. Considering the secondary characters, especially the scene stealing Dorian, no doubt future books will give a look back on Rafe and Seth.
The tight writing and descriptive prose without overindulging in details did create an enjoyable read with interesting and fully realized characters, even if they had drawbacks. Seth’s emotional angst and melodrama ran long towards the end with the repetition of simplistic language and behavior but will definitely be a subjective aspect to the character. Seth is like a stray pet taken in and requires the same amount of patience and constant affection where even one outburst could take considerable time to get over. With this in mind, the story will either appeal or not but I enjoyed it. The author’s writing and ability to infuse emotion within the prose is wonderful and never takes the drama into the ridiculous. His world building is intriguing and will entice readers to want to read more (if that was his intent) and I look forward to more in what I hope will become a series.
November 3, 2014
4.5 stars- I really enjoyed this story.
Seth is werewolf but more than that and he's been hiding his nature from Rafe, his boyfriend of 3 months. When circumstances force Seth's true nature to be revealed. Rafe must decide if fear or love win. And if it's worth it to even try.
I think that Seth is such an interesting character. He's so many different things at once. And Rafe is an amazing person. I enjoyed following the journey of Rafe as he tried to understand Seth and I I equally enjoyed Seth attempting to understand and accept himself. I would love more from these two, at least a little more about Rafe, I think there is so much to him and his family that has not yet been explored. Not that this story is incomplete, just there is another story in them- even just a short story.
Seth is werewolf but more than that and he's been hiding his nature from Rafe, his boyfriend of 3 months. When circumstances force Seth's true nature to be revealed. Rafe must decide if fear or love win. And if it's worth it to even try.
I think that Seth is such an interesting character. He's so many different things at once. And Rafe is an amazing person. I enjoyed following the journey of Rafe as he tried to understand Seth and I I equally enjoyed Seth attempting to understand and accept himself. I would love more from these two, at least a little more about Rafe, I think there is so much to him and his family that has not yet been explored. Not that this story is incomplete, just there is another story in them- even just a short story.
November 20, 2014
Lone, was a fun shifter story with a new twist on the werewolf hierarchy as I know it. The story is simple, Seth has one heck of a secret and Rafe has a big choice to make. For me Lone worked in a good silly at the same time way. I got a kick out of Seth's 'dog speak’. I know it annoyed some readers but not me. The Fight scenes were very well written and easy to visualize. Which most of the time I have no idea who hit what.
It’s the type of read you enjoy only if you’re in the right mood. Another note, Rowan MeBride has a habit of making the size of her main characters opposite and it plays a major part in her stories. That can become predictable and boring so this was an interesting and intriguing turn of events.
It’s the type of read you enjoy only if you’re in the right mood. Another note, Rowan MeBride has a habit of making the size of her main characters opposite and it plays a major part in her stories. That can become predictable and boring so this was an interesting and intriguing turn of events.
May 13, 2009
In parts I felt the narrative was a little choppy and needed to be a little tighter. But, for all that I enjoyed the read. Much, much angst and the smex between the two main characters is freakin hot and well worth a read. I think it was the difference in size and body type that nailed it for me. Merow.
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April 28, 2012
I love this book!! There was one part made my eyes sting but after that its happily everafter!! No cheating, no angsty and no girly bits.. Just the way I luv it!!!
March 18, 2018
Rating: 5 stars
I loved this book. Once I started reading it, I couldn’t put it down. I really liked that Rafe and Seth were a pre-existing couple. I liked that this was a different take on the shifter genre. Both Rafe and Seth were wonderful as the MCs. I really liked the dichotomy of Seth’s nature. Once minute submissive and the next aggressive. I loved the fact that Rafe struggled to accept Seth’s other nature. So many shifter novels are insta-love and insta-acceptance, that it was a nice change to have an MC struggle.
I thought the story itself was very good. If I had one complaint, it would be that I wanted to read more about the other Nightkin. This world fascinated me, and I wanted to read more about it. At the time of this review the book is currently not being offered in e-book format. I really hope it becomes available again because I highly recommend it.
I loved this book. Once I started reading it, I couldn’t put it down. I really liked that Rafe and Seth were a pre-existing couple. I liked that this was a different take on the shifter genre. Both Rafe and Seth were wonderful as the MCs. I really liked the dichotomy of Seth’s nature. Once minute submissive and the next aggressive. I loved the fact that Rafe struggled to accept Seth’s other nature. So many shifter novels are insta-love and insta-acceptance, that it was a nice change to have an MC struggle.
I thought the story itself was very good. If I had one complaint, it would be that I wanted to read more about the other Nightkin. This world fascinated me, and I wanted to read more about it. At the time of this review the book is currently not being offered in e-book format. I really hope it becomes available again because I highly recommend it.
April 4, 2014
Seth is more than a werewolf—he’s a Ravager, an abomination, and the Nightkin Council has him marked for death. Nightkins are those with supernatural powers: werewolves, vampires, witches, warlocks. His boyfriend Rafe loves him, against all odds— against all sanity, Rafe loves him! But Ravagers cannot love, they only feel lust and rage, and though he wants to be with Rafe, he can’t begin to tell him about his true nature.
But, while accompanying Seth to DC for a series of lectures Seth is delivering at Georgetown University, Rafe finds out more about Seth than he ever expected. For one thing, he finds out that his quiet and unassuming Iowa college professor boyfriend is a world-renowned math genius with articles published in over a hundred journals. For another, he finds out about Seth’s true nature, the hard way, when he witnesses an attack on Seth by an entire pack of werewolves. Seth is driven by one thought—he must defend Rafe against all odds, and that brings forth the Ravager and drives him into a blood lust that doesn’t end until the entire pack is down.
Amazingly Rafe stays with Seth, trying to understand and find answers so that he can begin to come to terms with Seth’s true nature, even though his fear is easily detectable by Seth’s enhanced senses and may trigger the Ravager change. His love and strength give Seth a reason for trying to change, trying to fit in and be more human, and when they go to meet Rafe’s family, Seth feels a part of a pack, a feeling he’s never known before. Seth has always been lone, totally and completely isolated. These strange urges and feelings he’s developing for Rafe are very new and frightening, but he fights his instinct to flee and agrees to try to stay with Rafe until Rafe decides it’s time for him to leave.
The story is very intriguing, with a different take on the werewolf/vampire community. I really liked watching the relationship develop between these men and seeing Seth’s progress from total isolation to finally being a part of a family. The ups and downs, the attacks on both men, and the final confrontation with Hunters were all riveting, and I thoroughly enjoyed the way the author wrapped up the story in both a reasonable and satisfying outcome.
If you like vampires and werewolves, try this one. I’m not a huge fan of them but I do like to see damaged characters begin to heal and this story certainly delivers on that premise so it’s definitely one I enjoyed so much I’ll re-read it again in the future.
But, while accompanying Seth to DC for a series of lectures Seth is delivering at Georgetown University, Rafe finds out more about Seth than he ever expected. For one thing, he finds out that his quiet and unassuming Iowa college professor boyfriend is a world-renowned math genius with articles published in over a hundred journals. For another, he finds out about Seth’s true nature, the hard way, when he witnesses an attack on Seth by an entire pack of werewolves. Seth is driven by one thought—he must defend Rafe against all odds, and that brings forth the Ravager and drives him into a blood lust that doesn’t end until the entire pack is down.
Amazingly Rafe stays with Seth, trying to understand and find answers so that he can begin to come to terms with Seth’s true nature, even though his fear is easily detectable by Seth’s enhanced senses and may trigger the Ravager change. His love and strength give Seth a reason for trying to change, trying to fit in and be more human, and when they go to meet Rafe’s family, Seth feels a part of a pack, a feeling he’s never known before. Seth has always been lone, totally and completely isolated. These strange urges and feelings he’s developing for Rafe are very new and frightening, but he fights his instinct to flee and agrees to try to stay with Rafe until Rafe decides it’s time for him to leave.
The story is very intriguing, with a different take on the werewolf/vampire community. I really liked watching the relationship develop between these men and seeing Seth’s progress from total isolation to finally being a part of a family. The ups and downs, the attacks on both men, and the final confrontation with Hunters were all riveting, and I thoroughly enjoyed the way the author wrapped up the story in both a reasonable and satisfying outcome.
If you like vampires and werewolves, try this one. I’m not a huge fan of them but I do like to see damaged characters begin to heal and this story certainly delivers on that premise so it’s definitely one I enjoyed so much I’ll re-read it again in the future.
November 7, 2010
4.5 stars
I really, really, really liked this story. It is rare to find a unique wolf shifter m/m story these days. Yet, Rowan managed to pen a tale that is not only unique but very touching.
Seth is a more than just a werewolf. His nature makes him so strong and volatile that he is considered a danger that must be eradicated, even by Nightkin standards. Somehow he has managed to not only survive but thrive professionally in the human world. Yet, he remains Lone, no pack, no family, no love... until he meets Rafe. It takes a special man to love a Ravager, and Rafe is just right for the role.
Rowan gives Seth a gorgeous mixture of strength and innocence. His wolf nature is close to the surface, lending him a very primal aura that allows him to go from wounded puppy to violent beast in the blink of an eye without losing his inherent goodness. Rafe is a reluctant alpha, drawn to Seth like moth to the flame not sure of to get truly close without getting burned. If sometimes Rafe's infinite patience seems a bit much, the revelations at the end of the story explain this aspect of his personality to a great extent.
The plot strikes just the right balance between building the relationship between Seth and Rafe and keeping the action moving at a nice pace. There are couple of fantastic secondary characters that truly add richness to the story. There's a certain vampire just intriguing enough to leave me wanting more. More please! Rowan's world building is amazing. She sketches the world like a master, providing a rich image with just a few deft strokes here and there. I admire the author's ability to create a world and provide context in a way that is never heavy handed and does not detract from the romance. Awesome job!
This book is literally going right into my keeper shelf. I highly recommend it for all m/m readers who love a good romance with lots of tenderness and just the right amount of spice thrown in for good measure. Enjoy!
I really, really, really liked this story. It is rare to find a unique wolf shifter m/m story these days. Yet, Rowan managed to pen a tale that is not only unique but very touching.
Seth is a more than just a werewolf. His nature makes him so strong and volatile that he is considered a danger that must be eradicated, even by Nightkin standards. Somehow he has managed to not only survive but thrive professionally in the human world. Yet, he remains Lone, no pack, no family, no love... until he meets Rafe. It takes a special man to love a Ravager, and Rafe is just right for the role.
Rowan gives Seth a gorgeous mixture of strength and innocence. His wolf nature is close to the surface, lending him a very primal aura that allows him to go from wounded puppy to violent beast in the blink of an eye without losing his inherent goodness. Rafe is a reluctant alpha, drawn to Seth like moth to the flame not sure of to get truly close without getting burned. If sometimes Rafe's infinite patience seems a bit much, the revelations at the end of the story explain this aspect of his personality to a great extent.
The plot strikes just the right balance between building the relationship between Seth and Rafe and keeping the action moving at a nice pace. There are couple of fantastic secondary characters that truly add richness to the story. There's a certain vampire just intriguing enough to leave me wanting more. More please! Rowan's world building is amazing. She sketches the world like a master, providing a rich image with just a few deft strokes here and there. I admire the author's ability to create a world and provide context in a way that is never heavy handed and does not detract from the romance. Awesome job!
This book is literally going right into my keeper shelf. I highly recommend it for all m/m readers who love a good romance with lots of tenderness and just the right amount of spice thrown in for good measure. Enjoy!
September 16, 2009
I truly enjoyed this book.
Seth Anderson altered many aspects of life to keep the inner beast at bay. He may even have eluded the hunters, found the ideal front--the perfect refuge--in Rafe Dirisio's arms in Brier, Iowa. Until Rafe, Seth's Human, is threatened, and the Scavenger, and surprisingly an Alpha, is released from within Seth and with a vengeance. With hunters hot on Seth's trail all Rafe longs for is a slice of normal. But nothing in the life of a hybrid Were is ever--normal.
Marketed as angsty, Lone is rather an intense read. But despite my distaste for angst-filled plots, I don't think the description does McBride's book justice. Lone is action-packed, as well as romantic--wonderfully so.
Being a hybrid, and hunted mercilessly simply because of this, Seth symbolizes all those shunned in society, misfits, oddballs, and the like. Not once, did I feel his characterization as sometimes naive, his want to cower, or his need to cry constituted angst. Seth is not a victim, but he is afraid at times. His power rivals that of superheroes, yet he remains humble. No. Seth Anderson is the epitome of beauty.
And Rafe is the perfect man for Seth.
I'd highlight all the excitement, suspense, conflict, and the funny, hot, and more often than not, awkward lovemaking, but I'd spoil the story. Let's just say, once I started reading, I couldn't put the book down. Besides, what you really want to know is if Lone broke through my tough exterior, don't you? I confess. Seth and Rafe's romance gripped my heart and squeezed until I cried. Happy now?
Lone is a book I will read again and again.
Seth Anderson altered many aspects of life to keep the inner beast at bay. He may even have eluded the hunters, found the ideal front--the perfect refuge--in Rafe Dirisio's arms in Brier, Iowa. Until Rafe, Seth's Human, is threatened, and the Scavenger, and surprisingly an Alpha, is released from within Seth and with a vengeance. With hunters hot on Seth's trail all Rafe longs for is a slice of normal. But nothing in the life of a hybrid Were is ever--normal.
Marketed as angsty, Lone is rather an intense read. But despite my distaste for angst-filled plots, I don't think the description does McBride's book justice. Lone is action-packed, as well as romantic--wonderfully so.
Being a hybrid, and hunted mercilessly simply because of this, Seth symbolizes all those shunned in society, misfits, oddballs, and the like. Not once, did I feel his characterization as sometimes naive, his want to cower, or his need to cry constituted angst. Seth is not a victim, but he is afraid at times. His power rivals that of superheroes, yet he remains humble. No. Seth Anderson is the epitome of beauty.
And Rafe is the perfect man for Seth.
I'd highlight all the excitement, suspense, conflict, and the funny, hot, and more often than not, awkward lovemaking, but I'd spoil the story. Let's just say, once I started reading, I couldn't put the book down. Besides, what you really want to know is if Lone broke through my tough exterior, don't you? I confess. Seth and Rafe's romance gripped my heart and squeezed until I cried. Happy now?
Lone is a book I will read again and again.
October 21, 2012
This is slightly different take on the world of shapeshifters and vampires, and the originality of it is definitely appealing.
Seth is Nightkin, part of the preternatural world made up of werewolves, vampires, warlocks and seers, yet for reasons best left unsaid (spoilers!), he has always been on the outside of that world, so when he finally feels safe in a relationship with Rafe, he begins, finally, to have a little hope for his future.
Rafe is totally ignorant of the realities of Seth's life. It is not until they travel from Brier, the little town where Seth came to live, and where he met Rafe, to travel to DC so that Seth can give a series of lectures, that Rafe realizes just how little he knows about his lover of three months. Events occur in DC that bring the truth about Seth rushing to the surface, and Rafe, as well as Seth, have to decide whether the truth will destroy their relationship or not.
Seth is an interesting character, if somewhat sad, but Rafe's characters is 'brave, good, noble and kind.' The disparities between the two men are obvious, not just in their physical differences, but in their intellectual and emotional lives too. Yet somehow, the two men seem to fit each other perfectly - even if it takes a bit of time for not only the reader to see it, but the characters themselves.
This is definitely taking a look at, particularly if you like new takes on an old theme, and don't mind a bit of angst in your shifter stories.
Seth is Nightkin, part of the preternatural world made up of werewolves, vampires, warlocks and seers, yet for reasons best left unsaid (spoilers!), he has always been on the outside of that world, so when he finally feels safe in a relationship with Rafe, he begins, finally, to have a little hope for his future.
Rafe is totally ignorant of the realities of Seth's life. It is not until they travel from Brier, the little town where Seth came to live, and where he met Rafe, to travel to DC so that Seth can give a series of lectures, that Rafe realizes just how little he knows about his lover of three months. Events occur in DC that bring the truth about Seth rushing to the surface, and Rafe, as well as Seth, have to decide whether the truth will destroy their relationship or not.
Seth is an interesting character, if somewhat sad, but Rafe's characters is 'brave, good, noble and kind.' The disparities between the two men are obvious, not just in their physical differences, but in their intellectual and emotional lives too. Yet somehow, the two men seem to fit each other perfectly - even if it takes a bit of time for not only the reader to see it, but the characters themselves.
This is definitely taking a look at, particularly if you like new takes on an old theme, and don't mind a bit of angst in your shifter stories.
June 8, 2012
I read this book for my very first "challenge" book and it was quite something. I have a few things I will say about it...
It is not your typical shifter story - it is really unique - there is a lot of love and angst and all sorts of confusion going on here. Seth is a wolf who is a "ravager" that means a shifter who can't shift completely and is shunned by the magic world for being an abomination. He is scary and ruthless but the love of Rafe (his partner of 3 months) is what makes him special. Seth has gone a long time without anyone loving him or accepting him and this is the story of how the two make it all work. It's strong and intense and not your typical shifter love tale.
So if you are looking for something unique - you can find it here.
It is not your typical shifter story - it is really unique - there is a lot of love and angst and all sorts of confusion going on here. Seth is a wolf who is a "ravager" that means a shifter who can't shift completely and is shunned by the magic world for being an abomination. He is scary and ruthless but the love of Rafe (his partner of 3 months) is what makes him special. Seth has gone a long time without anyone loving him or accepting him and this is the story of how the two make it all work. It's strong and intense and not your typical shifter love tale.
So if you are looking for something unique - you can find it here.
October 3, 2015
Nice take on shifters and vampires and a paranormal world. Really hated the way he speaks like an idiot when he's a werewolf--presumably because he's half animal--but he reasons like a human being during that time and the way he talks is inconsistent. It was heartbreaking at points but beautiful. I loved the story and the characters. there was a dubcon moment I didn't care for but most people probably wouldn't even notice. Needed more names and fewer pronouns--many times it was confusing who was speaking and I had to figure it out. I loved that Rafe didn't just accept everything and needed an adjustment period. It was natural and believable.
Overall, good story, well written, believable and likeable characters. An excellent read. 4.5 stars rounded down because of the baby talking.
Overall, good story, well written, believable and likeable characters. An excellent read. 4.5 stars rounded down because of the baby talking.
January 7, 2012
A werewolf story with a twist. I really liked the dynamics between Rafe and Seth. Rafe is big and strong and noble and brave...according to Seth and Seth is just lone, alone and lonely....seriously heartbreaking. It is really hard to review this without givin anything away...i keep writing and erasing. So i guess the best i can do is say read it, its good and its worth it. I am really surprised that i have not heard more about one. I really liked and read it in one day.
April 7, 2019
Great
4.25 ⭐️
I really enjoyed Seth and Rafe’s story, and I like this authors take on the paranormal world. It felt really different from what I usually read in regards to the paranormal world.
It’s great seeing Seth grow during the book and to understand his feelings. I also enjoyed that Rafe was scared of Seth at the start, and it wasn’t an immediate acceptance.
I would love to read more from this world
4.25 ⭐️
I really enjoyed Seth and Rafe’s story, and I like this authors take on the paranormal world. It felt really different from what I usually read in regards to the paranormal world.
It’s great seeing Seth grow during the book and to understand his feelings. I also enjoyed that Rafe was scared of Seth at the start, and it wasn’t an immediate acceptance.
I would love to read more from this world
May 16, 2014
The world-building was interesting..I really would have liked to read more about it. I liked both of the heroes. Overall, the author did a nice job of combining solid characterization, steaminess and a nice plot. This was an easy, engaging read..and it left me wanting just a tad more. A nice epilogue..or a deeper discussion of the dynamics of the heroes' relationship.
October 25, 2015
2009 Rainbow Awards Honorable Mention (5* from at least 1 judge)
November 12, 2009
I loved, loved, loved this book. Really do recommend it.
September 18, 2010
First, the good. The writing is, for the most part, stellar, both in a technical sense and an artistic one. There are some particular exceptions -- lazy description of the fight scene as "like The Matrix", forced and stilted dialogues to facilitate infodumps, and frequently confusing pronoun use -- but in general, the emotions come through strongly, and the narrative is cohesive. I would definitely look for more selections from this author.
Now, that said, I did not like this book. For one thing, the character of Seth never clicked with me. For all his advanced learning, he repeatedly demonstrates the emotional maturity of a child. There is an attempt made at explaining it, but it rang hollow with me because it was incongruous with everything we're shown of Seth up to that point. It's difficult for me to imagine someone that self-deprecating with that low a self-esteem achieving all the things that Seth has achieved. While I can appreciate a less than confident lead in a m/m romance, it does become tedious when the character hates themselves all the time and allows themselves to be constantly used as a door-mat.
On the other hand, I wasn't that crazy about Rafe's character, either. As the story moves on, his discomfort at the situation simply grows and grows, yet he continues to accede to Seth's wishes. He never seems to come to a satisfactory place mentally with that, either, so I simply see a desperately unhappy man in a codependent relationship with a growing resentment over his situation. And that is not, to me, a satisfying place to leave a romantic lead at the end of a story. (Frankly, my favorite character in the entire book was Dorian, but that may just be because I have a soft spot for witty, sarcastic vampires.)
The sex scenes were another place of discomfort. Anal sex without proper lubricants never fails to take me right out of the story. (And no, saliva does not count as a proper lubricant.) Beyond the mechanics, though, there was an element of uncertain -- if not outright withdrawn -- consent that peppered the scenes, and that also pushes buttons for me. Sex should not be used as a replacement for love and want and reassurance, and yet in this story, it seems to be used that way repeatedly.
Finally, the worldbuilding on the whole left something to be desired. We're told all about Ravagers and how horribly mindless and vicious they are, but we never actually see any evidence of this, and that makes the whole thing fall flat. The only Ravager in the story is Seth, and he is somehow a Special Snowflake thanks to the power of "twoo wuv" such that we only see him lashing out in self defense, which belies the mindlessness we're led to picture. As a result, how he managed to survive for so long prior to meeting Rafe is questionable at best, and the explanation for that is similarly insufficient. Much of the Nightkin society we're told about is introduced far too late into the narrative to have any real impact. There are many places in the story where the plot drags in order to achieve maximum angst which could have been tightened up to make room for additional plot points to allow the more dynamic worldbuilding to have become relevant.
I wonder if this book is intended to be the first in a series of Nightkin books. I would actually be in favor of this because it would give a chance for the worldbuilding to really shine as long as the author focuses tightly on one particular aspect at a time and delves deeply, instead of glossing over too much all at once, as was done in this book. For instance, was it really necessary to explain that Ravager warlock babies explode? It contributed nothing to the storyline, but did make me giggle madly at the image. (I'm... not sure I should have admitted to that.) There is definitely potential in the world for some really excellent stories, though, and I hope the author explores those in the future.
Unfortunately, for this book, the things I did like were overshadowed by the things I didn't. But that may have simply been this story, because as I stated, the author's writing style was very good overall. I will definitely be taking notice of his future releases, though, and I do hope we haven't seen the last of the Nightkin world.
Now, that said, I did not like this book. For one thing, the character of Seth never clicked with me. For all his advanced learning, he repeatedly demonstrates the emotional maturity of a child. There is an attempt made at explaining it, but it rang hollow with me because it was incongruous with everything we're shown of Seth up to that point. It's difficult for me to imagine someone that self-deprecating with that low a self-esteem achieving all the things that Seth has achieved. While I can appreciate a less than confident lead in a m/m romance, it does become tedious when the character hates themselves all the time and allows themselves to be constantly used as a door-mat.
On the other hand, I wasn't that crazy about Rafe's character, either. As the story moves on, his discomfort at the situation simply grows and grows, yet he continues to accede to Seth's wishes. He never seems to come to a satisfactory place mentally with that, either, so I simply see a desperately unhappy man in a codependent relationship with a growing resentment over his situation. And that is not, to me, a satisfying place to leave a romantic lead at the end of a story. (Frankly, my favorite character in the entire book was Dorian, but that may just be because I have a soft spot for witty, sarcastic vampires.)
The sex scenes were another place of discomfort. Anal sex without proper lubricants never fails to take me right out of the story. (And no, saliva does not count as a proper lubricant.) Beyond the mechanics, though, there was an element of uncertain -- if not outright withdrawn -- consent that peppered the scenes, and that also pushes buttons for me. Sex should not be used as a replacement for love and want and reassurance, and yet in this story, it seems to be used that way repeatedly.
Finally, the worldbuilding on the whole left something to be desired. We're told all about Ravagers and how horribly mindless and vicious they are, but we never actually see any evidence of this, and that makes the whole thing fall flat. The only Ravager in the story is Seth, and he is somehow a Special Snowflake thanks to the power of "twoo wuv" such that we only see him lashing out in self defense, which belies the mindlessness we're led to picture. As a result, how he managed to survive for so long prior to meeting Rafe is questionable at best, and the explanation for that is similarly insufficient. Much of the Nightkin society we're told about is introduced far too late into the narrative to have any real impact. There are many places in the story where the plot drags in order to achieve maximum angst which could have been tightened up to make room for additional plot points to allow the more dynamic worldbuilding to have become relevant.
I wonder if this book is intended to be the first in a series of Nightkin books. I would actually be in favor of this because it would give a chance for the worldbuilding to really shine as long as the author focuses tightly on one particular aspect at a time and delves deeply, instead of glossing over too much all at once, as was done in this book. For instance, was it really necessary to explain that Ravager warlock babies explode? It contributed nothing to the storyline, but did make me giggle madly at the image. (I'm... not sure I should have admitted to that.) There is definitely potential in the world for some really excellent stories, though, and I hope the author explores those in the future.
Unfortunately, for this book, the things I did like were overshadowed by the things I didn't. But that may have simply been this story, because as I stated, the author's writing style was very good overall. I will definitely be taking notice of his future releases, though, and I do hope we haven't seen the last of the Nightkin world.
September 18, 2010
This story came recommended to me, but as I read, I couldn't find too much that I really enjoyed in it. Nevertheless, here are a few pros and cons and my general impression of the book.
Pros:
Background of Nightkin – Though I was given peeks instead of full-blown world-building, the Nightkin concept was interesting in that it involved four different creatures that were born instead of 'made' or infected in some way to become different than humans. Warlocks, seers, vampires, and werewolves make up the Nightkin, and I liked that they might have their disagreements, but they weren't truly at war with one another. It was also interesting that their magic interfered with modern technology. I would have liked to have seen that explored to a greater depth. The concept of the Ravager made sense when it was explained and had great potential, though I don't think the full potential was realized in the melodramatic Seth.
Dorian – A minor character, a vampire with dry wit that had a tendency of reading my mind as I made my way through the book. Dorian always seemed to comment on issues that I was grumbling to myself, which made for an instant connection. Whenever he would show up, I'd perk up and smile a bit while reading. His background was a bit more compelling than the other characters, and he was simply a joy to read about, especially from a dialogue standpoint.
Cons:
Pronoun issues – Perhaps it's just me, but there was a lot of confusion that came from an overabundance of pronouns in the narrative. There were times when I truly couldn't tell whose point of view the scene was written in or who was doing what because 'he' and 'his' and 'him' were all used instead of the character's names. While it might seem small to most, it really bothered me and made the ease of reading plummet to the depths.
Overabundance of angst – Seth's character seemed to do little more than angst himself to pieces in most scenes. In fact, there were several scenes I felt could have been shortened or cut completely because they felt like gratuitous angst rather than plot advancement or character development.
Sex squicks – There were moments in the sex scenes that were enjoyable, but there were a couple problems that pulled me right out of the action for every single one. First was the lack of proper lubrication. Spit and pre-ejaculate aren't lubricants, and the thought of Rafe being taken by his beasty lover with nothing to ease the way, especially when we're given the impression that Rafe has never wanted to bottom in their relationship, just made me cringe. The second was the way Seth in Ravager form forced sex on Rafe. Yes, Rafe consents, but it's clear he's terrified at the time and doesn't see saying 'no' as any sort of option. It read like coercion for me, so I didn't find it in the least bit erotic. Having it described as the best orgasm Rafe ever had with my impression of coercion and the clear lack of lube was too much of a stretch for me.
Overall Impression:
While the world had potential, I felt it wasn't realized in Seth's story. I felt this story could have been half the length and been more enjoyable for it. There were moments that were delightful to read, but they tended to gravitate around minor characters like Dorian or Xuan (the little girl on the plane), and that just wasn't enough to satisfy my desire to see this world come alive on the pages. The romance didn't engage me.
These are just my opinions, as I know there are other readers who would enjoy the high angst content, and some of my squiks may not apply to others. If some sort of related work comes out featuring Dorian, I would very likely give it a go, since he was truly a lovely character.
2 stars (out of 5)
Pros:
Background of Nightkin – Though I was given peeks instead of full-blown world-building, the Nightkin concept was interesting in that it involved four different creatures that were born instead of 'made' or infected in some way to become different than humans. Warlocks, seers, vampires, and werewolves make up the Nightkin, and I liked that they might have their disagreements, but they weren't truly at war with one another. It was also interesting that their magic interfered with modern technology. I would have liked to have seen that explored to a greater depth. The concept of the Ravager made sense when it was explained and had great potential, though I don't think the full potential was realized in the melodramatic Seth.
Dorian – A minor character, a vampire with dry wit that had a tendency of reading my mind as I made my way through the book. Dorian always seemed to comment on issues that I was grumbling to myself, which made for an instant connection. Whenever he would show up, I'd perk up and smile a bit while reading. His background was a bit more compelling than the other characters, and he was simply a joy to read about, especially from a dialogue standpoint.
Cons:
Pronoun issues – Perhaps it's just me, but there was a lot of confusion that came from an overabundance of pronouns in the narrative. There were times when I truly couldn't tell whose point of view the scene was written in or who was doing what because 'he' and 'his' and 'him' were all used instead of the character's names. While it might seem small to most, it really bothered me and made the ease of reading plummet to the depths.
Overabundance of angst – Seth's character seemed to do little more than angst himself to pieces in most scenes. In fact, there were several scenes I felt could have been shortened or cut completely because they felt like gratuitous angst rather than plot advancement or character development.
Sex squicks – There were moments in the sex scenes that were enjoyable, but there were a couple problems that pulled me right out of the action for every single one. First was the lack of proper lubrication. Spit and pre-ejaculate aren't lubricants, and the thought of Rafe being taken by his beasty lover with nothing to ease the way, especially when we're given the impression that Rafe has never wanted to bottom in their relationship, just made me cringe. The second was the way Seth in Ravager form forced sex on Rafe. Yes, Rafe consents, but it's clear he's terrified at the time and doesn't see saying 'no' as any sort of option. It read like coercion for me, so I didn't find it in the least bit erotic. Having it described as the best orgasm Rafe ever had with my impression of coercion and the clear lack of lube was too much of a stretch for me.
Overall Impression:
While the world had potential, I felt it wasn't realized in Seth's story. I felt this story could have been half the length and been more enjoyable for it. There were moments that were delightful to read, but they tended to gravitate around minor characters like Dorian or Xuan (the little girl on the plane), and that just wasn't enough to satisfy my desire to see this world come alive on the pages. The romance didn't engage me.
These are just my opinions, as I know there are other readers who would enjoy the high angst content, and some of my squiks may not apply to others. If some sort of related work comes out featuring Dorian, I would very likely give it a go, since he was truly a lovely character.
2 stars (out of 5)
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