I was so pleased to win a copy of this book through a Goodreads giveaway. I've worked in academic research most of my career, had opportunities to support entrepreneurs launching start-ups from different technologies and with very different outcomes, and I thought this was right in my wheelhouse.
It's a 2.5 for me, generously rounded up. Even though it isn't a terribly long book, I feel like I've been reading it forever. Here's why:
This shouldn't have been written as fiction.
If it must be written as fiction - I did read the Afterword (and every word) - then partner with a co-writer or editor who can make it good fiction.
We spend the entire book in Ren's head, and that isn't a very interesting place to be. Even the alleged dialog reads as Ren relating his recollection of the conversations. People don't speak this way. The narrative is so unfocused and redundant, it's easy to see why Ren has difficulty developing a business model and writing a business plan. The characters get names, but they are so undefined, they don't really matter. Tiffany is particularly flat. In the last 80 or so pages, David and Ren finally develop a little bit of personality. Had I not committed to provide a review, I would have DNFed this much earlier.
There are some outstanding nuggets in here, not just for business entrepreneurs, but for anyone managing people in any setting. I have little doubt that a sharper set of vignettes would have conveyed these lessons in a compelling way, even in the crowded market of business guides. As written, the narrative is so tortured and the character behavior made so erratic to force the lessons, it's tedious reading.
With some refined storytelling, the author's idea of imparting business lessons by getting readers to feel like they are living some of the start-up experience might work. Please, whoever you are, if you DO choose to write a sequel, follow your own advice and find a partner with complementary expertise in fiction writing. Or at least an editor who is as brutal as your mentor to get the best out of you.