This is the first Daniel Steel that I've read, and I am quite disappointed.
I liked the concept, because it's fresh on my part. A diversion from my usual lawsuits, medical drama, mystery and fantasy things... This time I gambled on a romantic side.
The sweet part here is that Steel colored American family differently from what the "usual American family" is. In "Rogue", the divorced couple became friends, in fact, they seemed best friends. The premise there is "opposites do attract", a playful, childlike husband and a grown-up, committed wife. The marriage didn't work out not because of adultery or, they fell out of love nor they are financially unstable, but because they were growing up, have kids and became parents. The thing is, the husband, Blake, didn't. He hasn't been seen when he was needed the most. In other words, he is an invisible father and a husband.
It was actually well-written,
if only... Daniel Steel didn't overemphasize Blake's absences and irresponsibilities, his being playful and big name in the dot-com world. It sounds redundant already when she kept on repeating the details why Max let him go. I wanted to skips those instances, because it resulted into tedium.
if only... Daniel Steel crafted a different ending. It was really a slouch, the ending I mean. The reunion of the protagonists was a great and welcoming idea to the readers, but how it was written, I thought otherwise.
Over all, I want to read more Steel, but this time, hoping her words will be more interesting and her plot, more tight, unpredictable and rich.