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Meeting a hot Hollywood heartthrob might be a dream come true for some. But for me, it was an absolute nightmare.

A nightmare that I didn’t want, especially during the holidays.

I knew it was over for me when I gazed into Nick’s eyes at that Hollywood party.
I instantly regretted my decision to come to LA, and I was right…
Spending the night with the playboy led to trouble.
A blackmailer that had inappropriate photos of me.
I was absolutely clueless on how to handle the situation.
And meanwhile, my heart ached for Nick.
I didn’t think I’d see him again.

Until…

He asked me to fly back and pretend to be his girlfriend.
It was an offer of a lifetime.
Not because of the fame, but the money.

But a fake relationship turning into something real also meant that I would have to come clean.
And I was hiding a huge secret from him.

Actually, two secrets…

That Christmas was going to reveal huge surprises… but was Nick ready for the shock of his life?

284 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 16, 2022

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Profile Image for ☆☆Hannah☆☆.
3,182 reviews46 followers
January 1, 2023
This was a good read. Kayla was visiting her cousins in California. They take her to a party. This is where she meets Nick. They hit it off until a misunderstanding happens and someone decides to blackmail her. Luckily in the end everything works out and they get their happy ending.
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702 reviews8 followers
November 26, 2023
Una historia muy bonita y rápida de leer ya que te tiene enganchada desde la primera página.
Cómo una chica que no ha salido nunca de casa siempre a estado protegida por su madre decide irse a los ángeles y descubre una vida que no se espera.
No todo es fácil en su camino.
866 reviews10 followers
January 6, 2023
Turning a Role of Protector into a Reality of Love

Sweet, lush Kayla Gotlieb, 24-year-old, an online-college graduate, with amazing blue eyes and long auburn hair, had a gentle nature that made her vulnerable to the machinations of individuals—both friends and family—who saw her an easy mark designed for manipulation. And, as an only child growing up with a mom who was forced to be overly strong and unfortunately controlling, after the early death of her husband, Kayla had become a pleaser, an individual who would willing yield her choice to the will of others to keep the peace.

So, when Kayla is offered the opportunity to travel to Los Angeles to stay with her uncle Dave and his adult children, Gabe and Jessie, for 3 weeks, leaving all she known as familiar and safe behind, she jumps at the chance. Surprising and angering her mom, Kayla grabs the opportunity to break out of her narrow, controlled world—even for less than a month. The trip was a chance she could not turn down. She had not been allowed to travel beyond mom’s close watch even to participate of the high school band.

And for sweet Kayla, the trip to LA was everything and more that the overly protect young woman had imagined. While she knew that her stay would be brief, the experience would offer her an independence that she had experienced. But what the inexperienced and naïve young woman was that she was walking into a houseful of relatives who were strangers and who didn’t necessarily have Kayla best interests as central.

But Kayla does experience more than she had anticipated of a world very different from her predictable, mundane existence. Starting with a Hollywood Halloween costume party promising to feature known actors—both male and female—the innocent young woman, has been attired as the female lead character Ishtaria from a popular series Lions of Medea in an uncomfortably revealing dress that exposes her lush figure to unwanted attention and comment. Innocent and modest Kayla is thrown into a world she neither understands—nor one in which she wants to be a part. And, she is set up by the people who should be protecting her—her cousins—to be abused and humiliated.

However, one man, Nick Sadler, a 38-year-old handsome actor with thick dark hair and a big sculpted body sees beauty, grace and innocence in the form and actions of the unknown woman dressed as his TV character’s love, Ishtaria. Nick, who has broken through the highest levels of popularity in a TV series for two and a half seasons as Mithrandes of Lions of Medea and who is under currently under consideration to play Captain Tony Peale, AKA Captain Wonder, sees the beautiful, innocent and finds the naïve young woman enchanting. And, when she falls victim to the misdeeds and viciousness of unknown others, Nick willingly steps in to offer his assistance and attention.

Ava Gray creates a tale of secrets and withheld information that totter to near disaster, but which ultimately lead to love. I received this romance through BookSprout, but also bought a copy for my Kindle collection.
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1,336 reviews25 followers
December 30, 2022
Hot Mess: Part of Alpha Billionaire series. An age gap story, opposite attracts romance, insta-lust, and a fake relationship story. A standalone full-length romance complete with a satisfying happily-ever-after. It's brilliantly written with extraordinary characters and a fascinating storyline that captures the audience from the beginning until the end. This is Kayla and Nick story. Nick is a famous Hollywood hot heartthrob he goes to a Halloween party dressed as the character he portray in his movie in hopes that he will not be recognized. Kayla is small town young woman twenty four years old, and very sheltered of the ways of the world because of very strict mom who over the top. Therefore, when her uncle who lives in Los Angeles extend an invitation for her to come out for a visit she jumped at the chance to get away from her mom for a while.
Once she got there she could hardly believe her luck that she was going to Halloween party where Hollywood celebrities will also be at. What she thought was a reprieve and some freedom away from her mom turned out to be a nightmare because her cousin and friend was horrible to her. They forced her to dress in a scantly and provocative then leave her alone to her guise once they get to party. Kayla went to use restroom and was accosted by a creepy guy and her dress got tore and Nick came to her rescue. They spend the night together and the chemistry was explosive. As they talk Nick could not believe that she didn't recognize him and that she had seen any of his movies before. She's the girl of his dream. She's beautiful, sweet, curvy and funny. Nick is handsome, rich and Hollywood's playboy. Kayla thought that spending the night with a playboy led to trouble. Someone took a picture of her embarrassing encounter and decides to blackmail her. Kayla decides to ends her trip abruptly one week early. Nick is so fascinated by and especially since the studio has been pressuring him into having consistent partner who can attends industry parties and events. The first person that came to his mind was Kayla, to be his fake industry companion.
When Kayla got the call to come back to Los Angeles to be Nick pretend girlfriend she jumped at the chance in order to pay the blackmailer. It was an offer of a lifetime not because of the fame, but the money. The more time that they spend together Nick want her for real. Kayla is a little out of her depth as she had never had relationship before. Their fake relationship is turning into something real which meant that she would have to come clean with the huge secret that she's hiding from him. Kayla is harboring not one secret but two. How will Nick take? The story is filled with suspense, drama, secrets, blackmail, pain, lust, revelations, surprises, passion, love and so much more.

I received an advanced copy of this book via Booksprout and I am voluntarily leaving a review.
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240 reviews3 followers
December 31, 2023

❤️‍🔥Hot mess, Ava Gray
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❤️‍🔥Posibile spoilere!

❤️‍🔥Kayla este o tânăra, care pana la vârsta de 24 ani, este ținuta ca intr-o colivie de mama ei, care a făcut școala online, care nu a avut un iubit, care nu a explorat lumea și care are o singură prietenă, pe Amber. Dar totul se schimba când unchiul sau, Dave, o invita in vacanța de Ziua recunoștintei, sa petreacă doua saptamâni in LA.
❤️‍🔥Ajunsă in LA, Kayla încerca sa se integreze in gasca de prieteni a verilor săi, Gabe și Jessie, chiar dacă aceștia nu se poarta frumos cu ea si mereu o fac sa se simtă prost. La petrecerea de Halloween, Kayla îl cunoaște pe Nick Sadler, un faimos actor, fiind singura care se poarta cu el in mod normal, fără a fi acaparata de faima lui. La rândul lui Nick este fascinat de Kayla și își dorește sa o cunoască mai bine, dar un incident mai puțin plăcut ii pun pe cei doi intr-o situație dubioasa.
❤️‍🔥Întoarsă acasa, Kayla încerca sa revină la viața sa, dar Nick încă ii bântuie visele, vise ce se vor transforma in coșmaruri, deoarece ea primește un plic cu poze compromițătoare, in care este amenințată ca dacă nu trimite o anumită suma de bani, pozele ce ii pun intr-o postura nu prea plăcută, vor fi publicate in tabloide.
❤️‍🔥Salvarea Kaylei vine de unde se aștepta mai puțin, și anume de la Isaac, impresarul și cel mai bun prieten al lui Nick, care ii face oferta de a-l însoțit pe actor la diverse petreceri și dineuri, in perioada sărbătorilor, ca iubita a sa, pentru a-i liniști pe cei de la casa de producție. Ce nu știe Kayla este faptul ca Nick a vrut neapărat ca ea sa ii fie alături și cu aceasta ocazie sa o cunoască mai bine, deoarece nu și-o poate scoate din minte.
❤️‍🔥Va accepta Kayla oferta lui Isaac? Cine o șantajează pe aceasta? Va reuși Nick sa o cucerească pe Kayla? Cum va face ea față vieții de la Hollywood? Va reuși Kayla sa își trăiască viața as cum își dorește și sa scape de stricta supraveghere a mamei sale? Cum va evolua relația dintr Kayla și Nick? Răspunsul la aceste întrebări dar și deznodământul poveștii îl veți descoperi voi.
❤️‍🔥O poveste drăguța, cu acțiune craciunistica, cu un protagonist care mie mi-a plăcut, care nu s-a dat in laturi de la nimic, pentru a o cucerii pe cea pe care o iubește, care nu are aere de mare vedeta, desi este o vedeta, care vrea sa fie tratat ca un om normal, care se poarta cu Kayla ca cu o prințesa, care mereu i-a dat încredere in propria-i persoana. Cât despre Kayla, cumva as fi vrut-o mai puternica, mai încrezătoare in ea însăși, mai asumată, dar data fiind experiența ei, am înțeles de ce a acționat așa cum a făcut-o, dar care a înțeles ca pentru a fi fericita, trebuie sa riște. Așa ca dacă vreți o lectura care sa va aducă zâmbetul pe buze, aceasta este alegerea perfecta, iar eu voi mai citi si alte cărți autoarei, deoarece aceasta prima întâlnire cu ea, a fost una plăcută pentru mine.
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588 reviews4 followers
December 19, 2022
It was just meant to be!

Nick is an up and coming actor in Los Angeles, known for his part as lead actress in a series. Partnered in the series with a young and tiny waif of a woman. Kayla is a young woman living in a small town with her extremely sheltering mom. At 24 she is headed to Los Angeles to visit her uncle and his 2 adult kids.

Once there, she is surprised to be heading to a celebrity Halloween party. Being uncomfortable in the provocative dress her cousin got for her, she went along to the party with her cousins and their friends. She was soon left on her own. After hiding in the corner of the room she went in search of a bathroom. One of her cousin Gabe's friends came to show her the way to an ensuite through one of the bedrooms. Coming out, she was put in a desperate situation. As she cried out, a handsome stranger burst in to save her.

This was the gorgeous actor her cousin had gone on and on about. She was deeply grateful but admitted to him she hadn't seen any of his shows, and Nick actually hadn't been happier. This woman was everything he could dream of. She was gorgeous, funny, and smart. Plus she also had curves he wanted next to him.

When something happens and her gown is ripped from her, Nick does what he can to cover her but Kayla is mortified and heads back home the next day. Then a picture is sent to her of the incident and she is blackmailed to send money to stop pictures from getting published.

Nick can't forget this incredible woman. Forced by his studio to get a female companion, his first choice is Kayla. When Nick's agent contacts her to offer her a paid contract to be his companion at all Hollywood events, she agrees to it. She needs to hide the pictures from her mom and pay off the blackmailer.

Wow! Now things get interesting. The longer Nick is with Kayla, the more he wants her. And not just short term. Kayla has never been in a relationship especially with an older man. She's terrified by the person coming after them, and scared to share anything with Nick.

Must read story!! So good!! Ava Gray this is one of my books of yours to read but I will now be following you. Enjoy

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2,372 reviews14 followers
December 11, 2022
The first several chapters of this book were really not appealing to me, but I decided to give the book a little longer before giving up. I’m glad I stuck with it because the storyline really turned into something I found enjoyable.

Kayla is from a small town in the Midwest, and has been extremely sheltered by her mother - almost to the point of abusive control. Kayla gets invited by her uncle to visit California and spend time with her cousins and she grabs at the opportunity for some freedom. Unfortunately, her cousins and their friends are horrible people who treat her poorly.

While at a Halloween party she runs into Nick, a Hollywood Hunk who no one recognizes in his famous character’s costume. An embarrassing moment has Kayla running and she goes home a week early. Her shame is magnified when pictures arrive threatening public exposure if she doesn’t pay her blackmailer.

Nick was enthralled by Kayla and her goddess-figure. He has been pressured by his studio to have a consistent companion who attends industry events and parties, and decides he wants Kayla to be his fake date.

The relationship starts out fake, becomes very real and is entertaining to see develop. Nick’s assistant, Issac adds some humor into moments that have Kayla flustered.

From the very beginning, Nick is adamant about his interest and desire for Kayla. He is determined to go slow and be as creative as necessary to get her in his life. He is very protective and supportive of her, as well as tender and sweet. Kayla is wide-eyed and overwhelmed by much of her exposure to well everything after being so sheltered; however, she also has an innate ability to negotiate terms in her favor.

Overall this is an enjoyable and entertaining read.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
2,039 reviews2 followers
December 16, 2022
Here is another hit from the Aplha Billionaire set and in this one we get Nick a new successful actor that goes to a Halloween party dressed as his most recent character hoping to blend in and not recognized. Kayla was raised by her mom in a sheltered environment, never being able to be a normal person. When her Uncle invites Kayla out to LA to spend time with her cousins Kayla jumps at the chance to live a bit. When spending time with her cousins they are mean and make jokes about her size and when she goes to the same party as Nick they meet unexpectedly. Kayla finds herself alone in a room with a creep and Nick saves her. Nick tried for several months to get Kayla to call him back but she was to over whelmed of being embarrassed. Unknown to them someone takes pictures of a situation they find themselves in only to find out later she is being blackmailed for money. Kayla finds herself forced to accept to be a fake dating campion to Nick to pay them. When all their feeling become real, living with lies and the pressure of making payments sends Kayla back home and the blackmailers make their decision causing a media storm the Nick does what any man in love does…protects his woman and their love by making those responsible pay the price of causing issues! I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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705 reviews1 follower
December 22, 2022
Not sure what to say about this one. I enjoyed it but it felt disconnected somehow. There was always time lapses in the beginning, chapters that started with two weeks later, a month later, things like that. What the heck happened between where the last chapter left off and the new one? Plus, I feel like Nick and Kayla had a strained relationship. They didn’t really spend much time together, plus she was a little too naive for me. I get she was sheltered growing up but it would have been nice if she had a stronger head on her shoulders. On top of that, I felt like Nick was very secretive. I would have liked to know about his family and this supposed empire his parents built but it was never talked about, not even when he gets close to Kayla. There was more characters I didn’t like compared to who I did like. Not enough to warrant a low rating though because I did like the story and where it was headed. It was nice to see a character who wasn’t afraid to give his heart away and be closed off to the idea of finding love. From the beginning I think he was ready to be all in with Kayla and I liked that. Again, I read the books out of order being that each one doesn’t continue a timeline. Combine all of this together and you do get some positive moments I enjoyed about the book but the other stuff bothered me enough to give it a lower rating.
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437 reviews8 followers
January 13, 2023
Nick is a up and coming actor who is just stared as a superhero but the movie hasn’t been released. He went to a Hollywood Halloween party dressed up like his character that he plays on TV. People at the party did not know it was him and thought it someone who dress up as his character except for one, Kayla.
Kayla was raised in a conservative household. Her mom sheltered her from everything. Home schooled, local college, monitored the shows and movies she was allowed to see. It really threw her for a loop when she was allow to go visit her uncle and cousins in LA for three weeks by herself. The entire time she was there her cousins and friends would be passive aggressive about Kayla and her body or how naive she was. They invited her to the Halloween party and helped her get dressed. When they arrived she was dumped. While she was exposing she ran into Nick and knew it was him immediately. After an incident she left the party and left LA a full week early and went back home.
Kayla was being blackmailed because of pictures that were taken at the party. Nick couldn’t get Kayla off his mind. When Nick’s manger tracked Kayla down and offered her a job she decided to take it to help pay the blackmailers and protect Nick.
I really love Ava’s book however this one has multiple spelling and grammatical errors.
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749 reviews3 followers
December 22, 2022
This is the second book I have read in this series, and loving them, this is Kayla and Nick's story.

Kayla had led a sheltered life, but then got the opportunity to go to L.A. to visit her cousins and uncle, so she went. They took her to a Halloween party dressed as a character from a TV series that she had never seen, they showed her a photo of the leading man in and out of costume and said he might be there at the party.

There was a lot dressed as Mithrandes at the party, but Karly recognised Nick immediately while others told him that the real character was there somewhere, but she knew it was him and he liked the way she looked until an unfortunate costume malfunction left her embarrassed and wanting to leave.

The next thing Kayla knew was she was being blackmailed, so took the Job that Nick offered her to pay them off. The more time they spent together the closer they came, till she could take no more of the blackmail and fled home. Nick knew nothing about it as she was protecting him.

This book keeps you wanting to read more from the start till the end.
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9,301 reviews70 followers
January 2, 2023
Kayla is going to LA to visit her uncle and cousins. When she arrives, her cousins plan to go to a party and have picked a costume out for her. At the party Kayla runs into Nick and sparks fly between them. Nick is an actor on his way up in his career. Nick saves her from a creep at the party and they end up in a compromising position. This has Kayla running back home to her hometown. Nick wants to see her again, so he puts someone on locating her and offering her a job. She agrees to the job but only because someone is blackmailing her with photos of her and Nick. Will something grow between them when she returns to LA? Who is the blackmailer?

This is a great story that will draw you in from the first chapter on. This is a well written and very entertaining story. Its a book that any book lover would enjoy.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
2,451 reviews15 followers
December 18, 2022
Ava Gray's Hot Mess, the newest novel in her fabulous Alpha Billionaire series, is a wonderfully-written, steamy age-gap holiday romance. Nick is a top Hollywood actor, awaiting the release of a blockbuster sure to send his career into the stratosphere. Kayla is a sheltered, naïve young woman who meets Nick at a Halloween party while visiting her uncle and cousins in LA. From the moment they meet, the completely mismatched twosome have fiery chemistry - but when he tries to protect her from an incident, she retreats home. Blackmail and pressure from his studio result in Nick and Kayla reuniting to help his image, only it doesn't take long before playing pretend turns real.

A fantastic, engaging and swoony romance that's a must read this holiday season.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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513 reviews4 followers
December 26, 2025
Nick es un galán de Hollywood que va a una fiesta de Halloween vestido como el personaje que interpreta en su película con la esperanza de no ser reconocido.
Kayla es una joven de pueblo de veinticuatro años, muy protegida de las costumbres del mundo debido a su madre estricta y exagerada. Por lo tanto, cuando su tío, que vive en Los Ángeles, la invitó a visitarla, aprovechó la oportunidad para alejarse de su madre por un tiempo. Una vez allí, no podía creer la suerte que tenía al ir a una fiesta de Halloween donde también estarían celebridades de Hollywood. Lo que ella pensó que sería un respiro y algo de libertad, termino siendo una noche donde necesito ser rescatada por Nick. Pasaron la noche juntos y la química fue explosiva.
La historia está llena de suspenso, drama, secretos, chantaje, dolor, lujuria, revelaciones, sorpresas, pasión, amor y mucho más.
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13.3k reviews155 followers
December 12, 2022
Kayla has always lived a sheltered life so when she got the chance to visit her relatives in California she jumped on the opportunity. What she didn't expect was for her cousins to be so mean and underhanded. When she goes to a party, she meets Nick a famous movie icon and the connection ignited sparks between them. When a wardrobe malfunction had Nick doing the best, he could to cover her up, pictures were taken and now she was being blackmailed. In the midst of the drama Nick realized she was the woman he wanted in his life, but he knew he had to go slow with her because of her upbringing. Will he be able to get Kayla to see that he loves her, and the blackmail wasn't her problem?

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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244 reviews3 followers
January 11, 2023
Accidents will happen

Kayla and Nick met u expectedly at a party but though she guess he was the famous actors among those at the costume party she only knew what her cousins and her cousins friends told hee. The book is about somany things like trust, deception, making changes, finding you own identity and etc,. Kayla mother was a trip and it was hard for me to find the love between them, but Kayla still gave her respect although her mom treated her wrong. How she believed Jess over her own daughter is horrible. The only problem I had with this story was the low level of amber in this story. Her and amber were best friends and the plan of them being in LA should have happened and she should have been more in the story
3,188 reviews27 followers
December 16, 2022
Hot Mess was an enjoyable read. Kayla is in California visiting family when she meets movie star Nick. This story is a little slow in the beginning but it picks up. It excludes a virgin, blackmail, a fake fiancé and age gap. While Nick has real feelings for Kayla and is trying to take his time with her as not to scare her off, someone else is trying to sabotage them. Will Nick and Kayla be able to have a real relationship? Will he be able to probe Kayla that he loves her no matter what? This was a great story and characters. I would recommend this book.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
3,419 reviews19 followers
December 31, 2022
Hot Mess is the story of Nick, a rising Hollywood actor, and Kayla, who is visiting family in Los Angeles. She attends a party with her cousin only to have Nick come to her rescue when she has a frightening event with another man and ends up with a ripped dress. She is later contacted by a blackmailer who took photos of her and needs cash to pay them off. Surprisingly Nick’s agent contacts her with a well paying contract to act as Nick’s companion at Hollywood events. This is a great story uniting two strangers who fall in love.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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1,567 reviews16 followers
December 15, 2022
Is Nick ready for the secrets Kayla has?

I absolutely loved reading Hot Mess - Kayla & Nick's story. Their story is a great blend of taboo, virgin, fake fiance, age gap, holiday, celebrity & alpha male. Nick, a Hollywood heart throb is completely captivated by the shy Kayla. There is something about her that draws Nick in never wanting to let her go but will it last? There is someone out there fully intent on making sure they don't last.
This was definitely a 5 star read for me.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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7,458 reviews75 followers
December 19, 2022
This is a great read that take you into Nick and Kayla's world of sheltered innocence and the evil side of LA. When invited to LA by her uncle, her adventure takes a twist when Kayla finds herself needing to be saved from a creep. Nick is a up and coming actor, who helps Kayla, only to have her mixed up in a blackmail and fake date.

This wonderfully written story takes you and your heart on a wild ride up twist and turns.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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628 reviews2 followers
December 21, 2022
Another wonderful Christmas read. I can’t get enough of them this time of year. Kayla is visiting her cousins in LA and meets Nick at a Halloween party where she is the only one to recognize him in costume. Kayla is a sheltered 24 year old who has no real confidence in herself and he is a rich actor who is made by the studio to be seen with a girlfriend at events. He picks her because he is attracted to her and she can’t believe he actually wants to be with her. I just started reading this author and really enjoy her books. This one was a real page turner.
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1,382 reviews16 followers
January 21, 2023
3-3.5⭐️

Ça se lit tout seul j’ai pas vu le temps passer.
Nick et Kayla sont mims ensemble, j’aime trop comment ils prennent soin l’un de l’autre.
Mais Kayla a quand même un côté gamine qui m’a soûler et Nick, il a des propos sur les femmes à des moments, des remarques de vieux mec et aussi. il a le droit d’aimer un type de femme mais pas besoin de descendre les autres.

Le côté chantage est pas trop mis en avant c’est vraiment dommage car c’est un peu ce qui rajoute l’intrigue et le suspense mais on en parle 5min.
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4,918 reviews
December 16, 2022
This was a pleasant and enjoyable story. The storyline and build up was good and I loved the relationship and chemistry between Nick and Kayla. The only downside and what I had a problem with was her mother, I didn't really like her or like how she was and behaved towards Kayla. Despite that, it's an enjoyable story and highly recommended.

I received an Advance Reader copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
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2,800 reviews20 followers
December 17, 2022
Unique and entertaining

Kayla is a young woman living a sheltered life in her mother’s home. The small town atmosphere and strict, judgmental nature of her mother are what drove Kayla to ho to Lo Angeles where she met handsome and kind actor, Nick.

The story takes on the moral behavior of young women, while giving us a romantic and passionate pairing. It is a refreshing take on a holiday story and I enjoyed it.
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983 reviews2 followers
December 19, 2022
I loved the plot of this book. Nick and Layla's story was original and something I don't read much the Hollywood actor trope. I loved that Nick fell first and had to win over Kayla. It was just very slow in the beginning, almost all of the first half of the book, and then it picks up. But honestly, it took me a long time to read because it was so boring in the beginning, but it's worth it to read the second half. I wish authors either edited for length or put more into the book.
1,659 reviews11 followers
December 15, 2022
Enjoyable romance. I liked Kayla and Nick's relationship. Kayla is somewhat naive with an overprotective mother who has constantly oozed disappointment and disparaging comments to her daughter. The story is engrossing despite being a bit disjointed at times.
I received an ARC of this book from Booksprout but voluntarily leave this review.

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1,189 reviews11 followers
December 16, 2022
This story is one of my favorite this year, you find all of the emotions you love to have in your read. We follow Kayla’s path throughout the good and the bad, you will fall in love with her story. I highly recommended it. I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
43 reviews
January 15, 2023
fun but needs editing

I really enjoyed the story, but several times I had to reread parts because the editing made it difficult to follow. I also questioned the naivety of Kayla. At 24, she should have a little more common sense. Many moments, I was shaking my head thinking that it was far fetched that she was so easily controlled.
1,857 reviews3 followers
May 24, 2023
Be A Lion!

The descriptors of Hot Mess made me believe I would really like this book, but…. I know it’s fiction but what 24 year old in 2022 is as naive, sheltered, and over-protected as Kayla???? The plus for the book is that Kayla is a plus sized woman and Nick ensures his love moves Kayla’s self esteem a major step forward.
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December 16, 2022
This book was so fun to read. I enjoyed the storyline about a small-town girl and a older actor finding each other. There was family drama and rude people to deal with but the ending made it worth it. This is a definite must read.
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