Maverick writer Dalton Scott demands solitude—not a baby on his doorstep! But he can hardly shut the door…. Though absolutely out of his depth, he's amazed when he finally gets the little girl to stop crying!
Then beautiful single mom Ellie arrives, distraught that the babysitter left her precious child on Dalton's doorstep!
Can this chaotic pair make him realize that too much of his life has been stored in fiction? With Ellie he could start a whole new chapter….
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Tedious. That's the word that can best describe how I feel about this novella. It was peppered with too many inane statements that don't really push the story towards a goal.
There was also the lack of chemistry between the main characters. Yes, it was described how they were attracted to each other but none of that "frisson" or "zing" or overwhelming desire.
It's funny, now that I think about it, the guy in the story had trouble putting emotion into his story. This novella is the same. Quite flat, not convincing enough.
There were some parts that were confusing too, or rather, it made me go "What the..?". I mean, the heroine says "We shouldn't do this" and then after a line or so she goes "Why are you holding back, what makes you afraid". The hero is only a little more decent.
Ah well, I'm certainly not going to read this again.