Another one that doesn't make the cut in my ongoing purge.
Like so many other fantasy books I've had on my shelves for years, I enjoyed it enough to seek out the others in the series. I actually read the first few of them, putting them above others like the Green Rider series that I never did get back to.
I thought this was going to be an exception as I read chapter 1. It was like reading a comic book, perhaps a bit overwrought, but the first chapter is setting the stage after all. The dialogue was also overwritten, but there was a subtlety to it that I enjoyed.
Then chapter two started, and I realized the whole book was going to be like that. There can be two paragraphs just describing why a character sighed. And the dialogue...
"As for the last, he'll not appear before a rigid officer, at least until his undergarment's changed. So greatly did we fright him that I fear his late digested supper shares his seat. He fairly reeked in bidding us farewell."
That's spoken after the first fight scene, where Palamon kills two soldiers and a third rides off. The younger knight, who let slip where they were headed, hangs his head and says "Oh, curse me for my youthful lack of guile."
So... If that's not a deterrent then definitely give these books a try. I mean, there is a cleverness to how it's written but it's just too unnatural as dialogue. The descriptions get tedious. "Beware, young man," Palamon starts, then there's two paragraphs of digression, and an exact repetition of "Beware, young man," and he actually finishes what he was saying.
I hate dumping on so many books that I've considered favorites over the years. I'm just writing reminders for myself of where I've been and why I got rid of them.
It's a downside of the Goodreads rating system. I'm giving it two stars for the fact that I at least enjoyed it at one time. I'd give it one if I were just happening across it now. For fantasy, it's a lot better than other more famous series. The Belgariad was just awful, and even when fantasy was my thing I didn't make it through book one. As a fantasy book I'd at least give this four stars.