One Look by Lena Hendrix 💫
This follows Lark, Wyatt and his daughter Penny returning back to the coastal hometown of Outtatowner. Lark was hired to cry at a wedding for a family friend of the Sullivans and has decided to stay in town waiting for an acting opportunity. Now she's been offered a job and my new neighbour. Can they resist each other?
Let's discuss this. All I can say is I enjoyed the storyline, just wished it was done a little differently.
Starting with Lark the FMC. I don't like the name choice of this character honestly but that's a personal preference. Also, she was very clumsy and in sticky situations for the first half of the book but after about 50% never clumsy again. The way she is introduced in the book is odd, hired to cry at someone's funeral and then just stays in the small town waiting out a potential acting job.
Wyatt I liked his character just wish he didn't jump on the FMC so quickly and was more grumpy with her.
Penny the 7yo daughter was forgettable and didn't do anything for me except add to the storyline and show how Wyatt truly is when she is around.
There are a lot of side characters in this book that even though I just finished this book I've forgotten. I don't understand why three 20yo players on Wyatt's football team he coaches came to stay and live with him and his daughter. I get it to keep them in line and stay out of trouble as he needs them on the team but these are grown men as a coach wouldn't you just sit them down and tell them to pull their heads in? I don't know it's just odd to me. Another point Wyatt sent them to their room like their children not adults after an incident but then decided to bang Lark in the kitchen. That just makes me uncomfortable knowing three other men in the house could come down at any moment.
Lastly, I still don't understand the full story of the Sullivan and Kings rivalry. Which leaves me asking questions.
I feel there was a lot put into the storyline just wish it was executed differently. The audiobook was great and love the narrators but the story itself fell a little flat to keep me fully engaged.
I will continue with the series as I've had my eyes on One Touch for a while.
If you love:
🔹Small Town
🔹Single Dad
🔹Grumpy Sunshine
🔹Family Rivalry
🔹Neigbours
🔹Great Spice
Genre/Type: Romance 18+
APK: Kindle / Audiobook - Audible
Pages: 410
Audiobook Length: 8hrs 42mins
Narrators: Sebastian York & Charlotte North - Dual
Rating: 🌟🌟.5
Spice: 🌶️.5
Series or Stand Alone: Book 1 In The Sullivan Family Series
Tropes or Themes: Small Town, Grumpy Sunshine, Single Dad, Boss, Personal Assistant, Neighbour, Workplace, Found Family, Ex Football Player, Football Coach, Aspiring Actress, Clumsy, Jealousy, Mine, Cursing, Sexual Content, Dirty Talk & Grand Gesture.
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