Good start, but doesn't live up to its promise.
I read this book because I am a huge fan of Janet Evanovich. When I heard Ms. Evanovich admired this author enough to ask her to rewrite her old short-contemporary romance, Full House, from the late 80s (which original book I own, along with every book Ms. Evanovich ever wrote), I though, well, that's a huge recommendation. And, when I first sat down to read this book, I admit, I was delighted that the book had some laugh-out-loud funny moments at the very beginning. However, the problem is, very rapidly, all the humor went away never to return. After thinking it over afterwards, I've concluded the major reason this is so is that the author has a very flat, unlively voice. And, secondly, the heroine is very unsympathetic, because throughout the book she is constantly in a foul mood, and, as a result, pretty much all the time unjustifiably harsh to the hero. And she isn't hard on him in the way common in romantic comedies where the two carry on a kind of fake animosity expressed in funny repartee. Nope, she simply comes off as an ill-tempered shrew who rags on the hero because she's mean.
Another aspect of the book that I found really irritating is the way everyone in town treats the villain, Willie Jack, constantly sneering at him in a way that is absolutely guaranteed to make any sociopath go off his nut and commit acts of violence--like the rest of the human race, they tend to loathe being "dissed" (treated with disrespect). This sneering behavior might have been understandable in the general populace of this small town, who aren't law-enforcement professionals, just ordinary people--if we ignore, that is, the fact that their crudely cruel behavior violates Hughes's initial and ongoing premise that the heroine is transferring from the big, bad city of Atlanta to a pleasant, little southern town full of lovely, nice people, such that she can finally leave off her rough exterior and feel safe and at home. But as for the heroine and the hero and their constant sneering at WJ, both are experienced cops who very well ought to have known (if the author cared to make them have any realistic relationship to the state of modern police work among all but "renegade" cops) that sneering at psychopaths is an insane attitude in any cop these days who has had a modicum of training in how to prevent violence. Cops today are required to *never* sneer at anyone, and speak to all people, at all times, with respect. Which only makes sense, because even if they wear a bullet-proof vest at all times, there's no telling when, if you "diss" them, some psycho will pull out a gun and shoot you between the eyes. Beyond all that, though, I think the ultimate reason that everyone universally sneering at WJ hurts Ms. Hughes's plot is that it leads readers to actually feel sorry for the poor slob instead of seeing him as all-bad (as the author obviously hopes we will see this very one-dimensional villain) and therefore become unable to celebrate the event where he "gets his" in the end, an important fulfillment for the audience of all novels and movies with villains.
To sum up, then, my main complaints with this romantic comedy are that it isn't very romantic--I felt sorry for the hero, who seems like a nice guy, for tangling up with a barracuda like the heroine. And aside from the very beginning, it isn't funny. The light mood that is an essential part of romantic comedy is also jarringly violated by the author dumping murder and mayhem into the plot. By doing this, Ms. Hughes's story loses out on two counts: the harsh issues she covers get trivialized, and the light tone she is supposedly shooting for gets stomped into the ground.
P.S. After reading this book, it is not hard to figure out why the rewrite of Evanovich's Full House by Ms. Hughes has, sadly, turned a formerly lively, funny, sexy book into a flat, un-funny, un-sexy, drab book that over 70 readers so far (including me) have given 1 star to. She makes the exact (I mean it--*exact*) same glaring mistakes in that book she makes in this one (see my sum-up paragraph above).