3 stars for giving an interesting, brief history of the concept of "species". However, his goal in telling this story is to demolish what he calls the "Received View" propagated by Ernst Mayr: that before Darwin came around everyone was an Essentialist due to the malign influence of Aristotelian logic, believing that species were real and fixed, and this was exploded by Darwin and the rise of "population thinking". I think Wilkins attack on this story is blinkered in its sources and somewhat philosophically wrongheaded.
My sense is that questions about the nature, rank, and boundaries of the _human_ species played a significant role in determining the concept of species. Wilkins almost totally ignores this, thus failing to engage with the way "race science" & nationalism led to a form of species essentialism in the 18th and 19th centuries. Since Mayr's story seems to have been was explicitly referencing the way that Aristotelian philosophy led to both racial essentialism and species essentialism, this seems like a major gap. This seems related to a failure to paint a convincing picture of the 19th century biological consensus - what is the story of the rise and fall of Lamarckism? if most of Darwin's evolutionist ideas had been foreshadowed, why do his writings seem to suggest that species fixity was the default belief for him and his contemporaries?
Wilkins reading of Aristotle also seems off to me, although I'm really no expert. Wilkins treats Aristotle's "essence" solely as the verbal definition of a _noun_, instead of as a verbal definition of a _substance_, a "hylomorphic" compound of both form and matter. I guess one redeeming feature of Wilkin's narrative is that form/eidos/species, when understood as part of the pair species/genus, became part of a tradition of classification, where many "logical species" are ranged under a single genus, distinguished by their "specific differences". So perhaps what this points to is a divergence in the philosophical tradition, where the logical notion of species diverges from the metaphysical notions of form/substance, as the belief that a substance can be given a complete verbal definition breaks down.
He also rather pedantically applies Lockean metaphysical terminology about "nominal essences" versus "real essences", and identifies Essentialism with the belief in "nominal essences". This seems to correspond to a decision to only focus on logical essentialism, as opposed to substance essentialism? He doesn't really justify this choice, explain how Locke's essences relate to those of Aristotle, or justifying why it is fair to interpret Ernst Mayr's use of the term essentialism in this way.
Circling back to the question of human nature - this is precisely one place where essentialist ideas have lasted the longest. How many people still believe, implicitly or explicitly, that man is the only "rational animal"? How many of his pre-Darwinian biologists would have agreed with this? And yet Wilkins concludes that almost no biologists were ever species essentialists, and that now that we admit this "We might no longer see it needful to deny there is a human nature, for example, while remaining true to the understanding that their is no human essence". Truly don't understand what he thinks is achieved by this wordplay.