What this story is and what it's not
Let's be clear: I liked this story. I read the free edition of the first book and the bought the omnibus edition, which includes the next two books. I wish I could give this one 3.5 stars because I see promise - but need a little more. Let's also be clear: there's no science fiction here - at least no more than Star Wars or the John Carter stories. The setting happens to be in the far future, on different planets, and involving a race of humanoid aliens. Science fiction generally involves not only some element of scientific thinking, but has a plot point which revolves around that idea. The major plot points in this story revolve around identity, perseverance, force of will, love, coming of age, and spiritual awareness (and maybe a bit of Stockholm Syndrome?). All good, all done well. Almost all of the action takes place on the surface of three planets, only one small scene takes place on a ship. There's no discussion of the method of FTL travel, physics of the energy weapons, or effects of planet orbital differences.
The structure of the story is solid with the right amount of suspense. Information about the aliens and their culture is spread out naturally without the dreaded info-dump.
Some aspects of the characters don't mesh as well, and seem contrived - characters not behaving consistently within the previously established behaviors. These, however, are few and relatively minor - maybe even owning to my own sense of the characters and not the author's. The only major exception being how advanced the aliens are though they shun technology. The ending definitely seems inconsistent with some of the characters, but seems necessary to set up the second book. Reza, himself, is very well done. His character development follows a natural progression while keeping consistent with the plucky character we meet as a child, running across an urban battlefield to his soldier parents.
No passive voice, but there is mid-scene head hopping and the occasional overuse of adjectives.
There's one true sex scene, several suggested scenes, a few glossed over sex scenes, and a bit of language (particular from some nasty characters). Adults will enjoy this story, particularly if you like John Carter (Barsoom), Out of a Silent Planet, and stories about Jedi but want a bit of romance and adult themes