Taming the Wolff - Del Robertson
It’s very unfortunate when I am looking forward to a story, only to have it seem similar to another book I read, and start with a very slow, plodding pace, only to have the hostage turn smitten by the captain all within the first few pages. It didn't make sense then, and the story didn't become smoother at telling.
I love pirate stories, especially of the lesbian variety, but this has got to be one of the most unbelievable [bad] stories of this genre I have ever read.
Maybe this is why it just didn’t draw me in. There was no immediate excitement. I kept asking myself: “Why are these characters acting this way or that.”
Alexis, the hostage didn’t react the way a hostage should. Even if she was immediately intrigued by the pirate captain, she still should have shown more tepidity about the pirate. But she seemed to shake off those feelings faster than she ought to have.
This should have made me more interested in her story, but it did not.
And the captain—there is no way she would have been able to keep her gender a secret. No way. (And I don’t mean that in a snidy way—the author wrote her this way. Making her blush, her voice “squeak,” and other female infractions. A gender-bending pirate who’s been on the seas as long as she supposedly had would either have overcome those issues, or her crew would have figured out her true gender by then, which according to Wolff, they did not.) I guess what I’m saying is that the captain and her crew wasn’t written realistically. That can be OK, but it didn't work in this story. I had a hard time buying into them being fooled. (Also: what's the deal with Alexis calling the captain "my captain," like, immediately in the book?) There is just no build-up to this relationship.
I did keep reading it, hoping my excitement level would pick up, but it wasn’t until what I considered the climax (but was only 40% in,) that the story started to get interesting. The author would have been wiser to start the story there, and deleted all the earlier pages out.
Also, it should have been a quick read, but it wasn’t. It only became a quick read for me as I started skimming the story, (until I got to that 40% part.) I’m sure this story is fine for most lesbian (or open-minded) readers; however, since I consume a lot of books, this one fall short. If the author was to trim the fat, start in the middle and trim other useless info after that part, it would make it a much more rewarding read.
As it stands, it was an OK read, just not unique or earth-shattering.
Two stars.