I see a Cinderella retelling, I read it.
MAIN CHARACTER NAMES AND AGES
Ella (20) | Thorsen (~30)
FEATURES
∘ dark romance
∘ Cinderella retelling (duh)
∘ grumpy/emotionally guarded mmc
∘ royal mmc
∘ fmc kidnapped by mmc
∘ contractual agreement
REVIEW
I’m no stranger to dark romances, but it would appear I have a line, and Stealing Cinderella crossed it.
Thorsen was physically abusive, plain and simple. I’m not going to pretend to understand the nuances of bdsm, but multiple times, he restrains or hurts Ella in anger. His intention is to cause her pain—not for her pleasure, only for his. At one point, he terrorizes her with her fear of fire. The descriptions of the scenes make it seem like they are not good experiences for Ella, despite her “body betrayal.” Only after the candle incident does she tell him that he needs to listen to her limits. Side note: that’s the only time there was clear communication between the two.
His past (and present), while tragic and heartbreaking, does not provide a good enough excuse for his behavior. He goes too far and then thinks affection and self-hatred will grant him her forgiveness.
Thorsen’s character aside, I found the story to be a page-turner. The subplots and the scheming of side characters made for an interesting read. There was plenty of drama, and I never knew what would happen next.
Sometimes details slipped through the cracks. For example, Ella has jobs hemming or repairing clothes, but it’s almost never mentioned again. There were sick puppies in the beginning, but we don’t know what came of them. We hear only that her dress was destroyed by her stepsisters, but we didn’t see it making it. My biggest qualm: Charlotte, Ella’s super generous rich friend paid for an expensive ticket to meet a prince, yet she couldn’t pay to save the sanctuary?
There were times I really liked this book, but they were overshadowed by the moments I absolutely detested. It wasn’t for me, but it almost was.
OW/OM DRAMA sort of OM — Thorsen’s and his twin brother Calder usually share women, so Calder was under the impression it was business as usual with Ella. There is a brief explicit scene with the three of them, and Calder performs oral sex on Ella, but Thorsen stops him before it goes further | OW — Thorsen is forced to go on dates with Ella’s stepsister, and Ella believes the two are engaged after her stepsister taunts her
CHEATING no, but see above
THIRD ACT BREAKUP yes — reconciliation via a dramatic event
ENDING HEA — 5 years later epilogue
POV dual / first person
SPICE LEVEL 4.5 / 5
RATING 2 / 5