1.0 out of 5 stars
Quit at 53% – Must Have Come from His Sock Drawer
May 11, 2021
I'm pretty sure Tony Hillerman must have pulled his 2006 novel [[ASIN:B000MAH76S "Leaphorn & Chee, Book 18: Shape Shifter, The"]] out of the back of his sock drawer, knocked the dust off, put a header on it so it would fit into the then-current state of his series, and sent it off to his publisher. Then that publisher must have printed it without editing it. At first, I was very pleasantly surprised by it since it goes nowhere near D.C. and is chock-full of the Navajo cultural stuff that's been entirely lacking from the series for the last half a dozen books or so (one of the reasons I think it was written long ago). Then I started noticing discrepancies. And they kept growing and piling up higher and higher until I quit at the 53% point in disgust. I'll just list them here:
- Early in the book, Hillerman keeps dropping hints that Leaphorn is recently retired. Then, in chapter 7 (18%), he has Leaphorn say: "Just getting started at it [retirement]. This is the first month." Yet, Leaphorn has been retired for YEARS. According to the first paragraph of the second chapter of "The Fallen Man" (Book 12 – which was written 10 years prior to this book), Leaphorn had retired about 5 months before that book started. And, in this book, Chee and Bernie are newly married (which happened after the previous book, "Skeleton Man" (Book 17)). That's why I think this book was supposed to happen between "Sacred Clowns" and "The Fallen Man" and he just added a chapter to fit it in at the end of the series. Unfortunately, he did a poor job of editing the rest of the text to get rid of the inconsistencies.
- Leaphorn keeps saying things like "senile" and "being elderly." Yet, at most, he's in his 60s. He might be old. But, he's certainly not elderly.
- One of Leaphorn's friends gets a death threat and then disappears. But, Leaphorn doesn't seem to be in any hurry to investigate this.
- Leaphorn visits several people who now seem to be involved in a fire-related death that ties back to a mass murderer. Yet, he takes no precautions. He takes no one with him and tells no one where he's going. His buddy in the point above did the same.
- Leaphorn finds evidence that the old "accidental" fire that's at the heart of this book is arson. Yet, at the end of the day, he talks with his policeman pal and they say the day was wasted. Then, a bit later he specifically forgets an entire conversation he and that policeman had about the accelerant they thought might have been used in that arson.
- This could be either bad writing or the messed up timeline, but early on, it seems that his girlfriend, Louisa, isn't living with him (and she's been living with him since "The First Eagle" (Book 13). But, later on, she IS living with him.
- Louisa says she needs copies of his utility bills so she can pay her half. When he gives them to her, she says that she was GOING TO remind him to give her copies.
- In chapter 15, Leaphorn talks to a retired FBI agent about the archvillain in this book. The ex-agent repeatedly says that the archvillain's standard MO was to leave no witness alive. But, he also always left his betrayed henchman behind as fall guys. What's a betrayed, irked henchman if he's not a witness? Heck, in this book, one of those henchman was a woman the archvillain was supposed to marry immediately after the crime. Plus, over the years of this happening, apparently, the FBI was unable to come up with a single composite sketch of the archvillain from those henchman.
- At one point, Louisa leave Leaphorn a message saying that a person who was hanging around his garage asked her if he could talk to Leaphorn. She told him Leaphorn wasn't there and told him where he was and who he was talking to. The person she was talking to was someone Leaphorn suspects of trying to poison him. Leaphorn has no reaction to this. He doesn't wonder how the guy knew where he lived. He doesn't worry that he's been talking to his girlfriend. He doesn't worry that he now knows where he his. And, he doesn't worry for the guy he was just talking to.
- And, here's the one that caused to me stop reading. Leaphorn has a big conversation with his police buddy asking him to have a body autopsied since he suspects poison. They talk about who the coroner is and what they'd need to tell him to get him to do that. So, Leaphorn gives him all that information. A bit later, he hears a rumor that the guy he's asked to be autopsied was poisoned. So, he looks around for his police buds number as though he's never called it before and when he gets hold of him, they have to figure out who the coroner is and how to get hold of him. Oh, and by the way, Leaphorn has a sample of what he suspects is the poison in his truck, but hasn't bothered to give it to the police for analysis.
This is just a crying shame. Thematically, this book is actually really good. It's like the Leaphorn & Chee books from the good ol' days. But, the slipshod, haphazard writing and editing just drove it into the ground. I just can't understand it. All Hillerman (or a ghost writer who had actually read the series if Hillerman was already too sick to continue) had to do was put a couple of day's worth of work into editing this thing and it could have been really good. Instead, I'm putting my final nail into this series by rating this last book of Hillerman's at a Terrible 1 star out of 5. Just a shame.