Okay first off, I have a hard time liking christian literature. For some reason, much like christian music bands it comes off like a B version of their "secular" counter parts, so if I seem harsh when I review christian literature it is only because they seem to dissapoint me the most.
This book is the second in the daughters of fortune series, I have not read the first so I have nothing to compare it to.
So here is my thoughts. The dialogue is too... corney for lack of a better word. The story reads like a day time soap opera (without the sex) by this I mean like a soap, you don't want to be reading it, you have better things to do, but it just draws you in, little by little. Revealing these unbelieveable plot twists ( Gasp! I have been working with you all along and I just now found you were my illigitimate half brother!)
Plus even though I consider myself a believer I didn't care for the way the author pushed each of her characters to a point of conversion. I mean you are reading a war love story and then she suddenly switches the plot to a sunday school lesson.
I don't know maybe I am too picky, and just want a war story to be a war story and a sunday school book , to be seperate. It just didn't flow well.
Anyway as an interesting side note, I like the authors diverse background,(use to be a nurse) it really comes through in her writing.