Simple, visceral, and small in scale, this is a crime thriller that had my attention the whole time. Drawing me in with the provocative cover image of the gun-weilding woman, the book didn't match my expectations since no female character (nor any character) held or fired a gun. However, the plot nonetheless provided an engaging, if simple story that's really at its essence about a man's belated coming-of-age acknowledgement of responsibility through his protection of his wife and embracing his role as a husband and father. This message is really a refreshing one, and though delivered in a roundabount way, comes across with striking clarity and conviction at the conclusion of the novel without being stated in a blunt, hamfisted manner.
The grounded, realistic dialogue presented characters with real problems, doubts, and fears, and showed, most importantly, their difficulty in communicating with one another. Wilcox's writing style of short, choppy, stream-of-consciousness narration provide a rapid-fire form of delivery that keeps readers taut and waiting for the next development. That said, it starts to feel a little gimmicky after a while, with the villain's overuse of short, unexpected phrases becoming a unique but eventually tiresome parlour trick of the book.
As stated above, the book is essentially about Kevin, which is in no small part due to the relative two-dimensionality of the villain. Some other may have felt that Leonard provided an engaging and interesting take on the serial killer archetype, but I found his sexual obsession with killing women almost a cheap ploy to excite readers with fear, like a poorly used jump scare from a horror movie or an extra dose of violence thrown into a movie for when the plot gets a little slow. More explanation about him would not have hurt. Reading his numerous thoughts written as narration in staccato bursts, I wondered if I was reading the thoughts of someone on the autism spectrum. Having to ask this question about the villain speaks more of incompetence of the writer than skill in this area.
Many references to sexuality, sex, or characters' bodies in this book felt a little unnecessary. Some situations clearly called for it, such as interactions between Cathy and Kevin, which effectively served to illustrate Cathy's sexual domination and emasculation of Kevin, but many scenarios that simply describe characters by their breasts or stirring of genitals just left me feeling uncomfortable. This is not an incorrect or necessarily wrong way of describing characters, but there seemed to be a real overabundance of it in this book.
In conclusion, this book has much in common with its characters: though it aspires to literary greatness, it must content itself with a simple, manly theme: family matters, enough to protect at all costs. And that is more than I would have expected from something that looks like a trashy summertime beach read.