Do you ever read something so bad, that you just can't stop reading?
I had really high hopes for this book. It started off normal, but then it got weird - in a bad way. For starters, for someone who spent years running and hiding from her stalker, Quinn does not react like someone should when they come face-to-face with their stalker (who she is convinced is coming to kill her). No, internally she says she's scared (WAY too many internal thoughts btw), but her reactions, both verbal and physical, say the exact opposite. She treats him like an annoying ex-boyfriend, which just DOESN'T MAKE SENSE!
"'Shit,' I whisper, meeting his eyes. 'You're harder to get rid of than a fucking cockroach.'" It's a great line, but makes no sense in the context.
Digressing for a moment to PAGE 16 - we're introduced to a man named Wren who warns Quinn that Gabriel is coming for her. You would think he would be a character brought up again at some point... NOPE! Now, I'm assuming he's a character from another book, but I will never find out. Why is he here? He serves no purpose. Why did she need a warning? He showed up anyway - it's not like the warning helped progress the story.
Now I thought that maybe Wren was going to be the hero in the story and he would have saved Quinn and they would live HEA. Nope - but that would have been a better story.
Diving into the characters:
There was nothing good about Quinn. She was annoying and two-dimensional. The only thing we learned about her interests is that she liked mint milkshakes and has a soft spot for abused kids. Who doesn't?
As she's running for her life, away from her stalker, she gets offered a job - in her field, for the salary she wanted - and she does nothing but bitch about it. It's in a rural town. It's not a 9-5. It doesn't have health insurance. Blah blah blah. I have never met a college student who has been so upset about landing a job in the field of their choosing. Especially when she's on the run and has no other options.
And, turns out, she's just lying to herself and doesn't actually like being a social worker. She walks in and immediately judges the parents, victim-shames the wife for not leaving her husband, and then is horrified that the wife's first thought is for her kids.
Then, Gabriel plants himself into her office and she makes a joke about him hopefully killing her annoying co-worker for her (who has done nothing to her, except exist!).
"Though I somehow don't think he'd kill my co-worker. Unfortunately for me."
Again, that might be funny in a different context, but she is joking about an actual murderer killing an innocent person just because she didn't like her. And we're supposed to believe she's a good person?
She's so annoying and although she is lonely, she actively complains about everyone who is being friendly to her and trying to make her feel welcome.
And while she is "trying to get rid of him," she pulls the whole "I'm not sure you really like me. Are you sure you want me?" shit, like an insecure girlfriend.
My favorite part is when he asks if she trusts him and she says, "Well, you've literally drugged me once already and kidnapped me twice. So, yeah."
Gabriel is not quite as annoying as Quinn, but he still sucks. His murder weapon of choice (which never got any sort of explanation) is a glove with razor-sharp claws... who is he, Wolverine???
This whole book was like watching a train crash. It was so bad, that I couldn't stop reading... safe to say, I will not be reading anything more by this author.