One of my Christmas presents! Yay!
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I wanted to try another mystery series set in Japan, and found this one. It has much better reviews than Laura Joh Rowland's Sano Ichiro books (which are my guilty pleasure despite numerous flaws), so I expected good writing and good research. I was sort of disappointed.
The main character, Sugawara Akitada, is a young, honest and kind of ambitious clerk in the Ministry of Justice. He is also an aristocrat, even if an impoverished one, he's been to court, and at the end of the book he attends a party where imperial princes are also present. The party is written in such a casual way that I couldn't help but picture some sort of a cocktail party where all guests intermingle without the slightest sense of unease or inequality. This is actually true for the whole book. Only once I was able to believe that I was reading about the Heian world, and that was before the story began, during Akitada's journey to Kazusa. Maybe it was because there was no people interaction, just landscape description. The moment Akitada and his faithful servant Seimei met Tora, the suspension of disbelief became impossible for me.
Yeah, there are two problems in this book. The first one is that the story is sort of meh. There is no mystery really, the main character and his gang are stereotypical, the bad guys are obvious from the moment they show up, and the side plots aren't very engaging.
The second one is that the anachronisms make the book just bland. Once again, I don't care for research all that much. Mistakes and anachronisms can actually add to the charm, or to the excitement, in my opinion. Here, they do not. They are all over the place. For example, we have Ayako, who becomes Akitada's love interest. (I sure as hell hope I haven't just committed a spoiler, but it's hard not to see it coming. Why? Because she's a tomboy, a great fighter, and awfully nasty to men.) Now, her kind of character is common not only in Western fiction, but in Japanese fiction as well. The problem is that she wouldn't be that out of place in a story about later periods, say, Kamakura or Edo. But in Heian? A rough, rude, provincial, plain woman as a love interest? For an aristocrat coming from the capital? All right, let's say that he wouldn't pass his days drowning in tears and writing poetry about his awful fate of being banished from the capital (which would be the most probable). Let's say he does look at women outside his sphere. Let's say he is not repelled by a woman who can fight, cannot write poetry or compose a scent, and who is loud and obnoxious. But he behaves as if he were completely divorced from the time and place. Not only does he fall in love with her, but he's also perfectly willing to accept her domination, he admires her, considers her pure and honest, is jealous of her, and generally lets her walk all over himself. He doesn't explain why. He doesn't think Ayako is unusual. He doesn't think his having any feelings for her is unusual. Why? Instead of a love story plausible for the period, either typical OR not, we have one that is stereotypical through and through, in any setting, any period.
Same with Tora, who goes from a servant/sidekick to the main character's best friend. Here the author seems to perceive that it goes against everything we know about society structure in general, and Japanese society in particular... and no explanation is offered, other than telling the reader repeatedly that "of course Akitada knew that this way of treating servants was unheard-of, but he didn't care and was going to treat Tora as his friend, because it was just totally cool." Considering that there is generally lots of hugging and patting each other on the back between male characters, maybe I shouldn't be picking nits, but the whole business with Tora really turned me off, the more that I have read negative reviews describing class relations in the book as "too formal" and I thought, oh this book must be great, at last someone got it right. Then I saw all this touchy-feely stuff, and I was like, wait what? Are we talking the same book? Are we talking Heian period, when common folk were literally afraid to look an aristocrat in the eye for fear of said aristocrat's magical powers? The hero doesn't get to be any more heroic because he is ashamed of his "social position", and more importantly, the book doesn't get more interesting either. On the contrary.
There is more stuff which makes me wonder why this book needed to be set in Heian period. No superstitions, no taboos, no one is afraid to touch the dead. Neither Akitada nor Tora have any qualms to be around Ayako's younger sister Otomi who is mute, and no one seems to realize that it would be extremely difficult for a handicapped person to get married at that time - it's a problem in Japan even now - not only that, but her sister would be considered undesirable. Yes, there is Buddhism thrown in, true, there is a whole monastery. It exists so that the heroes could be outraged and repelled by pederasty practiced by the monks, which very common at the time.
There is also pumpkin and cabbage. Yup. Pumpkin and cabbage. In Heian Japan. Pumpkin and cabbage! This just about seals it for me.
No, I'm kidding, but... I know that Heian is so difficult to pull off! There is almost no info on how common people lived. Food, clothing, religion, social structure are so different from the universally known "Japaneseness". Making a step without poetry seems impossible. So I wanted to see how it was done in this book, and I'm left scratching my head about the lack of Heian goodness. With pumpkin and cabbage.