-- The Warlord Wants Forever by Kresley Cole --
-- Completed 12/13/2013 --
Before I begin, if you're looking for the cover shown on Kresley Cole's website (you know, the one with the grayed out hunk and the shiny green title?), know that if you're getting this story in paperback, it WON'T have that cover. It took me a lot of researching to discover that A Warlord Wants Forever is a novella, NOT a full blown novel. So unless you have an E-Reader and you're getting the electronic version of this story, the cover will not look the same.
That aside...
The reason I got this whole book in the first place was to read this story. I wasn't disappointed.
Although the other stories before it were "meh", with lengths that--combined--took up half the book, The Warlord Wants Forever was about the other half of the entire thing. I purchased this book namely so I can read the pilot for the entire series. Even though they say A Hunger Like No Other is book 1, technically they are wrong.
Like all of Kresley's other stories (well, the few that I've read thus far) this one was written just shortly before the declared "book 1" was taking place. Anyone who's read her Immortals After Dark series knows that each book pretty much leads into the next, though generally the next book has already begun halfway through the one you're currently on. That's how this story is; by the end of the novella, A Hunger Like No Other is already halfway complete. I guess when Kresley put this story out, again as the pilot, she gave the reader a hint as to what the follow-up will be about but not through a cliffhanger. I've noticed a trend: Kresley Cole does not write cliffhanger endings to lead into another story; she writes little hints into each one. It's a much better way of planting the seed of interest into the reader's head to get them to read the next one in the series, because if the reader is satisfied with the story already, they may NOT want to care about the cliffhanger regarding completely new people. They read a book for the hero/heroine; why should they care about the next book's hero/heroine? Kresly doesn't write like that, and I applaud her genius.
Like all of Kresley Cole's books, the sex in this story was amazing. She doesn't just write minimal detailed scenes, which actually is better for the reader's mind as it leaves room for the reader's imagination--which in turn gets the reader involved and aroused. She doesn't just write cut and dry comments for it either (namely, skipping over the actual events to just say "by next morning...", and making the reader take a moment to imagine a night of hot, passionate love). The way Kresley writes her sex is through her words. Sometimes she relies on dialogue, and sometimes she relies on her nondescript action scenes. She knows the right time to insert which plan of attack she'd use, and she doesn't bog the reader down with extra endless wording. There are no flowery descriptions, but at the same time, no dry statements. She talks dirty, but not trashy. She gets your mind flowing, making your imagination fill in the blanks.
She knows how to write.
And like all reviews I state, the writing style itself is pretty powerful. I didn't find any typos that jarred me, be it words or spelling, and the way she wrote everything out paints a very clear picture--but not OVER paints it. Not a lot of writers have achieved this goal, in my opinion. Some writers put too much description, while some lack a few much needed additions. Kresley, to me, is up there right next to Karen Marie Moning. I know that by reading her stories, it doesn't just entice me to pick up my laptop and continue writing, but it helps recharge my writing capability. Writers know the phrase: read to write, write to read. It goes hand-in-hand with "read something similar to what you're writing".
Again, this novella was the pilot to her Immortals After Dark series, so it's not *required* that you ought to read it first, but I'd definitely recommend it. It fills in the blanks to a few things mentioned in future stories that Kresley either forgot to explain, or felt she didn't need to. After all, a loyal fan should have read ALL of her books, or at least all of the particular series, if they want to be considered a true fan.
In the end, this story alone is the reason I give this entire book 5 Stars.
-- Hunter's Oath by Jaid Black --
-- Completed 12/12/2013 --
Okay, so I was definitely NOT expecting this. If yours looking for a hot read, I certainly recommend this one. Now I haven't gotten to Kresley Cole and I know she promises hot reading, but this story threw me in for a surprise.
Technically, the date is 12/12/2013, but I'd prefer to think of it as midnight on 12/11/2013 because I started to read this before bed, planned on picking it back up to finish tomorrow, and got drawn in.
When I was talking about not getting drawn in for the first story, I definitely got drawn into this one within the first chapter's first POV. Not only has Jaid Black written in a manner that's so easy to read, but she's not afraid to use words that shows real LIFE. They are the dirty, street words "good" people believe they are too classy to say. And not only is the writing so realistic, the tidbits of reference to sexual comments are amazing--not too detailed, which leaves LOTS of room for your imagination to pick up.
And boy, does it pick up! And when you get to a real juicy scene, because of how realistic and easy Jaid wrote this, it makes the reader's libido awaken.
I think I saw a typo of some sort, or maybe my mind was focusing on something else at that time and I really didn't, but either way, this was an excellent story. I've never heard of Jaid Black before, but I'm hoping that if I were to go pick up her other books, her hot writing style would carry over.
In a nutshell, the suspense of being kidnapped in the beginning drew me in; then came the arousal of the dirty words, actions, and suggestive thoughts.
Yeah, it's true, some people would point out that it's unrealistic because she doesn't even try to escape to return to her career, her own clothes, or her very own freedom, and state that she doesn't try to return to the world of equality where women have rights, and instead chooses to stay in this alpha-male dominate world.
Something to keep in mind people: not everyone is as stupid as you. Some people know that when you're warned about the security of the place and just how strong that security is, that NO ONE has ever managed to escape in hundreds of years--thousands even--you tend to think the warnings are scaring you, but you also consider that they are being honest. Which is exactly what the heroine does.
Now you also have to keep in mind that she KNOW she has no family back in her world. She KNOWS her job isn't her career anymore because of how boring it is. She planned to change the job, just as she planned to find herself a guy. And women's rights? What fucked up world are YOU living in? Only in America are women really treated like equals. In other countries, women might have equal rights, but they don't try and rise up above the men. They know their place in this world, and have accepted it. It's only in America do you have the truly dumb females who think their independence is more important than tradition and genealogy survival. It's the man who runs the economy of the nation; women were the ones to run the domestic side.
Now biased opinions aside, this one's a definite read. Chose your OWN opinion on what you want to take away from this story, and don't let these other reviews/critics sway you at all. Not everyone believes that a woman should wield ultimate power over her man.
-- Turn up the Heat by Sherrilyn Kenyon --
-- Completed 12/11/2013 --
I've never read a Sherrilyn Kenyon book before (at least, not that I can recall), and I wasn't sure what I was getting into. I know she's been around for a while, and I know she's somewhat popular, but I never attempted her stories. Usually, I steer clear of popular things because what's popular is usually bad or horrible (which is badder than bad, and not in a good way). Heck, Twilight is proof enough of that.
Now the story wasn't what I was expecting. I didn't read the back for good reasons; the story wasn't long enough, so I wanted to see if it would draw me in without having to rely on a back cover blurb. In fact, I only purchased this book because it's Kresley's Cole's first Immortals After Dark book for her series, and I wanted to read them all in order.
As I said, the story wasn't what I was expecting. Perhaps it's because I'm in the middle of writing a vampire romance that I was expecting it to be a vampire story. But it's not, and that's fine. It was good on its own without the paranormal encounters.
Though in saying that, I will say that it didn't draw me in. The writing was easy to follow, and rather fun to read. I didn't find any typos, and there wasn't too much detail, or too little. It just didn't draw me in. It was well scripted and painted the picture, but it didn't get my libido running on high octane. It felt just like a fluff story. There was good tension, but it didn't make my blood burn in my veins. It didn't make me wish I were the heroine getting the hero's hot body wrapping around mine.
But it's still a good read. Keep in mind that it's a short novella, so background stories are clipped and straight to what you NEED to know. It would have been nice to know a little more, but for the sake of wordcount, I'm not holding it above Sherrilyn's head.