It's 1917 and the Peabody Emersons are back in Egypt indefinitely, until the end of the war. They will stay, come what may, rather than risk being sunk by a German U-boat. In Cairo the gossips talk of a newly looted tomb but the Master is not the usual suspect. Sethos puts in a brief appearance only to disappear, surprisingly bringing on more worry for Emerson. The Vandergeldts are also in Egypt. Cyrus is hoping to find that tomb or another rich one while Emerson is content to excavate temples... or so he says. The Emersons discover they have a forbiddable (or not so) adversary when an old nemesis returns. The War Office or some such department is after Ramses again but he steadfastly refuses until "Mr. Smith" puts Ramses in a difficult spot. It seems the Emersons' kinsman has possibly turned traitor and only Ramses can identify the holy man who may or may not be Sethos. Worried for their son's safety but also for Sethos, Emerson, Amelia and Nefret are not about to be left behind!
I think this is the weakest book of the series (of those written by Elizabeth Peters) so far. It feels like two books in one and is very disjointed. The jacket summary emphasizes the plot of Book 2 but Book 1 is longer. Book 1 contains too much summary of previous events and concludes rather anticlimactically and too easily. It leaves a plot left unfinished to be picked up again in Book 3. Book 2 is a self-contained adventure that has nothing to do with archeology or Egyptology. I kept wishing the Emersons would return to their purpose for being in Egypt in the first place. Book 2 is a hair-raising, breathtaking adventure but it's also really funny. Elizabeth Peters knew how to lighten a difficult subject by infusing it with humor caused by the chaos that follows the Emersons. The conclusion to Book 3 also falls flat. I was expecting something a lot more exciting and dangerous. I also find the romance between Ramses and Nefret grates on me after awhile. They're a very sweet couple but their romance gets a little repetitive and boring.
Where this book shines is in character development. The Emersons never disappoint. Amelia is still Amelia- pragmatic, judgemental and hopelessly romantic. It's a good thing she raised Nefret or Amelia would be a nightmare of a mother-in-law. It's nice to see Amelia's feelings for her son develop as he matures, Emerson's as well. They're so Victorian and British they haven't been free with their overt expressions of love. I just love Emerson "Father of Curses" and his antics. I got a trifle bored and annoyed with his temper though. Ramses has also really matured. He's less pedantic and is better able to share his thoughts and feelings, at least with Nefret. It's funny how he's becoming a parent to his parents as he ages and they stay ever youthful. Nefret is amazing and I love her. I admire her dedication to helping the prostitutes and I love how fiercely loving she is. Sennia manages not to annoy me in this novel. She's actually rather sweet. There's a new Emerson on board for some of the adventure, a stray cat Sennia names "The Great Cat of Re." Horus is funnier so far. "Cousin Ismail" cracks me up. He never ceases to amaze me with his antics and how he gets in and out of trouble so easily. I think he's still a rogue but a lovable one now and I don't believe he is really reformed!
Cyrus Vandergeldt is still his gosh darn, excitable self. He's more shrewd than he looks. Bertie seems to be healing from his trauma nicely but I'm not sure he's fully dedicated to Egyptology or at least not for the right reasons. Even so, I like him. Jumanna, who I greatly enjoyed in the previous book, annoys the heck out of me by behaving like a bratty teenager. Some of her angst is justified but not all of it and I feel Amelia gets rather harsh with the girl. Selim plays a much larger role in this novel. He adds a lot of comic relief. Selim is proving to be as loyal as his father was before him. His obsession with the motorcar is really really funny.
Part 1 introduces an American family, the Albions. Mr. Albion is a collector without ethics. He feels like a shady character and I don't trust him. His son, Sebastian, is a creep but sadly typical of men of the time. The Emersons just don't realize how unusual they are. Everytime they come up against behavior they don't stand for, they become angry and while I don't blame them, most people of their time and class would not bat at eyelash. Mrs. Albion acts like a grand lady and the type of woman Emerson can't stand. She spoils her son terribly. She could be hiding a more devious mind.
In Part 2 we have a whole new adventure with new characters and new disguises. It's hard for the Emersons to keep all the new intelligence departments apart. Lieutenant Chetwode is the kind of young man Ramses was raised NOT to be. Chetwode comes across as really silly but has hidden depths. Ramses doesn't like him much so the reader doesn't either. Ismail Pasha, the holy man who may or may not be Sethos, is portrayed for amusement. His appearance is funny until it turns dangerous. Is he really Sethos? He seems convincing. Sahin Pasha reappears as one of the most cunning and surprising enemies Ramses has encountered to date. His intentions are confusing but his evil knows no bounds. Esin, his silly daughter, is a more romantic version of Nefret. Like Nefret, she's fierce and believes in women's suffrage. She is not your typical Turkish Muslim girl. Esin complicates the plot unnecessarily and I don't really like her. Her romantic nature is too over-the-top silly. Edward Washington returns and this time he becomes a sympathetic character, someone to care about. The war has changed him, as it did so many other young men.
While this is not the best entry in the series, I have to finish the series to the conclusion and then start again! I can't bear to leave the Emersons behind.
*******************Re-read November/December 2021***************************
This book is so disjointed! It's two stories in one novel and the two stories don't gel. Book 2 is a completely different plot and adventure. That was actually the only part I remembered from my previous read. I enjoyed it more this time around. I appreciated the humor more and I love Sethos! He's too funny. I have a lot of unanswered questions about his past and how he came to be who he is. I can only infer that he's working for whoever it is hired him because he doesn't have a choice. It's that or jail? I enjoy a good lovable rogue character and Sethos fits the bill.
Books 1 and 3 contain the Egyptological mystery. It just doesn't really do anything for me. The villains are too obvious and too lackluster for me. There was only one moment of anxiety with Amelia and Emerson.
What shines in this novel is the personal relationships. Ramses and Nefret are so much in love and she would do ANYTHING- ANYTHING to keep him safe. Their bond is special and unbreakable. He's willing to die by his principles. The relationships between parents and children have really grown as well. Amelia and Emerson finally realize how much they love and respect their son and make sure he knows it. He doesn't seem to remember his early years when Emerson was proud of his infant prodigy and when Amelia went beserk and attacked the Master Criminal's henchmen who tried to kill little Ramses. They've spoiled Sennia and I found her funny but annoying. The cats are a riot too. I'm more like Horus than the Great Cat of Re. Gargery is part of the family as well and he's so loyal and eager to be a part of the adventure. He's devoted to Sennia more than anyone else. It's very sweet. Selim has grown so much and is sounding more like his father every year. However, he's young so he's more modern than Abdullah and eager to adapt to new ways and new technology. His obsession with the motorcar is a riot.
By today's standards, the cross-dressing procurer probably shouldn't have been included unless there's historical evidence he or someone like him existed but I find him charming and he does seem to respect the Emersons. He does them a huge favor that should clue them in to what happens next!
Mom didn't enjoy this one either. She felt it was filler, killing time until 1922.