This was a good police procedural, but I came away feeling underwhelmed. The book ticks the genre boxes, but it lacks the depth and cohesion that makes a procedural really stand out.
The protagonist didn’t engage me, which is a major issue in this kind of story. In a police procedural, let’s call it a PP for shorthand, the central character needs to carry the emotional weight of the investigation. In this book, it just wasn’t convincing. The book makes attempts to show strain and moral tension, but never dives deep enough.
The ending took a hard turn into rough-guy action mode, which didn’t match the tone of the rest of the book at all. It felt like a jarring shift from realism to movie script. I get the desire for authors to have a big bang moment somewhere in the book. But should it be included if it feels alien to every other moment?
There are moments where character interactions feel real and well written, but those are surrounded by plot elements that felt underdeveloped. Several side crimes and subplots are introduced and then dropped, and the internal police politics are hinted at without much explanation or motive. An odd omission in the story, as if the author didn't want to go those places in depth.
Some twists were predictable. Overall, I just didn’t feel like the story delivered on its setup. It had potential, but needed a more compelling lead, stronger emotional grounding, and better follow-through on its plot threads.