Let’s address the alpaca in the room. Everyone is furious about Bess getting fat-shamed.
When I first read this in 1967, I was so excited that Nancy Drew is going to Peru! I am part Peruvian, and looking at it I wondered “is the mystery going to be stupid? Is it going to be racist?” But no. From the start there was so much action and the mystery was actually interesting, not just an excuse for Nancy to go to Peru. The scenery, the places, the mystery that keeps you hooked until the last page, I loved it. There is also a lot to learn about the ancient Inca culture, and, my favorite part, Nancy gets to speak real Quechua! So imagine my surprise that the internet is blown up about how awful this book is and how Bess gets “fat-shamed”. I did not remember that at all! So I picked up my old copy and read it, afraid that the pleasant memory of reading this book over and over would be ruined. But it was exactly how I remembered it. And Bess does not get fat-shamed! (More on that later.)
I think that people today just want to complain about something, and vintage books are a perfect scapegoat. They like to say things like “America’s favorite girl sleuth is a racist homophobe” and things like that that are not actually true. Honestly, how many articles have you read where this is the title? I do admit that the earlier Nancy Drew books are racist, noticeably more than even The Hardy Boys, my other favorite book series. The criminals are, without failure, “dark complexioned with a long hooked nose and piercing eyes”. As someone dark-skinned, it directly hurt my feelings. I got mad because they were obviously trying to tell children that everyone who is not porcelain-white is evil and steals money and scams old women. It was also hard to believe that every crook Nancy deals with (and there are quite a lot of them!) is dark-skinned. I mean, there would have to be at least a few white thieves, don’t you think?
But we can not expect these books to be perfect. They are a valuable way to see what life was really like, and if we do not know our wrongs, then we can not right them. Instead of cutting new generations off from these books, we must let them read them. Every stereotype, every slur, every “dark complexioned” villain, and tell them that this is not OK. That this is what people thought but it is not true. Times have changed, and because we have these books, and we know what is wrong, we can fight for what is right.
And now, those of you worried about Bess, here is what happens. I have copied it directly from the book, and if you do not believe me, get yourself a copy of it and turn to pages 120-121
After taking a couple of pictures, Bess handed the camera to Nancy.
“Please snap a picture of me seated on the alpaca,” she said. And don’t let anybody slap him so he’ll run away!”
Nancy took the camera and Bess walked forward. She swung herself up onto the back of the animal. “Ready!” she called out.
Instantly the alpaca bent its knees and sat down in the roadway.
“Oh, you mean old thing!” Bess scolded. She slapped the animal gently. “Stand up!”
When the alpaca did not obey, Nancy laughingly snapped the picture, anyway.
Maponhni walked forward and with a chuckle said, “Miss Marvin, you must weigh over a hundred pounds. That is the limit of a burden an alpaca will carry. He cannot be coaxed. You may as well get off.”
She grinned, but did not reveal her weight. She got off the animal and instantly changed the subject.
(Maponhni is their native guide, who helps them a lot in the mystery. I wanted to clear that up because someone claimed that “Bess gets fat-shamed by the guy selling alpaca rides”.)
OK, so first of all, Bess should not have just gotten on an alpaca without asking someone. As a rule, you should ask an authority before climbing up onto an animal you have no experience with. Second, Bess is over 100 pounds. We know that. But so are Nancy and George! Bess might weigh something like 110 or 115 pounds, which is still over 100 and too much for the alpaca. If Nancy or George tried to get on the alpaca, they would get the same response (I know that she probably weighs more, but still). Just because Bess is over 100 pounds and saying so does not necessarily mean that she is overweight and is not fat shaming. Fat shaming is what George does pretty much every book. “You shouldn’t eat too much or Dave will not want to dance with you” or “My dear cousin, you ought to skip dinner and breakfast tomorrow or no one will recognize you when you get home!” I never liked how George is always bothering Bess about her weight. Enough already! It really bothered me and still does, and in this book and some of the later one, George gets worse. But I always thought of it as a sort of satire. In Bess’s second appearance, the original “Secret Of Red Gate Farm”, she is fat-shamed quite a lot by George (but you have to keep in mind that this is only the second book with her in it, so they wanted to hammer it in that Bess is slightly plump and George is going to tease her about it, so get used to it for every book after this one. It is not an excuse, but that is probably why).
But Mrs. Burd (owner of Red Gate Farm) says, at the same meal where Bess is fat-shamed:
“I don’t know what has come over the young people lately. All the girls are bent upon staying as thin as a rail. Take Millie now— I can’t make her eat enough! Perhaps she will do better with you girls as good examples.”
And in “The Witch Tree Symbol”, when the girls are ashamed of their appetites, they are told:
“We Amish like a little flesh on our maidens.”
It was these little hints that made me think that Bess being fat shamed was not exactly meant to be taken seriously. I know that most of the fat shaming was called for in the Stratemeyer outlines, but do you really think that such an ahead-of-her-time feminist like Mildred Augustine Wirt would write all of that without winking at us? (I know that she did not write “The Witch Tree Symbol”, but there are plenty of other hints in her writing. I also know that this is all just my own interpretation that I am presenting, not imposing, so please don't rip me apart in the comments).
Also, remember that Nancy Drew was truly radical. She was ahead of her times and she inspired girls and women throughout many decades. And in the late 60’s, feminism was making a big comeback. You would have to be a complete idiot to think that Nancy Drew did not have at least a small part in all of this. And she has also inspired so many feminists!
And of course even some of the more recent books are not politically correct. But like I said earlier, we need to learn from this! Tell your daughter reading these books that George always fat-shaming Bess is NOT OK. But are you really going to ruin an amazing book because one out of the 177 pages has an incident that bothers you? Are you going to ruin this book for yourself and everyone reading your review because of your interpretation of page 121? Bess would say to just get over it and enjoy the books. She just changed the subject, and if she can, so can you. And I’m SOOO sorry if a book written in 1967 is not up to your 2020 politically correct standards.
Book review sites kind of bother me because I come from a time before reviews for every single book were easily accessible to everyone, and people would just read books and form their own opinions. I only joined Goodreads because I feel like many of my favorite books are getting a bad reputation.
But it bothers me because if you do not like old books that are not exactly politically correct, why do you even read them and post a negative review on them? Why ruin them for someone else before they have even read it? So I joined to stand up for my favorites, because I know that a lot of people visit this site and maybe I can help people form positive opinions of books instead of negative ones. We can't create the future unless we learn from the past.
You miss 100% of the shots you don't take, and if you read a book and don't like it, that's that and you move on. But if you are warned away from a book by someone you don't even know, then you will never know what might have happened. You might have loved the book, it could have even changed your life, but because of a random person on the internet, you will never know what could have been.
And for those who are all "in this edition of Nancy Drew and her friends drop everything and travel the world" and "would an eighteen year old really be doing all of this?", you are right. It is all very unrealistic. But for me and pretty much everyone who read these books, they were an escape. If you were down and sad, you could whisk yourself off to the world of Nancy Drew where everyone is always grinning and the people who do wrong are always caught by a very smart girl and her friends. Books and movies nowadays like to focus on "good doesn't always win" and "try hard even though you won't always get recognized" where some sweet kids are bullied and they don't tell an adult until one finally just finds out. This, however, is not how children interpret it! They do not see what you would think they do. Some will take it as "be mean, adults won't notice, and you get a movie and/or book made about you". Others will see "don't tell adults when you are bullied and they will find out eventually". But books and movies should make you feel good! You deal with real life and the "real world" every day. Books should give you a chance to visit another world for a while, so you can feel better about your own. Nancy Drew has unlimited funds, a nice car, nice clothes, good looks, friends and a boyfriend who will drop everything and fly to the ends of the earth to solve a mystery with her, a kind dad who lets her go anywhere, even straight into danger, a kind housekeeper who makes her and her friends delicious meals around the clock, a cute dog who helps sometimes, and even, for one book, a beautiful cat. No, it is not by a long shot realistic. But why should it have to be? I had some things that Nancy had. The car, the friends, the food, the boyfriend, the clothes, the freedom, the parents (I was lucky to have both alive and happy), the dog, and I like to think good looks but that is always in the eye of the beholder. Yet my life was so incredibly different than hers, even though I grew up in what I consider to be Nancy's zenith. Nancy's adventures were still an escape for me, a welcome one. They were comforting, too. In a world where nothing is really certain and good might not always win over evil, I felt safe and content knowing that at the end of the day, Nancy will come out on top and right many wrongs, and what is just will triumph over what is unjust. That even though she does not exist, the spirit of Nancy Drew lives inside everyone who believes in her.
So, whiners and haters, go ahead and tear this book apart. Pick at it letter by letter, and maul it with your interpretations. But you can never ruin it for me. Because I will never forget that day in 1967 when I opened it for the first time and was whisked to Peru with Nancy, Bess, George and Carla.
For someone reading this review and wondering if they should read the book or not, I say, read it! Enjoy it. Travel to Peru with Nancy and her friends and have a marvelous time there. I hope that this review has maybe helped you in your decision-making, and that you will love this book and Nancy’s other adventures for years to come.