i read shadow mirrior first,and i've yet to read the 1st book in the series, although i really want to!
overall,i really liked this book.it was funny and i wish i had a group of friends like the one in this book!
however,there were some problems with this.
i was sick,so sick,of the way richie tankersley cusick wrote in this book.
it was.like this.sometimes.throughout.the book.
and i got tired of reading these little fragments.
i wanted to scream "just write a whole sentence!!'
and i wasn't all that crazy about the main character.it's like her friends were all funny but miranda was kind of boring.i noticed she usually sat back and didn't say much while the rest of the group was joking around.
and i just expected more when it came to the ghosts in this book.like it turned out to be kids stuck in the mirror who just needed to be placed in their mothers arms.
&then miranda gets stuck in the mirror and i'm just like that isn't possible!
i just think that if you're going to do something with ghosts,you need to think of something better.
&am i the only one who thinks miranda made the wrong choice?!
gage was so sweet and i was disappointed when she got with ettiene.but of course the girl always chooses the guy who's been with a lot of girls.i didn't really believe that ettiene wouldn't break her heart,that he woudldn't dump her like all the other girls he's been with.
with gage,i would have believed that he would always treat her right and love her.
then again..i didn't really think miranda was good enough for gage.
&her grandpa told ettiene to help miranda.but he didnt.at all.
&the whole "you're the only one who can bring miranda back from the mirrior" was stupid. because it wasnt like her and etienne had this great connection or sumthin.
i dint really see a happily ever after between miranda and etienne because of his past and the fact that i didnt think he truly cared for miranda in a way that would last forever.
at some points the way this author wrote was beyond frustrating.it was like it was designed to get on a persons nerves.
the mirror thing was completely impossible and pretty much stupid.the whole ghost thing led to her putting a blanket around the children and handing them to their mother.thats what the book led to.&i swear i thought miranda was gunna get sick from what the children had.because she was touching them and everything.i mean,how is it possible that you wouldnt get sick?
basically,this author had no real grasp on the ghost concept.
(Shelved September 2, 2011. 4 stars).
Rereading for 3rd time(2018):
It starts off like book 1, right into the action, with her feeling ghosts. I wish the book eased us into it. This title didn't go with the first one.
Idr Etienne having shoulder length hair.
All the flirting and sexual jokes between the group doesn't add up. Not everyone can be attracted to everyone else. Etienne appears to like all 3, Parker likes Ashley & Miranda. Gage likes Roo and Miranda. Roo likes Etienne and Gage. Ashley likes Parker and teases about Gage being cute.
Parker starts right out of the gate with the same teasing towards Miranda from book 1. He says she's taking a long time getting ready cause she wants him to come up there to her room. When Miranda said she'd kill herself if she had to spend another moment in bed, he said she must be spending it with the wrong person,& he'd be happy to volunteer, all while Ashley, his gf, is beside him. Who would want a bf who made jokes like that to another girl? Ashley deserves better than that.
Roo wipes her hands on Gage's butt.
I really didn't like Babette LeBlanc writing her bra size and phone # on Gage's cast.
Gage is supposed to be oblivious about the attention and flirting he gets from girls. That doesn't add up with him being amazing in bed.
When Parker said he's got Gage, Roo asks if it's contagious,& Gage says she's not touching him anywhere. I hated it because we know they've had sex.
Ashley tells Miranda Kurt Fuller asked her out. His ex gf brags that he bought her flowers and candy and cards& never forgets special occasions. I wouldn't wanna hear how he's sweet to his ex gf. & if he's like Ashley why was he so dedicated to his ex, who he supposedly dumped for Ashley?
It was very ironic when Miranda said Ashley can always talk to her, because she was barely listening or talking to her.
Roo jokes about Etienne's big hammer, and Ashley says they think they're funny,& Roo says they're not funny, they're passionate about each other.
Parker jokes that Miranda and Etienne were rolling on the ground in the bugs and weeds and Roo says trust me, she didn't notice,& I wondered if she said it from experience, or just that no one would notice anything else with Etienne.
Parker says Miranda has a pretty nice ass.
When Roo jokes that Gage can't overdo it, because of his harem asking to help him carry his books& everything, she sounded jealous. The author totally wrote them as a couple. So Idt Roo would want to pass Gage to Miranda.
Parker tells Roo he guesses she thinks Ashley should go out with him, and Etienne says "with me? Mais, yeah. I definitely think she should go out with me" and I just don't get all the teasing. They can't all be attracted to each other. And if he likes Miranda, why would he say that??
We get to hear Kurt's got humongous balls, according to Delphine. I wouldn't wanna hear that from a guy's ex-gf.
It was cute when Parker said "everybody knows Ashley's hot!"
It's weird how Gage and Etienne are never jealous of each other regarding Miranda. Like when Parker joked Miranda and Etienne were rolling around outside,& everyone ended up cheering and giving whistles& catcalls. & when Miranda said she'd been thinking,& Etienne says uh oh, not Gage, I hope.
I love when Miss Nell says the boys think a lot of her,& about her. And she guesses Miranda likes both of them.
Early in the book, it was creepy how Etienne was parked in his truck outside her house. I mean, they've only known each other a few weeks.
'Unaware when the stealthy figure slipped across the sunporch and through the door...pausing beside her bed...standing there to watch her.' That sounded like the bad guy, not the romantic interest.
Etienne didn't seem concerned that Miranda was gone from a week of school. Then his mom said maybe someone will be easier to get along with now that Miranda's back, which was cute. But he hadn't appeared to be worried or missing her. He didn't even tell her he was working at Belle Chandelle.
When Etienne says they all have different talents to help Miranda with the ghosts, Roo says she likes his talent the best, and she heard he wins first place in every contest.
Parker says "if you want to hold me, I have lots of other parts you'd like better."
Parker jokes Miranda and Gage were touchy feely under the table,& Etienne looks between them. When Miranda leaves she hears Etienne tell Gage to tell him everything, even the touchy feely parts,& says he can't trust him for a few minutes. I didn't know if he was teasing or he was really jealous. It seems like they both know they like her. Also, if you're kissing Etienne, you shouldn't be flirting with Gage, and touching his thigh.
When Roo says nice guys are boring, I realized that's the problem with romance books. And it's just untrue. So we get the womanizing bad boys. Like Miranda said, Gage is nice and he's not boring.
Roo put the keys to the handcuffs down Etienne's pants, said he was ticklish in some really fun places. She wishes she still had the handcuffs. Why say that if you know Miranda likes Etienne?
Roo watches Gage and Etienne from her window, says they're so cute, laughing and goofing like two kids,& it's nice.
She said to Gage they used to hold him down,& still hold him down, and Gage cuts her off. What in the world could that mean?? If it was tickling, like Etienne, she could have just said it.& that's not that embarrassing. She clearly likes Gage, and Etienne.
Miranda asks if Roo's ever tortured Etienne since the handcuffs, & she says "in her deepest, darkest fantasies." When Miranda asks only there? Roo says wouldn't you like to know. What is with that?
Why would you say things like that when you're trying to push Miranda on either guy, cause you know they all like each other?
I thought it was rude when Etienne said "Umm, and I bet she could make it feel all better" about Miranda and Gage's leg. It wasn't respectful about the girl he supposedly likes.
If Etienne really liked Miranda, why would he joke that he thinks Gage is in love, and when Gage says he's the one that comes onto her, thinking he's a stud, Etienne says he's just proud of his heritage. He tells Gage to just tell Miranda, get it off his chest and other places.
It just didn't seem like Etienne really liked her. &Why would Etienne come onto Miranda if he knew Gage liked her?
It was sad when Gage said he's always here for Miranda.
She said she's madly in love with Gage and Etienne, but that didn't fit her feelings for them. Knowing someone a couple months isn't madly in love with them.
I couldn't believe while feeling bad for Parker, she asks if Kurt was a good kisser. How could Ashley kiss him when she's dating Parker? I didn't like Ashley then.
When Etienne sees Gage and Miranda playfully fighting on the curb, she sees his mouth twitch. He should be jealous!
She couldn't stop thinking of Gage before she went to Etienne's & I remembered what happened there. How can you be in madly in love with someone, go to someone else's house,& then have sex with him?
I guess it was a comfort Etienne didn't bring girls home, so Miranda is special in that regard, although his mom invited her.
One of the scenes I remembered was how Etienne finally smiled when they had sex. I remember prob thinking it was sweet and a big moment that he finally smiled. But as I read the first book, I was thinking apparently it takes sex to make him smile. Now I'm wondering if he smiles with everyone he has sex with, or just Miranda.
He quickly helps her get dressed and I hated when she said 'he was very good at it, she noted--he'd obviously done this sort of thing many times before.' I'm so tired of guys like this.
It was odd when he said if her and Gage did it, he'd know, & weird of her to say if Gage were there he'd know. Why would you even think of Gage then?
The first time reading this, that scene with Gage was pretty sad, him knowing the girl he liked had sex with his cousin.
Etienne doesn't call her after,& she thinks Gage would have brought roses. That's just wrong to still think of Gage when you had sex with Etienne. You need to pick one and stick with it.
When Roo said she'd go after Gage I was thinking yeah I bet you will. Roo was just a sneaky character from the start. If she had sex with Gage, why would she want him with Miranda? Or Etienne, who she also likes, with Miranda?
Etienne said it just happened with Miranda, and Gage said "it always just happens" and when Etienne said he could never hurt her Gage says "you'll do it. This one won't be any different" which made Etienne sound awful.
There Parker was kissing her head,& Ashley's dreaming about someone else. That's horrible.
She says she thought she was another--, and doesn't finish the sentence, and he's like another what in amusement, as if it's funny. When she says victory among hundreds, he says he's flattered. He should be immediately denying it, not joking about it.
She says she might be busy, and he says Gage, it's always gonna be Gage? They shouldn't even be joking about that. It should be solid who she chose. How could she have sex with Etienne & then choose Gage??
I didn't like how they had sex only knowing each other two months. And only kissed a few times and haven't dated.
The writing was really dramatic & just bad at times:
-'Some message...some purpose...some connection...except it's not the same--signs, signals, senses all twisted, all different--why isn't it the same--'
-'Aunt Teeta clucked her tongue...rummaged deep in her purse...pulled out a set of keys.'
-The scenes from the past were always crammed together with no commas. 'Silent footsteps on wet grass damp leaves soggy ground running straight at me two small quick busy feet--no, 4 feet!'
'Tiny fingers clutching mine shy curious fingers squeezing mine.'
'Metal and cloth and glass--no, not glass!--the round mosaic of silvery glass--not glass at all!'
'Eyes! Eyes full of horror, desperation--panicky pleading praying but still no one hears--'
'Sweat urine vomit feces blood infection flies oozing sores rotting flesh baking heat festering heat--'
Pg 323-324 was just horrible:
'She was already choking , suffocating, can't breathe, need air can't breathe...little faces--terrified! So terrified! Tear-stained,dark eyes dark hair so much the same, holding hands, soiled nightgowns, sweat-drenched covers--& the eyes of the woman, staring eyes, imploring eyes--black dress black hair black cap w/ lace--back & forth, in and out of flickering candlelight, in &out of shadows creaking, so quiet in her rocking chair, back & forth creaking, back & forth on the floorboards creaking, slower & slower &silent Oh God! bloodshot eyes, yellow skin--the stink of sickness, the stench of decay--'
I loved when her aunt said there were amazing sites at Belle Chandelle, ones Miranda would particularly like, and I remembered it was Etienne.
It's so incredibly repetitive how she'll be picking up on things and zone out,& come to & realizes someone has been talking. Miranda always 'barely listened' or 'scarcely heard.'
They couldn't go to Belle Chandelle without ghosts ruining it, they couldn't go to Ashley's house.
Miranda doesn't really have a personality. who she is without the ghosts? She'd be really bland.
She was only interested in Belle Chandelle once she knows ghosts are there, not just because her mom worked there.
Any conversation, any hangout always turned back to ghosts. Everyone noticed every time Miranda acted different, every time she was scared, distracted, everyone she saw or heard something.
Everyone notices her sensing ghosts, they're worried about her, staring at her, noticing something's wrong. She just comes across as really high maintenance.
Even in class, when their teacher was about to give another assignment, I was thinking good, something else to the plot besides ghosts,& then Miranda of course, can't pay attention, is only thinking of herself,& of course Gage notices. And of course only her friends hear her gasp, even though Peter and Gage aren't even near her,& no one else hears, as if the friends are connected on some wavelength.
This reminded me of Ghost Whisperer, how the ghosts keep coming throughout,& it isn't solved until the end, not because it makes sense, but just for plot's sake, because if it was solved early then there would be no book.
It feels like the Miranda show. It's all about her, all the time, barely about anyone else. To be with her is to constantly be taking care of her. Asking if she's ok, picking up on every mood, & she's always worried about something. & everyone always asks what's wrong and is she ok?
The moving swing was a lil scary. The candle in front if the window was kind of scary too. The ghosts in the first book weren't scary, but those two things were creepy in here.
I'd rather have some site seeing and fun in here, instead of ghosts every time they do something.
Etienne said it himself, breaking a mirror, seeing a reflection in her locker, the distorted plantation house, a hand in the window and kids on the swing was way too much in one day.
I loved the mention of a Halloween Dance, Harvest Festival, volunteer projects. I wish they had done something for Halloween, showed the local culture, done something fun. But the boys had to watch Belle Chandelle and Miranda just brought them food.
I remembered him saying snakes don't fall on his head! And alligators won't get in his boat. I love rereading these forgotten but instantly remembered lines.
Them seeing a nutria was cool. The first time I saw one was on a school wildlife trip.
Going into the mirror and covering it from the other side was ridiculous,& how is that even possible? With no guidance, how would Miranda know how to pass through to the other side. In here, she suddenly knew how to connect, reach out to ghosts. & she's only done it once in the first book.
Parker said Miranda was more scared of being at Ashley's house than ghosts, but that didn't feel true.& she said she's accepted it, but she's always scared of the ghosts. Anytime she sees, senses, or hears something, she's freaking out. She is not comfortable with her gift.
She realizes the children, with dark hair and dark eyes, look familiar. I don't see why it was necessary for them to be boys, and not girls. Unless just to be like Gage and Etienne. It was like this big revelation, but it really wasn't, because she just switch the genders. No big deal.
It's very unlikely that Parker would have the gift too.
I had forgotten Miranda reached out to Parker. I didn't like being in his perspective, how he hoped things were okay with Ashley, that he knew she might be thinking of Streak. Very sad.
Talking with ghosts isn't the same thing as telepathy. Miranda or Parker wouldn't have that gift.
I remembered sometime during this Gage & Etienne were really brothers. I think after finishing the first one so many books ago,& then picking this up, I was surprised to hear they were cousins, cause I remembered they were brothers. & because I read the Vincent Boys, with cousins being brothers, I just had that on the brain. So early in the book, I knew that was coming.
I didn't remember Nell having cancer again. I really hated that. I didn't agree that she wouldn't tell them they were brothers or that her cancer was back. That's just wrong.
Just because she saw Nell with Gage and Etienne and the ghost mother, doesn't mean you realize they're brothers. It was just a crazy way to guess that, when no else has any idea.
She mentions Etienne's secret pact with her grandpa on the last page,& I had forgotten about it. I wanted to hear it!
Of course I remembered some things before,& during reading and knew the general course the book would take, but it felt like reading a new book at times. & I got be surprised by the story all over again.
This could have ended better, on a better note. I wish it had covered the harvest festival in November, and had done something cool and fun with Halloween.
I didn't like the big reveals at the end, that they're brothers or that Nell has cancer.
The chapters were long, hard to find a stopping place at night.
I had this as 4 stars based on memory, but I think 3 is more fitting. The writing ruined it. At times it was just horrible to read those overly dramatic run-on sentences, and so many italicized words.
Many times it didn't even make sense to italicize some words& made it hard to read what a character was saying with this weird emphasis on some of the words.
She never called her old friends, or seemed to miss them. She only made a couple obligatory references to them. Also wondered if Miranda and her mom intended to move back to Florida. She doesn't seem to miss it or her friends.
I wish the story had ended with the renovation complete and them invited to come to the plantation.
Seeing others' reviews how this was supposed to have a 3rd book, it makes sense with the things that weren't resolved in here. I HAVE to know the secret between Etienne and her granddad.
I'd definitely like to read more from this group, they're so funny and close, but I hope she keeps it the way it is, and doesn't do anything crazy with the characters or anything.