there is something so lapidary & non-narrative here especially towards the end--her lineation is extremely alien to me, which is at times exciting & others frustrating. why lyric ! why "verses"... she's responding to something that is only in retrospect becoming clear to me. but i think this doubled reaction--that imagining form into something retrospective is already an unjust, frustrating process, or that it frustrates limits because it lingers in the "possible"--is perhaps the kind of thing she is after. i will read more of her
"Tonight I saw the moon / in the faint sky of Providence / and I was moved no deeper / for the distance. You must / know what you've done / to my ambition."