David Haight's debut novel definitively establishes his place among excellent up-and-coming American writers to be watched. I was particularly impressed by the vividness of many of the descriptions, especially in scenes where a single, lone character interacted with his or her surroundings. The quiet but potent philosophical observations offered by the narrator on life and love are also deeply resonant and thought-provoking. Most of all, I liked the subtle but artful use of metaphor — for example, the humorous, "Free Beer Tomorrow" sign as a symbol of the tenacity of (irrational) hope; the floor waxer as a reflection of the endlessly droning circularity of Lipman's life and/or his position as the "eye of the storm;" and "Overdriving" as a representation of the functional blindness most people impose on themselves by rushing headlong into situations they do not understand.
Like most first works by artists, of course, Overdrive does have some flaws that I expect the author will address in his future books. The dialogue at times lacked "functional believability" — that quality of seeming realistic but actually revealing far more about the inner workings of the characters than the words of a real-life conversation ever would. In other words, there are several conversations that seem extremely realistic, but do not seem to reveal anything new about the characters or their situations.
The phrase, "character development," doesn't properly apply to this novel, since one of its major themes is the main characters' lack of growth and self-actualization. However, one wishes there were more mystery and depth to what might be called the "character revealing" as the book progresses.
Finally, improvements could be made in the area of plot movement, in the sense that more events should be presented in such a way that the characters' driving motivations would be discernible without narrator comment.
I must also add, with frustration, that the manuscript was very poorly proofread, as there are an abundance of typographical errors. But that, of course, is not within the author's domain. I sincerely hope the publisher releases a second edition with these errors corrected!!
Above all, Haight has given the world a book rich with insight and points of interest. He is clearly a keen observer of human behavior and a deep and imaginative thinker. Those attributes, combined with his obvious mastery of using the English language both artistically and forcefully, lead me to expect that his future writings will be very much worth reading.