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The Chronicles of Gan #1
The Thorn
Three tribes are at war on the planet Gan, unaware that the sign of Christ's birth on an unknown world - Earth - is about to appear in the heavens.
During a bloody skirmish with Gideonite troops, Jonathan of Daniel spares Pekah, a young enemy soldier, gaining his trust forever. These two distant brothers from estranged tribes covenant with each other to end the war being waged by a self-proclaimed emperor, and soon discover the intentions of a far more dangerous foe named Rezon - a sinister general bent on ruling those he can bring into subjection and destroying all others.
In the end, Pekah's selfless bravery is the means by which all the tribes are united. But there are dissenters, and Rezon escapes a well-deserved fate. When the promised heavenly signs appear, will there be peace at last, or will the malefactors once again threaten the safety of them all?
During a bloody skirmish with Gideonite troops, Jonathan of Daniel spares Pekah, a young enemy soldier, gaining his trust forever. These two distant brothers from estranged tribes covenant with each other to end the war being waged by a self-proclaimed emperor, and soon discover the intentions of a far more dangerous foe named Rezon - a sinister general bent on ruling those he can bring into subjection and destroying all others.
In the end, Pekah's selfless bravery is the means by which all the tribes are united. But there are dissenters, and Rezon escapes a well-deserved fate. When the promised heavenly signs appear, will there be peace at last, or will the malefactors once again threaten the safety of them all?
300 pages, Paperback
First published March 16, 2010
About the author
Daron D. Fraley
5 books66 followersDaron Fraley was born in Powell, Wyoming, but doesn't consider himself a cowboy. Living in France for a couple of years provided him the opportunity to hone his cooking skills and to become addicted to good food and chocolate. Apart from his loving family, teaching and writing are his two most favorite things in the world. A classic computer geek, he still likes to fish and camp, makes a mean apple or pumpkin pie from scratch, and once fixed a gas clothes dryer using photocopier parts. With all of his interests in music, art, the sciences, and religion (especially religion), he would have been quite comfortable living during the Renaissance. Having toured chilly castles while in France, he is glad he didn't live during that time. This is his first novel.
After ten total years in the wonderful state of Indiana, Daron, his wife Jennifer, and their six children once again live in the beautiful Rockies, close to friends and family in Wyoming and Utah.
After ten total years in the wonderful state of Indiana, Daron, his wife Jennifer, and their six children once again live in the beautiful Rockies, close to friends and family in Wyoming and Utah.
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April 13, 2010
The Thorn is full of rich descriptions. The author has a great handle on helping the reader "see" the countryside, towns and the characters.
I must admit, I was a little confused at the beginning of this book about the religion. But as I got more into the book, I understood what Daron was doing.
The story takes place on a planet called Gan where three tribes were warring against the other, each wanting to rule, and many believe owning The Thorn is the key. But not everyone wants bloodshed.The Thorn is symbolic.
Daron mixes conflict, romance and religion in a clear way. I clearly "saw" Gan thanks to Daron's descriptions. The mountains, towns, forests and even tents were clearly defined.
Each character had their own voice and personality. I really wanted Daron's main characters to succeed at the same time wanting the bad guys to lose and lose big.
Good, clean, uplifting book.
I'll be waiting for the second book, Daron!
I must admit, I was a little confused at the beginning of this book about the religion. But as I got more into the book, I understood what Daron was doing.
The story takes place on a planet called Gan where three tribes were warring against the other, each wanting to rule, and many believe owning The Thorn is the key. But not everyone wants bloodshed.The Thorn is symbolic.
Daron mixes conflict, romance and religion in a clear way. I clearly "saw" Gan thanks to Daron's descriptions. The mountains, towns, forests and even tents were clearly defined.
Each character had their own voice and personality. I really wanted Daron's main characters to succeed at the same time wanting the bad guys to lose and lose big.
Good, clean, uplifting book.
I'll be waiting for the second book, Daron!
May 6, 2010
"THE THORN: Book One of the Chronicles of Gan"
by Daron Fraley
Daron Fraley’s “The Thorn, Book One of the Chronicles of Gan,” is a unique YA Speculative Fiction novel wrapped around a fascinating premise. Gan is a distant planet with three moons and two suns, whose people await heavenly signs that will announce the earthly birth of Christ, who they know only as “The One Who Would Suffer." The religious symbolism of Gan as one of the many “worlds without number” adds a refreshing perspective on this tale of good versus evil, and the quest to unite a divided people through hope in the promise of The Holy One.
“The Thorn” opens powerfully with an attack on the Danielite city of Hasor by Gideonite warriors who murder Samuel, the king, establishing the struggle between the three powerful, warring tribes, the offspring of three brothers—Daniel, Uzzah and Gideon.
The root of the conflict is centuries old, dating back to the first man on Gan--Noah, father of the three brothers. Before his death, Noah told his sons the prophecy regarding the coming of “The One Who Would Suffer,” before giving them each a blessing, charging them with a sacred responsibility to protect a legendary scepter that holds “the Thorn,” symbol of the Holy One’s foretold coming.
Noah also assigned duties to each tribe to insure that future generations would grow in peace and faith. Gideon and his people were to watch out for the welfare of the other tribes. Uzzah and his people were to serve in and around the temples, while Daniel received the birthright, making his tribe the ruling clan. But the tribe of Gideon rose up against their brethren, thrusting Gan into war.
In book one, Samuel is murdered for refusing to relinquish “the Thorn” and the whereabouts of his son and heir to the throne, Jonathan. Torn between his love for his father and his duty, Jonathan takes refuge in the woods where he watches Gideonite patrols march his kinsmen and Uzzahites away in captivity. Eventually, he sees his friend Eli, an Uzzahite, being led away. Jonathan wields his wondrous glowing sword, freeing Eli, and taking a young, reluctant Gideonite soldier captive. This soldier, named Pekah, becomes another of Jonathan’s allies, and a providential figure in Jonathan’s quest.
Fraley has created a primitive, albeit wondrous world which he describes with vivid detail. His efforts to draw the reader into this world sometimes results in long, descriptive passages that occasionally slow the read. Several chapters are laden with backstory that is essential, but presenting it in large blocks caused a few middle chapters to lag a bit. Don't let that deter you. I found the second half a solid page-turner and the ending compelling.
Pekah becomes the most charismatic character in this volume. Jonathan never quite rises to the heroic stature expected from a potential king and hero, but watching this character continue to grow and develop in future volumes will be a delight.
Though the cover gives the book a young YA feel, the story appeals equally to adults. The storyline could easily launch thoughtful, non-preachy family discussion on topics such as faith, loyalty, repentance, mercy and forgiveness. I hope parents will read this one with their children. Used in this manner, "The Thorn" exceeds being a satisfying read.
I expect this series to really take off. "The Thorn" proves Daron Fraley's ability to successfully crest the biggest hurdle—creating a marvelous world that challenges the imagination while presenting suppositions that touch us spiritually as well.
by Daron Fraley
Daron Fraley’s “The Thorn, Book One of the Chronicles of Gan,” is a unique YA Speculative Fiction novel wrapped around a fascinating premise. Gan is a distant planet with three moons and two suns, whose people await heavenly signs that will announce the earthly birth of Christ, who they know only as “The One Who Would Suffer." The religious symbolism of Gan as one of the many “worlds without number” adds a refreshing perspective on this tale of good versus evil, and the quest to unite a divided people through hope in the promise of The Holy One.
“The Thorn” opens powerfully with an attack on the Danielite city of Hasor by Gideonite warriors who murder Samuel, the king, establishing the struggle between the three powerful, warring tribes, the offspring of three brothers—Daniel, Uzzah and Gideon.
The root of the conflict is centuries old, dating back to the first man on Gan--Noah, father of the three brothers. Before his death, Noah told his sons the prophecy regarding the coming of “The One Who Would Suffer,” before giving them each a blessing, charging them with a sacred responsibility to protect a legendary scepter that holds “the Thorn,” symbol of the Holy One’s foretold coming.
Noah also assigned duties to each tribe to insure that future generations would grow in peace and faith. Gideon and his people were to watch out for the welfare of the other tribes. Uzzah and his people were to serve in and around the temples, while Daniel received the birthright, making his tribe the ruling clan. But the tribe of Gideon rose up against their brethren, thrusting Gan into war.
In book one, Samuel is murdered for refusing to relinquish “the Thorn” and the whereabouts of his son and heir to the throne, Jonathan. Torn between his love for his father and his duty, Jonathan takes refuge in the woods where he watches Gideonite patrols march his kinsmen and Uzzahites away in captivity. Eventually, he sees his friend Eli, an Uzzahite, being led away. Jonathan wields his wondrous glowing sword, freeing Eli, and taking a young, reluctant Gideonite soldier captive. This soldier, named Pekah, becomes another of Jonathan’s allies, and a providential figure in Jonathan’s quest.
Fraley has created a primitive, albeit wondrous world which he describes with vivid detail. His efforts to draw the reader into this world sometimes results in long, descriptive passages that occasionally slow the read. Several chapters are laden with backstory that is essential, but presenting it in large blocks caused a few middle chapters to lag a bit. Don't let that deter you. I found the second half a solid page-turner and the ending compelling.
Pekah becomes the most charismatic character in this volume. Jonathan never quite rises to the heroic stature expected from a potential king and hero, but watching this character continue to grow and develop in future volumes will be a delight.
Though the cover gives the book a young YA feel, the story appeals equally to adults. The storyline could easily launch thoughtful, non-preachy family discussion on topics such as faith, loyalty, repentance, mercy and forgiveness. I hope parents will read this one with their children. Used in this manner, "The Thorn" exceeds being a satisfying read.
I expect this series to really take off. "The Thorn" proves Daron Fraley's ability to successfully crest the biggest hurdle—creating a marvelous world that challenges the imagination while presenting suppositions that touch us spiritually as well.
December 16, 2010
Some time ago I was asked if I would participate in the Blog Tour for Daron D. Fraley's recently released debut novel The Thorn: Book One of The Chronicles of Gan. I agreed, even though I don't read speculative fiction for pleasure. My tastes run more toward mysteries, Regencies, and historical fiction.
I began reading the pdf file the publisher, Valor Publishing Group, provided. This had its difficulties, because epic works of this type have a multitude of characters and often, an off-world setting. Although there was a Glossary containing both places and characters (for which I was very thankful), flipping back to it in a computer file was not an easy task. Later, the physical book arrived, and I was much more comfortable in accessing both the Glossary and the Map of Gan, which the pdf had lacked.
Before I received the physical book, however, for ease of carrying the novel with me, I converted it to a format that could be read on my iPod touch. This made the reading go faster, as I wasn't tied to my computer. I even got used to the fact that I had inadvertently stripped out much of the formatting, so the chapter breaks and italics were gone. As I got immersed in the book, that didn't matter anymore.
I was gratified to find my fear of being bored was unfounded. Fraley weaves a grand story of action, intrigue, and loyalty that is not boring. Crisp writing and interesting characters mingle with a well-conceived plot.
Although it occurs in a galaxy far, far away, the tale is not set in the distant future, but in the past, concurrent to the period in Earth's history slightly before the birth of Christ. Here's the back-cover blurb:
Three tribes are at war on the planet Gan, unaware that the sign of Christ's birth on an unknown world--Earth--is about to appear in the heavens.
During a bloody skirmish with Gideonite troops, Jonathan of Daniel spares Pekah, a young enemy soldier, gaining his trust forever. These distant brothers from estranged tribes covenant with each other to end the war being waged by a self-proclaimed emperor, and soon discover the intentions of a far more dangerous foe--a sinister general bent on ruling those he can bring into subjection and destroying all others.
End blurb.
I did have occasion to wonder if Fraley's children are all boys, because some of the horse-play between a few characters seemed a mite juvenile, but that was a minor niggle. I look forward to reading the second book in the three-book series, Heaven's Garden.
I began reading the pdf file the publisher, Valor Publishing Group, provided. This had its difficulties, because epic works of this type have a multitude of characters and often, an off-world setting. Although there was a Glossary containing both places and characters (for which I was very thankful), flipping back to it in a computer file was not an easy task. Later, the physical book arrived, and I was much more comfortable in accessing both the Glossary and the Map of Gan, which the pdf had lacked.
Before I received the physical book, however, for ease of carrying the novel with me, I converted it to a format that could be read on my iPod touch. This made the reading go faster, as I wasn't tied to my computer. I even got used to the fact that I had inadvertently stripped out much of the formatting, so the chapter breaks and italics were gone. As I got immersed in the book, that didn't matter anymore.
I was gratified to find my fear of being bored was unfounded. Fraley weaves a grand story of action, intrigue, and loyalty that is not boring. Crisp writing and interesting characters mingle with a well-conceived plot.
Although it occurs in a galaxy far, far away, the tale is not set in the distant future, but in the past, concurrent to the period in Earth's history slightly before the birth of Christ. Here's the back-cover blurb:
Three tribes are at war on the planet Gan, unaware that the sign of Christ's birth on an unknown world--Earth--is about to appear in the heavens.
During a bloody skirmish with Gideonite troops, Jonathan of Daniel spares Pekah, a young enemy soldier, gaining his trust forever. These distant brothers from estranged tribes covenant with each other to end the war being waged by a self-proclaimed emperor, and soon discover the intentions of a far more dangerous foe--a sinister general bent on ruling those he can bring into subjection and destroying all others.
End blurb.
I did have occasion to wonder if Fraley's children are all boys, because some of the horse-play between a few characters seemed a mite juvenile, but that was a minor niggle. I look forward to reading the second book in the three-book series, Heaven's Garden.
June 4, 2010
Free your imagination.
Walk with me for just a bit. The way may be a bit foggy at first, but before you know it, your eyes will adjust to the possibilities that lie beyond the clouded horizon. What could have been. What might be.
Imagine being in heaven. I’m not sure if God lives in a house or not, but in my imagination, I see Him standing at the window of his bedroom, admiring the gold-paved streets. Their reflection shines cheerfully around heaven, and God smiles as He brings His attention to the day ahead.
Before leaving the room, He leans with curiosity over the solar system sitting on His dresser, admiring the freely spinning planets and twinkling galaxies. He notices every minute detail of Earth and shakes His head a bit when He sees an erring child. He knows every person. He loves them all.
After looking at Earth, God walks along His dresser, following the planets as they orbit around the Sun. Far beyond Neptune, He watches another planet, one He has named Gan. On it, He watches more of His children.
Life on other planets. I’ve approached this subject countless times with many friends and family. Who’s to say it isn’t possible? I had one person tell me, “I can’t even start to think down that line, and I feel like my head is going to explode. It creeps me out.”
But to me, it mystifies me. Although careful not to become too radical in my thinking, I allow little episodes of dreaming to take place in this direction. I’ve stepped into the fog of the unknown, but never allowed myself to wander there for long, for fear of becoming lost.
Courtesy of Daron Fraley
However, author Daron D. Fraley not only allowed his imagination to wonder into this fog, he eventually made sense of it in fiction form. When I stumbled upon his book, The Thorn, a while ago and read the excerpt, I instantly became curious. Daron Fraley considers his book as speculative fiction, a genre that I rarely read and know very little about. I admit I was a bit confused, which in turn caused me to read the first few chapters with a critical eye. But eventually, I became wrapped up in a world far from Earth, losing myself to the gripping story and interesting allegories. Filled with adventure and an exciting story plot, The Thorn pointed my mind to the possibilities, but ultimately allowed my imagination to tell the story.
I loved this book.
Walk with me for just a bit. The way may be a bit foggy at first, but before you know it, your eyes will adjust to the possibilities that lie beyond the clouded horizon. What could have been. What might be.
Imagine being in heaven. I’m not sure if God lives in a house or not, but in my imagination, I see Him standing at the window of his bedroom, admiring the gold-paved streets. Their reflection shines cheerfully around heaven, and God smiles as He brings His attention to the day ahead.
Before leaving the room, He leans with curiosity over the solar system sitting on His dresser, admiring the freely spinning planets and twinkling galaxies. He notices every minute detail of Earth and shakes His head a bit when He sees an erring child. He knows every person. He loves them all.
After looking at Earth, God walks along His dresser, following the planets as they orbit around the Sun. Far beyond Neptune, He watches another planet, one He has named Gan. On it, He watches more of His children.
Life on other planets. I’ve approached this subject countless times with many friends and family. Who’s to say it isn’t possible? I had one person tell me, “I can’t even start to think down that line, and I feel like my head is going to explode. It creeps me out.”
But to me, it mystifies me. Although careful not to become too radical in my thinking, I allow little episodes of dreaming to take place in this direction. I’ve stepped into the fog of the unknown, but never allowed myself to wander there for long, for fear of becoming lost.
Courtesy of Daron Fraley
However, author Daron D. Fraley not only allowed his imagination to wonder into this fog, he eventually made sense of it in fiction form. When I stumbled upon his book, The Thorn, a while ago and read the excerpt, I instantly became curious. Daron Fraley considers his book as speculative fiction, a genre that I rarely read and know very little about. I admit I was a bit confused, which in turn caused me to read the first few chapters with a critical eye. But eventually, I became wrapped up in a world far from Earth, losing myself to the gripping story and interesting allegories. Filled with adventure and an exciting story plot, The Thorn pointed my mind to the possibilities, but ultimately allowed my imagination to tell the story.
I loved this book.
April 3, 2010
I was able to read The Thorn last year but have had to wait until now to review it. Oh the pains of being an author with friends in high far-off places. Daron’s high and far-off place is the world of Gan.
Now Gan and The Thorn are Speculative writing at its best-why-because you can’t pigeonhole it as anything else and what he has in the book is so compelling.
Faith and a belief in Jesus Christ are paramount to characters motivations but this isn’t a Biblical tale, none of this takes place on Earth. Gan is aware of Earth, this is an important point, but the conflicts affecting the people of Gan are truly their own.
When I first heard about the story I thought it was the genre I call “Sword & Planet”. Gan is a planet with three moons and two blue sun’s, it has a very unusual sword, that is made of a bioluminescent crystal. There are epic struggles between the differing tribes of people jockeying for either power or freedom, but none of this quite makes it Sword & Planet. There are no monsters or magic or far-out gadgetry, and everything is run at roughly a Dark Ages level of technology.
The Thorn itself is the literal symbol of the right to rule and something I really liked about the novel were the roots and influences with classic material. The multiple viewpoints express how different people react to the same situation, in some ways it is a tragedy but there is hope. When things seem their grimmest, the light and guidance of the Other Side can come shining forth. The timeframe of The Thorn was a surprise and yet only gave the novel weight. If you can imagine a cross between Braveheart and the Chronicles of Narnia you may be on the right track, just don‘t expect any talking beavers.
Now this may seem a strange combination, but Daron makes it all work by peopling Gan with great characters, surprising twists and standout examples of courage and faith. No one has written anything quite like this before and that’s why Daron needs to keep doing it.
Now Gan and The Thorn are Speculative writing at its best-why-because you can’t pigeonhole it as anything else and what he has in the book is so compelling.
Faith and a belief in Jesus Christ are paramount to characters motivations but this isn’t a Biblical tale, none of this takes place on Earth. Gan is aware of Earth, this is an important point, but the conflicts affecting the people of Gan are truly their own.
When I first heard about the story I thought it was the genre I call “Sword & Planet”. Gan is a planet with three moons and two blue sun’s, it has a very unusual sword, that is made of a bioluminescent crystal. There are epic struggles between the differing tribes of people jockeying for either power or freedom, but none of this quite makes it Sword & Planet. There are no monsters or magic or far-out gadgetry, and everything is run at roughly a Dark Ages level of technology.
The Thorn itself is the literal symbol of the right to rule and something I really liked about the novel were the roots and influences with classic material. The multiple viewpoints express how different people react to the same situation, in some ways it is a tragedy but there is hope. When things seem their grimmest, the light and guidance of the Other Side can come shining forth. The timeframe of The Thorn was a surprise and yet only gave the novel weight. If you can imagine a cross between Braveheart and the Chronicles of Narnia you may be on the right track, just don‘t expect any talking beavers.
Now this may seem a strange combination, but Daron makes it all work by peopling Gan with great characters, surprising twists and standout examples of courage and faith. No one has written anything quite like this before and that’s why Daron needs to keep doing it.
February 12, 2012
Another World of Prophecies and Miracles
This book is a sort of allegory. It seems to follow Hebrew Old Testament culture much more closely than the usual New Testament focus, as in C.S. Lewis and Bunyan's Pilgrim's Progress. It takes place on a distant planet, one with multiple suns and moons, but everything else is Earth-like. The detail of it being a different world seems to matter only because there is a prophecy about a King and Savior, clearly a Christ figure, who will be born on a far distant world and visit all His children wherever they live.
The story has an ensemble cast, concentrating on Jonathan, the heir of Daniel, Eli, an Uzzite Priest, and Pekah, a Gideonite soldier. It is about reconciliation and what it takes to overcome ancient and modern selfish ambition. It relies heavily on prophesies that sound somewhat biblical and has recurring miracles.
The Thorn itself is a crystal scepter into which is imbedded a bloody thorn, an ancient symbol of a time when the three tribes of the story were three brothers, Daniel, Gideon and Uzzah. The tribe of Gideon becomes rebellious and power-hungry. They scheme to take the Thorn as a mystical symbol of rule. Hebrew cultural references and stories similar to Old Testament events, including a priestly class and judges are common.
There is much good in the story, courage, fortitude, patience, friendship. There is some romance, too. The bad guys are very bad. Pekah grows and changes and there are good moral lessons. It is written somewhat awkwardly, changing points of view and using a stilted style and strange vocabulary. The faith it is trying to teach is hard to understand. The Scriptures say that miracles convince unbelievers but the heavy reliance on mysticism to fix things that go wrong seems a weakness in the story.
This book is a sort of allegory. It seems to follow Hebrew Old Testament culture much more closely than the usual New Testament focus, as in C.S. Lewis and Bunyan's Pilgrim's Progress. It takes place on a distant planet, one with multiple suns and moons, but everything else is Earth-like. The detail of it being a different world seems to matter only because there is a prophecy about a King and Savior, clearly a Christ figure, who will be born on a far distant world and visit all His children wherever they live.
The story has an ensemble cast, concentrating on Jonathan, the heir of Daniel, Eli, an Uzzite Priest, and Pekah, a Gideonite soldier. It is about reconciliation and what it takes to overcome ancient and modern selfish ambition. It relies heavily on prophesies that sound somewhat biblical and has recurring miracles.
The Thorn itself is a crystal scepter into which is imbedded a bloody thorn, an ancient symbol of a time when the three tribes of the story were three brothers, Daniel, Gideon and Uzzah. The tribe of Gideon becomes rebellious and power-hungry. They scheme to take the Thorn as a mystical symbol of rule. Hebrew cultural references and stories similar to Old Testament events, including a priestly class and judges are common.
There is much good in the story, courage, fortitude, patience, friendship. There is some romance, too. The bad guys are very bad. Pekah grows and changes and there are good moral lessons. It is written somewhat awkwardly, changing points of view and using a stilted style and strange vocabulary. The faith it is trying to teach is hard to understand. The Scriptures say that miracles convince unbelievers but the heavy reliance on mysticism to fix things that go wrong seems a weakness in the story.
June 4, 2010
Daron has talent as a writer when it comes to descriptions and emotions. They're enough that they help readers picture things, and yet did not go overboard and get boring. I felt drawn into the story through Jonathan and especially Pekah--their experiences, thoughts, and reunions with loved ones. There were many instances when I actually got chills at what was happening. I found myself yearning to understand what was going on in this world, and was happy with how things played out.
As authors we've been told to not use dreams in our stories--they tend to pull people out of the book, or don't help further things the way the writer wants them to. I found this to not apply to The Thorn. Two significant dreams occur, and the way Daron used them propelled the story forward, keeping my interest. (They were dang cool! And the ending of the book--holy cow! The battle scene was awesome, and tons of super-cool things happen! *ahem.* Sorry about that. Back to the serious review. :-))
My favorite character was Pekah--his humble, unassuming ways endeared him to me. His experiences placed him on a pedestal, and yet he didn't try to make himself important in the eyes of other people.
I loved the contrast between the characters: Rachel and Jonathan, Pekah, Jasher, Abigail and Eli. I especially felt close to Abigail--a humble, selfless, sweet and even-tempered young woman who goes through enough trials to last a lifetime.
If you are looking for a book with a calm, peaceful story which focuses a great deal on character development, the battle between right and wrong, and uniting long-estranged brothers, pick up The Thorn. You'll be happy you did.
As authors we've been told to not use dreams in our stories--they tend to pull people out of the book, or don't help further things the way the writer wants them to. I found this to not apply to The Thorn. Two significant dreams occur, and the way Daron used them propelled the story forward, keeping my interest. (They were dang cool! And the ending of the book--holy cow! The battle scene was awesome, and tons of super-cool things happen! *ahem.* Sorry about that. Back to the serious review. :-))
My favorite character was Pekah--his humble, unassuming ways endeared him to me. His experiences placed him on a pedestal, and yet he didn't try to make himself important in the eyes of other people.
I loved the contrast between the characters: Rachel and Jonathan, Pekah, Jasher, Abigail and Eli. I especially felt close to Abigail--a humble, selfless, sweet and even-tempered young woman who goes through enough trials to last a lifetime.
If you are looking for a book with a calm, peaceful story which focuses a great deal on character development, the battle between right and wrong, and uniting long-estranged brothers, pick up The Thorn. You'll be happy you did.
September 18, 2010
"The Thorn" by first-time author Daron D. Fraley is a unique look into a theology that is frequently overlooked - as a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, I've been taught that other worlds have been created that also house persons like ourselves, seeking to find our way back to our Heavenly Father. "The Thorn" takes place on one of these planets, a place known as Gan.
But while this theology was the jumping-off point for the premise, it's only a subtle part of the story and won't be a sticking point for someone who doesn't believe the idea. Rather, the book focuses on the action taking place on this world, which is a land of conflict as three tribes battle it out for the right to rule. The world is very similar to Earth, as it would have to be in order to support human life, and everything that takes place on it could easily have happened on our world. There are no magical devices or mystical occurances, and everything that takes place in a miraculous way is similar to something that happened on our world as documented in the Bible.
The descriptions in this book are its strength. Fraley is an excellent writer of description. He has also woven symbolism throughout - the theme of water occurs many times throughout the book, and in questioning him, he admits this was on purpose, to remind the reader of Christ as "The Living Water." As a sidenote, Fraley's short stories also feature water as a key part of the plot.
Readers who enjoy dramatization of scriptural stories and fiction set in those times will appreciate "The Thorn."
But while this theology was the jumping-off point for the premise, it's only a subtle part of the story and won't be a sticking point for someone who doesn't believe the idea. Rather, the book focuses on the action taking place on this world, which is a land of conflict as three tribes battle it out for the right to rule. The world is very similar to Earth, as it would have to be in order to support human life, and everything that takes place on it could easily have happened on our world. There are no magical devices or mystical occurances, and everything that takes place in a miraculous way is similar to something that happened on our world as documented in the Bible.
The descriptions in this book are its strength. Fraley is an excellent writer of description. He has also woven symbolism throughout - the theme of water occurs many times throughout the book, and in questioning him, he admits this was on purpose, to remind the reader of Christ as "The Living Water." As a sidenote, Fraley's short stories also feature water as a key part of the plot.
Readers who enjoy dramatization of scriptural stories and fiction set in those times will appreciate "The Thorn."
April 6, 2010
I was very excited to review The Thorn because Daron Fraley has formulated a winning plot for the LDS adventure-loving audience: Christ's "other sheep" on a distant planet await the signs of his birth, while in the midst of their own conflicts. Intriguing, no?
Fraley did a great job of incorporating adventure, fighting, ancient relics, with a bit of a love story in the mix--this, with his wonderful idea for a story this completes the recipe for a brilliant adventure novel. He also utilized key portions of the novel to include his very real testimony of the Savior and his atonement applying to all people, everywhere.
However, in places the high points of conflict resolved rather abruptly: a big build up with a quick, too-tidy solution. In creating a new culture, Fraley was faced with the writing challenge of also creating a language vernacular, which he solved by writing dialogue with a very formal voice throughout. This was a bit distracting as characters conversing with each other often read as sounding exactly the same.
The Thorn is descriptive and well written in comparison with much of the currently available LDS fiction. The protagonists exemplify high moral values including loyalty, quickness to forgive, and moral cleanliness which would make this a good book for some young adult readers. Be aware that The Thorn includes scenes of startling and sometimes graphic violence which may be upsetting to some readers.
Thanks to Valor Publishing and Daron Fraley for a review copy of The Thorn.
Fraley did a great job of incorporating adventure, fighting, ancient relics, with a bit of a love story in the mix--this, with his wonderful idea for a story this completes the recipe for a brilliant adventure novel. He also utilized key portions of the novel to include his very real testimony of the Savior and his atonement applying to all people, everywhere.
However, in places the high points of conflict resolved rather abruptly: a big build up with a quick, too-tidy solution. In creating a new culture, Fraley was faced with the writing challenge of also creating a language vernacular, which he solved by writing dialogue with a very formal voice throughout. This was a bit distracting as characters conversing with each other often read as sounding exactly the same.
The Thorn is descriptive and well written in comparison with much of the currently available LDS fiction. The protagonists exemplify high moral values including loyalty, quickness to forgive, and moral cleanliness which would make this a good book for some young adult readers. Be aware that The Thorn includes scenes of startling and sometimes graphic violence which may be upsetting to some readers.
Thanks to Valor Publishing and Daron Fraley for a review copy of The Thorn.
December 12, 2010
First reads.
A story that has two goals: the main character wants peace between the three tribes and the tribe of Daniel is waiting to give the scepter and sword to the one that is said to come to Gan. In the story it’s self you will hear talk of peace, forgiveness, and working together to stop the war start by the emperor of the Gideonites. The book can be divided into three parts them (Jonathan, Eli, and Pekah) going to see the emperor base on a vision stopping General Rezon from continuing the war, and the aftermath.
The book was a lot like reading a story from the bible, with the names and the feeling of the story. It was also like I was traveling with them as they went on their journey of bring peace to the tribes and the events that unfolded.
Inside the book is acknowledgements, a glossary, the tribes, the characters in the book, and a map. The chapters in the book were from short to average so most of the time it will feel like one is reading faster then they are. The last chapter is a sneak peek of the second book.
The e-book is version is 171 pages compare to the paperback version which is 297 pages. Both have the same stuff in there, just a different font.
A story that has two goals: the main character wants peace between the three tribes and the tribe of Daniel is waiting to give the scepter and sword to the one that is said to come to Gan. In the story it’s self you will hear talk of peace, forgiveness, and working together to stop the war start by the emperor of the Gideonites. The book can be divided into three parts them (Jonathan, Eli, and Pekah) going to see the emperor base on a vision stopping General Rezon from continuing the war, and the aftermath.
The book was a lot like reading a story from the bible, with the names and the feeling of the story. It was also like I was traveling with them as they went on their journey of bring peace to the tribes and the events that unfolded.
Inside the book is acknowledgements, a glossary, the tribes, the characters in the book, and a map. The chapters in the book were from short to average so most of the time it will feel like one is reading faster then they are. The last chapter is a sneak peek of the second book.
The e-book is version is 171 pages compare to the paperback version which is 297 pages. Both have the same stuff in there, just a different font.
April 28, 2010
I was not sure what to expect with this book when I received it and when I read through the glossary and cast of characters I was afraid there would be too many people to keep straight. I'm so glad to say that I was wrong about that. The premise is fascinating: that there are other people on other worlds who are also God's children and for whom Jesus Christ is their Savior. Much like those people of the scriptures, these people are also waiting for the Savior's birth.
The story flows well with excellent imagery and descriptions, as well as likeable characters. Faith and loyalty play a strong role as good triumphs over evil.
I was trying to explain the premise to my husband and while it's fictional, it has elements of science fiction and fantasy, but isn't a novel from either of those genres. I've seen it compared to Orson Scott Card and Narnia and I can agree with those comparisons. Those who enjoy scripture stories will enjoy this book with its battles and tribes, romance, prophecy and miracles. I look forward to the next one in the trilogy.
The story flows well with excellent imagery and descriptions, as well as likeable characters. Faith and loyalty play a strong role as good triumphs over evil.
I was trying to explain the premise to my husband and while it's fictional, it has elements of science fiction and fantasy, but isn't a novel from either of those genres. I've seen it compared to Orson Scott Card and Narnia and I can agree with those comparisons. Those who enjoy scripture stories will enjoy this book with its battles and tribes, romance, prophecy and miracles. I look forward to the next one in the trilogy.
February 26, 2011
I finally managed to find time to sit down and read this wonderful book, and I regret that I put it off for so lone. I was very happy that I spent the time to read. As a first book of a series, Mr. Fraley lays a wonderful foundation to and even greater novel.
The imagery used allowed you to see every scene. You follow the characters on their journey and feel their emotions through how the story is told.
I could go through and talk about the plot of the story as others have done, but I feel it was more important to talk about the quality of the story.
Yes, it makes you think. Yes, it makes you feel. It does everything you'd expect from a seasoned writer, not a new one.
I for one am looking forward to more from this talented artist.
The imagery used allowed you to see every scene. You follow the characters on their journey and feel their emotions through how the story is told.
I could go through and talk about the plot of the story as others have done, but I feel it was more important to talk about the quality of the story.
Yes, it makes you think. Yes, it makes you feel. It does everything you'd expect from a seasoned writer, not a new one.
I for one am looking forward to more from this talented artist.
December 11, 2015
While an interesting story I feel it bares mentioning, although listed as a "Christian" fantasy on Amazon.com, it is not of the Evangelical Christian Faith in nature. While biblical names are used and its ideals and beliefs bare resemblance to Christianity they are not Christian in origin, rather LDS (Mormon) in nature. Still an enjoyable read. Yet I would caution any Evangelical Christian to be aware of its LDS doctrine and principles.
As far as writing goes, the author's characters were a bit flimsy, his building good but conclusions too swift and weak, and the setting, names and general structure of society too familiar with our own. So while an interesting read not one I would recommend.
As far as writing goes, the author's characters were a bit flimsy, his building good but conclusions too swift and weak, and the setting, names and general structure of society too familiar with our own. So while an interesting read not one I would recommend.
October 2, 2010
When three men, each from a different tribe, unite under difficult times, they determine to bring the tribes of their world together. To do so they face a large ferocious army that has been taught lies for generations. This army has superior weapons and armor. Betrayal, murder, and secret oaths are also the tools of their formidable enemy. Will faith and righteousness (and some skill with swords and arrows) bring the three “brothers” the peace they seek? And are the dreams visions of hope or of warning?
The Thorn is a compelling story of loyalty, the healing power of forgiveness, the strength of brotherhood, and the evil that will always try to destroy that.
The Thorn is a compelling story of loyalty, the healing power of forgiveness, the strength of brotherhood, and the evil that will always try to destroy that.
July 13, 2014
I greatly enjoyed this book. It was awesome and thought-provoking to read about a people living on another planet who are awaiting the birth of Christ on our world. The rich and detailed descriptions of the settings and the likable and intriguing characters were wonderful. I loved how the author depicted the characters' religion, and the beliefs and rituals associated with it. The only thing I didn't like was how rushed some of the events and character development was...things seemed to happen a bit too quickly to seem very realistic sometimes. But still a great read that I would definitely recommend.
November 5, 2012
3.5. This was a well written story with a cool concept about 3 tribes on the planet Gan, and the war that they are trying to stop. The settings were great--two suns crossing each other during the day; I really liked the author's descriptions of these other-worldly phenomenon. I liked the character Pekah a lot. The only reason I'm not giving it a 4 is because the story didn't suck me in; it seemed slow at times. It took me a while to finish, but I liked it once I completed it. I'll probably read the next book, because the teaser was quite riveting and I anticipate a lot more action in the next plot.
April 5, 2010
I really liked "The Thorn". Daron Fraley has a very good imagination and some very entertaining ideas. My son and I read this together. We both loved it. I found his idea of having the setting occur in another world to be an interesting and a thought provoking interpretation of scripture. Taking this course gave him a lot of freedom in creating this new world and I think he did a great job of it. His characters are very likeable and I am anxious to see the next adventure. I highly recommend this book for anyone and suggest that young adults will really enjoy it as well.
April 8, 2010
As LDS fiction goes, this book had a good story line. It had characters with high morals, was not too graphic, and did have a nice spiritual element to it. I had a hard time with the actions of two of the main characters because they read like teenage boys and not grown men. The conflicts were good, but when the time came to resolve them they were done a little too quick and neat for my taste. The writing itself is clean and I never had any moments were I was confused about what was going on, but I did have a few Yeah Right moments.
November 22, 2010
It is rare that I run across a book that makes me sit back and think, "Wow, I never really thought about that before, but it makes sense." The Thorn takes us through a wonderful journey of how Christianity might span beyond the confines of our small planet, and what that might mean for those elsewhere. It is not a deep technical evaluation like a traditional science fiction novel, but an easy read that readers of all backgrounds can enjoy. The freshness of the thought process and uniqueness of the ideas make The Thorn a must read.
May 17, 2011
Very good book!! I downloaded it onto my Nook for free, thanks to the suggestion from Tristi Pinkston. It's a long book, 600+ pages, but it was a really fast read for me. I had a hard time getting into it, I wish that I had known up front that it was based on a different planet. The talk of the multiple moons and suns, and the glowstones had me really confused. But then, the story really pulled me in. I got really involved with each of the characters (loved the 3 main characters - "Nate", Eli, and Pekah) and actually got teary eyed a few times in the book. Great story! Thanks Tristi!
August 25, 2010
An ancient war between three brothers . . . a legendary scepter that must be protected . . . the looming prophecy of the Holy One . . . In The Chronicles of Gan, Daron Fraley creates a world of three moons that is hauntingly memorable and captivating. With the potential to become a classic, The Thorn will catch you in an intricate web of war, religion, family loyalty, and love—all intertwining into one engaging tale.
June 17, 2010
Daron Fraley (the author) is a great writer--the book flows very smoothly and I was able to get a glimpse into his world very clearly through his descriptive writing and good dialogue. I liked this book...it is interesting to think how even though there are other worlds that God has created, ALL of God's children experience the same feelings of love, hate, guilt, and are all searching for meaning in our lives.
November 27, 2010
Beautifully written, Daron Fraley is clearly a writer of talent and imagination. This story takes place on another world, with people like us, (well like us 2000 years ago), and it reads very much like a fantasy novel. I had some trouble keeping the characters straight, as I do whenever I attempt to read a fantasy novel, which I don't often do btw. But I liked this one.
December 30, 2010
The Thorn is a beautiful fantasy story of hope, faith, and miracles set in an earth-like world with two suns and three moons, and an ancient messianic prophesy. The characters drew me in and I wanted to know more. There were a few times when I wished the story to move along, but I appreciated Fraley's world-building and practiced my patience. These are characters and a land worth cheering for.
September 7, 2010
This story is set on another world called Gan during the anticipated birth of the Savior. All the characters in this book are engaging, especially the main two, Jonathan and Pekah, and there really isn't a boring moment. Of course, with the warring tribes and thirst for power, how could there be? :-)The ending left me looking forward to the next book in the series. Very good read.
September 5, 2012
Great read. Did not have many characters which made the book flow very smoothly and easy to follow. I would recommend this book to individuals who love action, compassion, and purpose. Christianity was present throughout the book which gave it a gentle message about what God would do if you trust and believe in Him. I could not put the book down, especially at the very end.
March 18, 2010
I did not expect to love this book but I did. The story is set on another world where they know of Christ but know that he is to be born somewhere else. There's adventure, romance, discussions of deep gospel topics, conversion and miracles and the main characters work through their challenges.
July 21, 2010
Good fast paced story with interesting characters and descriptions. There is no occult powers or wizardry in this world, which is nice. The author does a great job of describing the scenes so you can see what is going on.
October 22, 2010
I absolutely love the concept of this book--other sheep on other planets!
The topic is bold and creative and worthy of
more consideration. I will be interested to
learn more about Gan in future chronicals.
The topic is bold and creative and worthy of
more consideration. I will be interested to
learn more about Gan in future chronicals.
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September 10, 2010Once I started this book, I couldn't stop reading it! The Thorn is very descriptive, full of adventure and kept me interested. I was also spiritually touched by this book. I am excited to have my teenage boys read it as well. Thanks Daron for the great read!
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