I expected to love this book because I read so many great reviews about it. I felt that the plot was predictable. I also thought that the historical updates and the way she tried to touch on all the major events happening in American history during the time the story is set felt very forced. Another issue that stopped me from really enjoying the book was the overstatement of the characters' feelings and thoughts. In my opinion, using the "show, don't tell" technique would have helped the story flow much more smoothly.
The sex scenes were too much. There was one that was 6 pages long. They were so much more intricately described than the rest of the book. I wish that creative imagery would have been used throughout the entire book. Aside from the sex scenes and sex-related issues, this story didn't really seem to be adult-level reading.
Also, none of the characters seemed to be very complex. This contributed to the predictability of the plot. Every character was very one-dimensional. Randolph, especially, was overly idealized. He was portrayed as the absolute perfect guy who could never be attracted to anyone else or tempted to do anything wrong. It made the story unbelievable. Jenna was the typical modest, lower class, good girl. Angela was the stereotypical jezebel with no complexity whatsoever. Just an incomprehensible obsession with Randolph that obviously had nothing to do with love. It would have been interesting if her story was more developed.
A lot of the side characters had the same personality - especially, Randolph's friends.
Jenna's friends were more interesting, but not really developed well. There would just be brief, intermittent updates about their lives. Their relationships with their friends did not vividly portray any depth or real love. Their friends seemed to exist only to further the love story.
As for the love story, it wasn't very original. It followed a commonly used formula for star-crossed lovers. The "love-at-first-sight" meeting and the inexplicable attraction Jenna and Randolph felt toward each other wasn't portrayed in a vivid or believable manner. It was just stated, repeatedly.
At the end, when there was a sort of mini-sequel about Randolph's son, I had no interest in reading about him. From the first few pages, I got the sense that he was just another flat character about to experience his own unbelievable love story. So, I did not even finish it.
Overall, even though it was easy to figure out where the story was going, Jenna was a likeable character. She wasn't very complex but it was easy to relate to her values, so, of course, I was rooting for her.