Even the cover tells of a cheapo B category novel that doesn't require much thinking, but whattehell, another flimsy little nothing for night-shifts.
Ok, so ended up better than what I expected, despite the garish cover. The imagery was excellent and at times it was surprisingly funny and fresh.
The POV character is likable enough, despite the slight Mary-Sue thing going on for her - she views herself as a silly little klutz, oh-so-boring, oh-so-random (is it just me, or is this thing really overused in novels with 1st pers/sing female protagonists?) while everyone else around her is rapt with her beauty and general awesomeness (definitely overused). All the hot guys are falling for her, but (while shagging everything that moves) she only falls for hot guy no.1, who seems to be spurning her first. But that's only because he wants to protect her and doesn't deem himself worthy of her!!!
In the end (could you guess?) she ends up with hot guy no.1 (he gave me fits of yawn, and being a schizophrenic didn't make him any more interesting. Not a bit.)
The sex scenes spun a bit out of control, I mean pages and pages and pages of stuff going on, and it still goes on and still, and he still hadn't stuck it into any of her openings and I catch myself groaning inwards 'God, will this ever end??' A bit of editing wouldn't've hurt.
All the faeries have fascinating, exciting, dangerous lives, are stunning with supermodel/dancer bodies, are oozing color and glitter as they flit around on flimsy, sparkly wings. The humans in contrast, are murky shadows looming awkwardly in the background, with their dull, grey jobs and dull, grey lives, yet for some obscure reason they are supposed to be in a superior position? Based on what, exactly?
Also, vampires. Please, just... leave me alone with vampires already!!
The author abuses the adjectives sticky, wet, sweaty, sweet, dirty, to the point where I wanted to rub my hand that held the kindle on my pants.
All in all it was better than how it sounds (but picking apart mistakes is so much more fun), yet I think Erica Hayes is not gonna be my guilty pleasure.