I've been going back and forth on how to rate this one. I mean what can you do with two hundred poems. It's like this: Some cut deep, are dead on, all punch and polish; then there are those, maybe half, that are just words on paper, bounce off you like the local newscast. I've just realized...It seems I've forgotten my stupid notes. Which means that I'm left with my stupid memory.
I heard this discussion on NPR, someone said that poetry should be approached as music, where you gather its essence and experience the feel of the thing. As with music, discovering what's going to hook in is unpredictable and wholly subjective. For example, as in tune as I am with the tastes of my closest friend, I'll send him a hundred songs and he'll hold on to may four or five. And while I can appreciate a skilled artist, even in the face of real talent and all the richness it produces, it doesn't necessarily move me in the way that counts. Once in while, you’ll begin to read, your heart will start to build its rhythm, your breathing will pause in the tension of it, you vision narrows, the world becomes unsettled, and a perfect verse crystallizes an idea you’ve been searching after and leaves you sick with it.
For example I remember this one cold:
I Have Longed to Move Away
I have longed to move away
from the hissing of a spent lie
from the old terror's continual cry
growing more terrible as the day
goes over the hill into the deep sea.
I have longed to move away
from the repetition of salutes
from there are ghosts in the air
and ghostly echoes on paper
and the thunder of calls and notes.
I have longed to move away, but am afraid,
some life, yet unspent, might explode
from the old lie, burning on the ground,
and crackling into the air, leave me half blind.
Neither by night's ancient fear,
the parting of hat from hair,
pursed lips at the receiver,
shall I fall to death's feather.
By these I would not care to die,
half convention and half lie.
This is to say: While I'd love to spare a reader the sorting of junk from the incendiary, really, I can just note what worked for me.
O.K., I have retrieved my notes and come back to finish up.
I like this one out loud:
Let It Be Known
Let it be known that little live but lies,
Love-lies, and god-lies, and lies-to-please,
Let children know, and old men at their gates,
that this is lies that moans departure,
and that is lies that, after the old men die,
Declare their souls, let children know, live after.
In no particular order, I’ve stored away copies of these into my hard drive:
And Death Shall Have No Dominion
Elegy
You Shall Not Despair
Now
Paper and Sticks
Poem
There Was a Saviour
In Her Lying Down Head
After the Funeral
On a Wedding Anniversary
With Windmills Turning Wrong Directions
Love in the Asylum
Many of the poems were too dense and convoluted for me to enjoy; they seemed esoteric and unnaturally dense with some unholy combination of complexity, macabre, and viscera.
I did, however, enjoy the simple craft of his poems completed before sixteen. I took it hard that he was so good so young; it undermines my hope that I might mature into a gifted writer.
You Shall Not Despair
You shall not despair
Because I have forsaken you
Or cast you love aside;
There is a greater love than mine
Which can comfort you
And touch you with softer hands.
I am no longer
Friendly and beautiful to you;
Your body cannot gladden me,
Nor the splendour of your dark hair,
But I do not humiliate you;
You shall be taken sweetly again And soothed with slow tears;
You shall be loved enough.
When Your Furious Motion
When your furious motion is steadied,
And your clamour stopped,
And when the bright wheel of your turning voice is stilled,
Your step will remain about to fall.
So will your voice vibrate
And its edge cut the surface,
So, then, will the dark cloth of your hair
Flow uneasily behind you.
This ponderous flower
Which leans one way,
Weighed strangely down upon you
Until you could bear it no longer
And bent under it,
While its violet shells broke and parted.
When you are gone
The scent of the great flower will stay,
Burning its sweet path clearer than before.
Press, press, and clasp steadily;
You shall not let go;
Chain the strong voice
And grip the inexorable song,
Or throw it, stone by stone,
Into the sky.
See what I mean.