Got this for free, and thankful for that. Trite, boring, same old tired plot with a kidnapping and rescue. Ugh. I made it 64% of the way into this book before I just couldn’t go on. I didn’t care about the characters or what was happening to them. I put this book down for a while and picked it back up, only to skim through the dense narration to get to the dialogue. Pages and pages of narration only = too much telling instead of showing.
Also, the surest sign for me that a book is lacking a substantive plot is when body parts are discussed within the first 20% of the book. Here, it was on page 5 that we first learned the man desired a woman. This coincided with another tired paranormal romance cliche, that of the fated mate or soulmate. I have no problem with the idea itself, but as is done in so many novels, the way it is presented, illustrated and worked into the storyline was not ergonomic. It was rigid, forced, presented without finesse or nuance. "Look here is this woman. I want her. My [insert animal] wants her, as evidenced by my xyz. How can I explain to her that she is my soulmate? My brother in law just died and we think it may have been a targeted killing, threatening our entire existence, but let me stop and lust after this stranger." ugh. This idea is so overdone that if an author wants to write it, s/he must get creative. There's no creativity here, and I don't even care enough about the characters to find out why the brother-in-law was killed.