Really a 3.5 star read.
Characters: 7, Wendy was sometimes relatable and sometimes confusingly obtuse, but Hook, Smee, Peter, Tink, Rowan, and the Lost Boys were more or less their own independent characters with (at least a little bit) personalities distinguishable from the others. The writing tends to be explicit about action, but less so about character thoughts so I didn't feel confident about any single character.
Atmosphere: 7, the setting is well described and I could easily picture most of the Neverland as it was written. It doesn't hurt that this is a retelling/twist on such a beloved classic, that anyone can picture the lush jungle island and pirate schooner easily.
Writing: 6, the writing was not to my style. It was heavily metaphorical, which made it a dense read, and it also went on too long in many places (including just overall with the story). This fits with the original Peter Pan by J.M. Barrie, but just wasn't my jam.
Plot: 7, a unique take on Peter Pan that allows Wendy some much-needed agency (and sexifies things with Captain Hook) while maintaining the themes of growing up. Unlike the original, which was charming in its obvious love for the fantastical possibilities of youth, Hook & Jill focuses on the charms of growing up- autonomy, growth, knowing yourself, gaining (limited) power, and falling in love. It juxtaposes the toxicity of being immature/childish in a world where it's natural to grow old with the toxicity of possessive relationships (both friendship and romantic).
Intrigue: 5, enough of this book was tedious (almost every page had cloaked metaphors for growing up, regression, autonomy, sex, etc.) that I had to force myself to finish it. The outcome is pretty much assured from the start, so there wasn't a lot of plot tension keeping me going, and the characters were distant enough that I wasn't engaged in their journey on my own.
Logic: 8, building off the childish non-logic of the original, the world-building of this book involves a level of fairy magic that's explained and deepens the established Indian tribe, pirate crew, crocodile, and other elements. Every character acts in accordance with their motives, even when those motives are conflicting, twisted, confusing (for them, not the reader), or not explicitly stated.
Enjoyment: 6, the cleverness of the story and the emotional impact of the growing-up metaphor were positives, but it dragged too much for me to really love it.