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Compromised
When her con-man father is sent to prison, Maya sets out from Reno, Nevada, for Boise, Idaho, hoping to stay out of foster care by finding an aunt she never knew existed, but a fellow runaway complicates her plans.
320 pages, Library Binding
First published April 21, 2010
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Heidi Ayarbe
14 books96 followersI spent 23 years growing up and living in Nevada then have spent the last almost-17 living and traveling around the world with my Colombian husband. I've gone down Class IV Rapids (called THE FROG BLENDER) on my butt in Nepal, been thrown down by gusts of wind hiking in Torres del Paine, gone gator looking in the Amazon, and have climbed up a Mayan pyramid at midnight during a full moon. None of that compares to the joy, drama, and fatigue of motherhood.
Much of my time is spent thinking: What if? And then I spend the rest of my time with BIC (butt-in-chair) inspiration.
I have settled in Colombia, South America with my husband and two daughters. When I'm not thinking "what if", I spend my time wiping pureed food substances off my clothes and wondering, "What's that smell?"
Much of my time is spent thinking: What if? And then I spend the rest of my time with BIC (butt-in-chair) inspiration.
I have settled in Colombia, South America with my husband and two daughters. When I'm not thinking "what if", I spend my time wiping pureed food substances off my clothes and wondering, "What's that smell?"
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January 22, 2012
A beautiful and heartbreaking tale that really opened my eyes on some of the issues in this world.
I am 14 years old and I live a pretty good life. I get good marks in school and I have a kick-ass family that puts up with me. Yet, sometimes, I realize that I can be the most unappreciative brat in the universe. Reading this book made me really appreciate what I have because chances are, if you are reading this, you are/have been spoiled and we all need a good dose of reality that some people aren't as lucky as we are.
My grandma used to tell me all the time that I had a wool blanket over my eyes and I was in my own little Sabrina bubble where the world was filled with puppies and hearts. That was okay when I was younger, ignorant, but now that I am older, I need to start facing the facts. Teens my age, and younger, are leading terrible lives. Some are forced to run away even. And here I am complaining that I couldn't see the movie while some other girl is thanking her stars that she found food that night.
But enough of this. The book Compromised takes us into the life of Maya who is put into the foster care system after her father, a con man, is arrested. Maya is left homeless, parentless and with nothing but her brain (which is one of her best tools by far).
We learn of the misfortunes that happen in the foster care and how hard it is to survive from the other kids in it. Maya has to defend herself from attacks while keeping onto the hope that it will all be okay.
It isn't.
It is a sad truth but a hard-breaking reality. No, she is not going to suddenly get her father back and live a happily ever after because honestly, that doesn't happen. Maya runs away from the foster home in search of an aunt she has never met, with the hope that she will find a home.
Hope is what kept her going. Hope for a home, something I could not do myself. She doesn't want shoes or the new Coach purse but a home and someone to love and care for her.
This story is amazingly real and truly teaches us the truth of living on the streets, the challenges and the hardships Maya must face. It is far too easy to dismiss those who live on the streets as worthless people who deserved it. I know I did, I was raised that way. Raised to not look a begger into the eye, raised to not show any compassion for the homeless, raised to live in fear of them. To act like I, I was superior to them. Disgusting. I am no more better than those on the streets, in fact, I might be worse.
We have to come to the reality that those teens who live on the streets don't necessarily take drugs or drink alcohol or smoke. Sometimes they don't have a choice because life isn't giving them the upper side of the scale. But they push through it and they survive, which takes far more courage and work than I can ever posses.
Being in school, I have learned that running away from home is childish and stupid and will always be terrible. I know they teach us that to prevent us from having a glorified image of living on the streets but I think they are wrong. For Maya, there is not much she can do. She holds onto that last bit of hope she has and goes for it. I say kudos to her.
This book was magnificent, one of the best pieces of Young Adult literature I have ever read. I was unsure about this, seeing that I am normally the girl who reads about forbidden love and high school but I gave it a shot and was left feeling changed. Yes, a book can change you. This story seemed more like reality than fiction, and I believe that there is a Maya living somewhere. Not the character but a person who suffered like Maya.
Truly perfect.
I am 14 years old and I live a pretty good life. I get good marks in school and I have a kick-ass family that puts up with me. Yet, sometimes, I realize that I can be the most unappreciative brat in the universe. Reading this book made me really appreciate what I have because chances are, if you are reading this, you are/have been spoiled and we all need a good dose of reality that some people aren't as lucky as we are.
My grandma used to tell me all the time that I had a wool blanket over my eyes and I was in my own little Sabrina bubble where the world was filled with puppies and hearts. That was okay when I was younger, ignorant, but now that I am older, I need to start facing the facts. Teens my age, and younger, are leading terrible lives. Some are forced to run away even. And here I am complaining that I couldn't see the movie while some other girl is thanking her stars that she found food that night.
But enough of this. The book Compromised takes us into the life of Maya who is put into the foster care system after her father, a con man, is arrested. Maya is left homeless, parentless and with nothing but her brain (which is one of her best tools by far).
We learn of the misfortunes that happen in the foster care and how hard it is to survive from the other kids in it. Maya has to defend herself from attacks while keeping onto the hope that it will all be okay.
It isn't.
It is a sad truth but a hard-breaking reality. No, she is not going to suddenly get her father back and live a happily ever after because honestly, that doesn't happen. Maya runs away from the foster home in search of an aunt she has never met, with the hope that she will find a home.
Hope is what kept her going. Hope for a home, something I could not do myself. She doesn't want shoes or the new Coach purse but a home and someone to love and care for her.
This story is amazingly real and truly teaches us the truth of living on the streets, the challenges and the hardships Maya must face. It is far too easy to dismiss those who live on the streets as worthless people who deserved it. I know I did, I was raised that way. Raised to not look a begger into the eye, raised to not show any compassion for the homeless, raised to live in fear of them. To act like I, I was superior to them. Disgusting. I am no more better than those on the streets, in fact, I might be worse.
We have to come to the reality that those teens who live on the streets don't necessarily take drugs or drink alcohol or smoke. Sometimes they don't have a choice because life isn't giving them the upper side of the scale. But they push through it and they survive, which takes far more courage and work than I can ever posses.
Being in school, I have learned that running away from home is childish and stupid and will always be terrible. I know they teach us that to prevent us from having a glorified image of living on the streets but I think they are wrong. For Maya, there is not much she can do. She holds onto that last bit of hope she has and goes for it. I say kudos to her.
This book was magnificent, one of the best pieces of Young Adult literature I have ever read. I was unsure about this, seeing that I am normally the girl who reads about forbidden love and high school but I gave it a shot and was left feeling changed. Yes, a book can change you. This story seemed more like reality than fiction, and I believe that there is a Maya living somewhere. Not the character but a person who suffered like Maya.
Truly perfect.
August 14, 2019
Rating: 3.5
“The plan? It’s totally ad hoc. Every time I try to create a hypothesis and procedure, anomalies come up and I’m scrambling to make sense of everything. Maybe a good scientist would be able to come up with methods to work with the change in elements. Maybe I’m a really bad scientist.”
“If there is a God, he must be a scientist and we’re lab rats. I look up. What if the sky is the lens of God’s monocle? And nighttime is the blink of His eye? ‘The data has been compromised!’ I want to shout.”
15-year-old Maya Sorenson returns home from school one day to discover that her house in an upscale Reno, Nevada neighbourhood is being emptied of furniture and appliances. The next day, the repo men come for her dad’s Beamer . . . and the police for Mr. Sorenson himself. He is cuffed and taken into police custody for tax evasion, fraud, and embezzlement. Maya is not surprised. She’s been through something like this many times before, but until now her scam artist, con-man father has been prescient enough to get them out of town before the authorities catch up. Also, she’s never before had to deal with leaving a nice house at such a respectable address.
Because Maya’s mother died years before and there is no family to care for the teenager, she’s taken to a temporary children’s shelter until longer term foster care can be arranged. With her relentless brainiac “vomiting” of scientific facts, the whip-smart girl quickly makes enemies at the home, but she does not scare easily. She also shows she has the conscience and moral center her father lacks. She looks out for a younger boy, new prey for the meanest three group-home kids, and she monitors her vulnerable roommate Nicole’s Prozac bottle, fearing that the girl is at risk of overdosing.
The children’s shelter staff are eager to hand off Maya to a Bible-thumping foster family, but before they do so, Maya has a last visit with her imprisoned father. During that meeting her dad reveals that he has relinquished legal responsibility for her. His situation is “complex”, he says; it’s in his daughter’s best interests that he does so. He also reveals that Maya has an aunt: her mother’s sister, Sarah. In order to locate this woman, Maya needs to find the shoebox containing her mum’s personal effects and letters. (It was left in the house that the two Sorensons were forced to vacate).
The plot thickens when Maya leaves the children’s home early one morning to retrieve the shoebox, only to discover that her roommate has followed her. Nicole has been in foster care for nine years; her mum was a meth-head, and her absent father’s life has apparently been dictated by the mob. He seems to have sent the girl post cards, however, and she’s pretty sure he’s in Chicago. If Maya knows science, the bright, illiterate, and street-smart Nicole is a veritable walking encyclopedia of organized crime. She can give her new roommate as good as she gets, and she quickly convinces Maya that she is in need of someone with common sense, not to mention a sense of direction. From the contents of the shoe box, Maya has determined that her aunt is likely in Boise, Idaho. Two girls travelling together, Nicole points out, are much safer than one entirely on her own.
It’s not easy getting to Boise. First, there is the problem of how and what they will eat. The two have next to no money. Second, there’s the question of where they can rest and sleep. It’s November and unseasonably cold. And then, of course, there’s the matter of travelling itself; walking and hitchhiking are both fraught with difficulty, especially for young girls. Maya and Nicole’s challenges multiply when they gain an additional travelling companion: Klondike, a ten-year-old boy, disfigured by fire and plagued by Tourette’s. At the mercy of his tics and a brain that has him endlessly spewing profanity, he is fleeing trauma of his own.
Ayarbe’s is a gritty but engaging young adult novel. There are rough situations and some pretty rough language as well. The author leavens the dark subject matter with a fair bit of snappy, humorous—if not always believable—dialogue. There are a few other problems, too. Although the novel is mostly realistic, some elements of the plot are not plausible. (The group home’s allowing Nicole, a suicidal teen, to be responsible for her own psychoactive medication doesn’t ring at all true. The degree of the girl’s illiteracy and the plot development that hinges on it are also hard to credit.) Nevertheless, the basic details the author provides about the chaos, squalor, and dangers faced by homeless kids (fleeing dysfunctional families and institutionalized care) are convincing.
The book is overly long, and I think the author could’ve tightened it up by reining in Nicole’s stories of gangsters. Ayarbe might also have refrained from reporting Maya’s every sigh, and, finally, the author could have toned down her protagonist’s obsessive use of the scientific method to solve problems. All of these became tedious reading after a while, On the whole, however, this is a satisfying novel, with an appropriately open-ended conclusion. It is fairly fast paced, and it explores many themes of interest to young adults.
“The plan? It’s totally ad hoc. Every time I try to create a hypothesis and procedure, anomalies come up and I’m scrambling to make sense of everything. Maybe a good scientist would be able to come up with methods to work with the change in elements. Maybe I’m a really bad scientist.”
“If there is a God, he must be a scientist and we’re lab rats. I look up. What if the sky is the lens of God’s monocle? And nighttime is the blink of His eye? ‘The data has been compromised!’ I want to shout.”
15-year-old Maya Sorenson returns home from school one day to discover that her house in an upscale Reno, Nevada neighbourhood is being emptied of furniture and appliances. The next day, the repo men come for her dad’s Beamer . . . and the police for Mr. Sorenson himself. He is cuffed and taken into police custody for tax evasion, fraud, and embezzlement. Maya is not surprised. She’s been through something like this many times before, but until now her scam artist, con-man father has been prescient enough to get them out of town before the authorities catch up. Also, she’s never before had to deal with leaving a nice house at such a respectable address.
Because Maya’s mother died years before and there is no family to care for the teenager, she’s taken to a temporary children’s shelter until longer term foster care can be arranged. With her relentless brainiac “vomiting” of scientific facts, the whip-smart girl quickly makes enemies at the home, but she does not scare easily. She also shows she has the conscience and moral center her father lacks. She looks out for a younger boy, new prey for the meanest three group-home kids, and she monitors her vulnerable roommate Nicole’s Prozac bottle, fearing that the girl is at risk of overdosing.
The children’s shelter staff are eager to hand off Maya to a Bible-thumping foster family, but before they do so, Maya has a last visit with her imprisoned father. During that meeting her dad reveals that he has relinquished legal responsibility for her. His situation is “complex”, he says; it’s in his daughter’s best interests that he does so. He also reveals that Maya has an aunt: her mother’s sister, Sarah. In order to locate this woman, Maya needs to find the shoebox containing her mum’s personal effects and letters. (It was left in the house that the two Sorensons were forced to vacate).
The plot thickens when Maya leaves the children’s home early one morning to retrieve the shoebox, only to discover that her roommate has followed her. Nicole has been in foster care for nine years; her mum was a meth-head, and her absent father’s life has apparently been dictated by the mob. He seems to have sent the girl post cards, however, and she’s pretty sure he’s in Chicago. If Maya knows science, the bright, illiterate, and street-smart Nicole is a veritable walking encyclopedia of organized crime. She can give her new roommate as good as she gets, and she quickly convinces Maya that she is in need of someone with common sense, not to mention a sense of direction. From the contents of the shoe box, Maya has determined that her aunt is likely in Boise, Idaho. Two girls travelling together, Nicole points out, are much safer than one entirely on her own.
It’s not easy getting to Boise. First, there is the problem of how and what they will eat. The two have next to no money. Second, there’s the question of where they can rest and sleep. It’s November and unseasonably cold. And then, of course, there’s the matter of travelling itself; walking and hitchhiking are both fraught with difficulty, especially for young girls. Maya and Nicole’s challenges multiply when they gain an additional travelling companion: Klondike, a ten-year-old boy, disfigured by fire and plagued by Tourette’s. At the mercy of his tics and a brain that has him endlessly spewing profanity, he is fleeing trauma of his own.
Ayarbe’s is a gritty but engaging young adult novel. There are rough situations and some pretty rough language as well. The author leavens the dark subject matter with a fair bit of snappy, humorous—if not always believable—dialogue. There are a few other problems, too. Although the novel is mostly realistic, some elements of the plot are not plausible. (The group home’s allowing Nicole, a suicidal teen, to be responsible for her own psychoactive medication doesn’t ring at all true. The degree of the girl’s illiteracy and the plot development that hinges on it are also hard to credit.) Nevertheless, the basic details the author provides about the chaos, squalor, and dangers faced by homeless kids (fleeing dysfunctional families and institutionalized care) are convincing.
The book is overly long, and I think the author could’ve tightened it up by reining in Nicole’s stories of gangsters. Ayarbe might also have refrained from reporting Maya’s every sigh, and, finally, the author could have toned down her protagonist’s obsessive use of the scientific method to solve problems. All of these became tedious reading after a while, On the whole, however, this is a satisfying novel, with an appropriately open-ended conclusion. It is fairly fast paced, and it explores many themes of interest to young adults.
February 27, 2018
I mean... It wasn't BAD, but at the same time I feel like it was just really slow??? And walking from Downtown Boise to Garden City in the middle of December would be terrible and I would not wish that on my worst enemy. Idk, maybe I was just too focused on the fact that they were going to Boise.
Although, I did really love Nicole. And when Maya told Klon about Tourette's and his reaction to it was so sweet omg.
Although, I did really love Nicole. And when Maya told Klon about Tourette's and his reaction to it was so sweet omg.
June 13, 2010
Searing, potent and unflinching, Compromised is a uncharted look into life on the streets and what it means to be pushed aside by society. Torn between her love of her father and her anger at being betrayed by him, Maya finds herself thrust into a world unimaginable to anyone not in it. Though her life has been less than ideal, she would easily take the cons and quick escapes to an orphanage.
Maya is a reverberating character, holding a powerful mix of courage and fear. Her character dynamic and progression is painfully realistic with her initial reactions to becoming a warden of the state to her decision to leave and try on her own. Holding a certain level of naivety, Maya's struggles are undeniably believable. Despite her anger at her father, she is unable to turn her back on him completely. Many of her reactions are wrenching to read but pull out the true nature of this story. With her penchant for science and a constant need to develop a hypothesis and procedure, Maya's character is pitched in a unique way. Though she has a large vocabulary, her school intelligence is not likely to cause a dissonance with readers.
Sick of being passed around to foster families that don't care, Nicole goes with Maya. Their companionship is both endearing and entertaining, the two tied together by a tragic cause. With nicknames understood only in context, they forge a friendship seen by the reader before the girls recognize it. The softer sides of both shines through, lurking beneath the forced rough exterior they must have to survive not only in foster homes and orphanages but on the streets as well. With an affliction for mobsters, much akin to Maya's science obsession, Nicole's character is as strongly defined and developed as Maya's. Strengthening the overall effect more, the banter between these two provides relief from the overall dark air of the book.
Further along their way, the two girls find a young boy also living on the streets. His character is as noteworthy, memorable and heartrending as Nicole and Maya, all three pulling the reader's compassion and emotions. With his own quirks and habits, Klon adds a strong dynamic to the girls, mixed further with his unique way of viewing things. He tugs Maya and Nicole between being motherly towards him and their own obligations to themselves. The battle between putting themselves first and helping the group comes up often, interspersed with their growing desperation to survive and the things they are willing to do to make it happen.
In a society where people on the streets, young and old alike, are written off and ignored, Compromised will pitch a jarring look into the other side. How wrong is stealing, when a cheap bag of cough drops could mean the difference between a night of pain and some sort of relief? How hurt is the diner who's stuck with a bill for some pancakes and coffee when it means some homeless teens have food in their bellies for the day? These questions and more are thrust forward in Compromised, ensuring the reader will rethink their state of mind on many things that have become accepted as normal.
With an unerringly strong voice and writing, Compromised pulls the reader in from the start and doesn't let them go even after the book has finished. A dark and depressing overall air mixed with innumerable twists, this is a gripping read unlike any other. The reader will constantly question the fate of all three kids, wondering if they will find a way to their goals or end up dying, frozen on the streets like many others. Death is lurking constantly around them, reminding them in countless ways. Intensely developed and defined characters, a guttural world created, and echoing writing, this terrifying look at events still taking place in our modern world is sure to pack a punch and remain with the reader.
November 4, 2012
Reviewed by Sally Kruger aka "Readingjunky" for TeensReadToo.com
Maya loves science. She approaches every situation first with a "hypothesis" and then a plan of action. Her life is filled with situations that need her attention.
Raised by a single father after her mother's suicide, Maya has been shifted from place to place as her father has "hustled" to make a living for them. He was caught in his last con-game, and now he's in prison and Maya has become part of the system. As the newest resident in the orphanage, Maya's latest "hypothesis" is focused on escape.
She puts her plan into action when she learns she may be headed to live with an odd, overly-religious family. Her brief visit with them made her extremely uncomfortable, and she knows she doesn't have much time before she could be living with them permanently. She packs her few possessions and, following her father's vague instructions, heads back to the last place she called home to find a box of her mother's things that supposedly holds valuable information about an aunt who might be her last chance for a real home.
Maya is joined by Nicole, another resident from the orphanage. Not long into their journey, they meet Klondike, a homeless street kid with a disfiguring burn and Tourette's syndrome. Together they begin the search for Maya's aunt.
Life on the streets is tough. The three leave Reno behind by hitchhiking and bumming rides however they can. The little money they have doesn't last long, and as hunger sets in, they resort to raiding dumpsters and shoplifting. They sleep on the streets and try to warm up by stopping in libraries as Maya tries to gather information about her only surviving relative.
Author Heidi Ayarbe does not glamorize life on the streets. Her story of Maya and friends is bleak and without much hope. Readers will be driven to read out of morbid curiosity as they observe the downward spiral of the three travelers. COMPROMISED gives insight into the increasing problem of the homeless and the sad fact that innocent children are among them.
Maya loves science. She approaches every situation first with a "hypothesis" and then a plan of action. Her life is filled with situations that need her attention.
Raised by a single father after her mother's suicide, Maya has been shifted from place to place as her father has "hustled" to make a living for them. He was caught in his last con-game, and now he's in prison and Maya has become part of the system. As the newest resident in the orphanage, Maya's latest "hypothesis" is focused on escape.
She puts her plan into action when she learns she may be headed to live with an odd, overly-religious family. Her brief visit with them made her extremely uncomfortable, and she knows she doesn't have much time before she could be living with them permanently. She packs her few possessions and, following her father's vague instructions, heads back to the last place she called home to find a box of her mother's things that supposedly holds valuable information about an aunt who might be her last chance for a real home.
Maya is joined by Nicole, another resident from the orphanage. Not long into their journey, they meet Klondike, a homeless street kid with a disfiguring burn and Tourette's syndrome. Together they begin the search for Maya's aunt.
Life on the streets is tough. The three leave Reno behind by hitchhiking and bumming rides however they can. The little money they have doesn't last long, and as hunger sets in, they resort to raiding dumpsters and shoplifting. They sleep on the streets and try to warm up by stopping in libraries as Maya tries to gather information about her only surviving relative.
Author Heidi Ayarbe does not glamorize life on the streets. Her story of Maya and friends is bleak and without much hope. Readers will be driven to read out of morbid curiosity as they observe the downward spiral of the three travelers. COMPROMISED gives insight into the increasing problem of the homeless and the sad fact that innocent children are among them.
October 20, 2015
OMG!!! There are no words I could use to describe this book. I laughed, wanted to throw it across the room a few times, and I definitely cried, a lot, but mostly towards the end. I didn't agree with all of the bad language at times, but other then that I thought it was a great read.
June 30, 2021
This was hard to put down. It was about life on the streets and the struggles of homeless teens. I loved Klondike and was upset with the author for her decision to have him die. However, this added to the realism of the book. I was also angry with his mother for ascribing his Tourette's to demonic possession. Klondike was just too good for this world despite the language caused by the Tourette's. The open-ended ending was just right.
December 11, 2017
I really liked this book! When I first started reading it, I thought I liked it. And then I got to the middle and I was so sick of it... But I kept on reading because the last time I gave up on a book was in elementary school... And when you get to the end, WOW. Everything you thought was going to happen? Think the complete opposite! The ending made up for the boring middle- it was one of those books. I definitely recommend!
BTW: I always get so irritated when everything turns out okay in the end- but then they don't tell you what happened in the rest of the character's lives. That happened in this one- but I was really only mad for a little bit haha
BTW: I always get so irritated when everything turns out okay in the end- but then they don't tell you what happened in the rest of the character's lives. That happened in this one- but I was really only mad for a little bit haha
April 5, 2014
This book was just average. I think it could've been good if it was seriously trimmed down in length, because I did like the plot, but it seemed it just dragged on forever.
Anyway, good:
Tackled some really deep issues and a good/believable way. Also, a unique issue of Tourette's, which I do not see portrayed in many other books.
The ending. I really loved the ending. I thought it was the best part of the book. It was so believable and true to life, as things don't normally ended all happy and cheerful, with a nice pretty bow. I also love how it left things ambiguous and open for interpretation.
The characters were a bit hit and miss with me. I liked them, but at the same time I hated them, especially the main character, whose name I can't seem to recall.
The plot was good and interesting, but at the same time things didn't remain exciting for long, as it was too stretched out.
Which leads me onto:
The bad:
The book was just too long. I'm all for long books. In fact, I prefer them over shorter books. Long books can be effective if they keep the excitement and action going throughout, but I don't think this book achieved that. In places, it was extremely slow-moving, and I felt like the characters sometimes repeated the same things over-and-over again, so yeah there was a lot of filler used just to stretch out of the book.
The characters were, at times, annoying and bland. For instance, I was so bored with the main character's constant intelligent ramblings. Yeah, we get it she has a brain, but we didn't need to be reminded of it on every page. A few times throughout the book would be fine. Because of these ramblings, the main character also seemed a bit big headed, and it showed through her tendency to look down and judge everyone she came in contact with, just for not having a massive abnormal brain like hers.
Also, her friend, the other character who went on tangents about mob members. Yeah, the same problem noted above. I also think it was unbelievable how out all of the people in the world, these two girls, both obsessed and knowledgable about something, found each other. How likely is it that they can both go off on tangents and know so much about their subjects, throughout the course of the book? Fair enough if it was one of them, but both of them knowing so much just seemed kind of far-fetched.
The conversations. They were a bit hit and miss too. Sometimes, the dialogue was captivating, but other times it was monotonous. The same thing was mentioned a lot, as said above, and in a dialogue-driven book, with more dialogue than anything, it's kind of problematic when I found myself skimming over most parts of it.
Anyway, I'd recommend this book to anyone with a lot of free time on their hands, since it isn't exactly a quick read. I'd also recommend it to anyone that enjoys dialogue/character driven books, as opposed to action/ fast-paced book.
Anyway, good:
Tackled some really deep issues and a good/believable way. Also, a unique issue of Tourette's, which I do not see portrayed in many other books.
The ending. I really loved the ending. I thought it was the best part of the book. It was so believable and true to life, as things don't normally ended all happy and cheerful, with a nice pretty bow. I also love how it left things ambiguous and open for interpretation.
The characters were a bit hit and miss with me. I liked them, but at the same time I hated them, especially the main character, whose name I can't seem to recall.
The plot was good and interesting, but at the same time things didn't remain exciting for long, as it was too stretched out.
Which leads me onto:
The bad:
The book was just too long. I'm all for long books. In fact, I prefer them over shorter books. Long books can be effective if they keep the excitement and action going throughout, but I don't think this book achieved that. In places, it was extremely slow-moving, and I felt like the characters sometimes repeated the same things over-and-over again, so yeah there was a lot of filler used just to stretch out of the book.
The characters were, at times, annoying and bland. For instance, I was so bored with the main character's constant intelligent ramblings. Yeah, we get it she has a brain, but we didn't need to be reminded of it on every page. A few times throughout the book would be fine. Because of these ramblings, the main character also seemed a bit big headed, and it showed through her tendency to look down and judge everyone she came in contact with, just for not having a massive abnormal brain like hers.
Also, her friend, the other character who went on tangents about mob members. Yeah, the same problem noted above. I also think it was unbelievable how out all of the people in the world, these two girls, both obsessed and knowledgable about something, found each other. How likely is it that they can both go off on tangents and know so much about their subjects, throughout the course of the book? Fair enough if it was one of them, but both of them knowing so much just seemed kind of far-fetched.
The conversations. They were a bit hit and miss too. Sometimes, the dialogue was captivating, but other times it was monotonous. The same thing was mentioned a lot, as said above, and in a dialogue-driven book, with more dialogue than anything, it's kind of problematic when I found myself skimming over most parts of it.
Anyway, I'd recommend this book to anyone with a lot of free time on their hands, since it isn't exactly a quick read. I'd also recommend it to anyone that enjoys dialogue/character driven books, as opposed to action/ fast-paced book.
May 25, 2013
I am giving this book 3 out of 5 stars. It is a gripping tale of realistic YA fiction, a genre that I have liked since I was a teenager myself. The reasons I didn't give it more stars have to do with the length of the story and the characterization of the leads. I thought it was too long. There were parts of it that became repetitive and monotonous, and maybe could have been summarized instead of dramatized.
As for characterization, there were times when the dialogue just didn't seem to fit the characters. For example, it was jarring to hear a character who is illiterate use the word "clinical" in a conversation. I couldn't understand how Maya, whose con man father taught her how to scam people, could be so naive at times. The fact that she was trying hard not to be like him was not dramatized well at first. And then there's Klondike. How that poor boy suffered. Disfigured by fire, having only one testicle (was that lost in the fire also?) and having severe Tourette's Syndrome (the kind that makes people swear) seemed like too much to me. One of these issues would have been enough. It seemed manipulative of the author to make him have all of these problems at the same time. I think Tourette's Syndrome would have been enough, especially since he had the rarest kind. Things like that seemed unrealistic to me.
Still, the emotional impact of the book is undeniable. I really felt for all the characters and cared about what happened to them, which is the most important thing in a book like this one. I would recommend it for older teens because of the subject matter and the the language. Stories like this can open a reader's eyes to the suffering of others around them and teach them to be more compassionate, make readers who have good homes and families grateful, and make those dealing with the issues that drove these teens to run away realize that they are not alone. And that is something a lot of other books can't do.
As for characterization, there were times when the dialogue just didn't seem to fit the characters. For example, it was jarring to hear a character who is illiterate use the word "clinical" in a conversation. I couldn't understand how Maya, whose con man father taught her how to scam people, could be so naive at times. The fact that she was trying hard not to be like him was not dramatized well at first. And then there's Klondike. How that poor boy suffered. Disfigured by fire, having only one testicle (was that lost in the fire also?) and having severe Tourette's Syndrome (the kind that makes people swear) seemed like too much to me. One of these issues would have been enough. It seemed manipulative of the author to make him have all of these problems at the same time. I think Tourette's Syndrome would have been enough, especially since he had the rarest kind. Things like that seemed unrealistic to me.
Still, the emotional impact of the book is undeniable. I really felt for all the characters and cared about what happened to them, which is the most important thing in a book like this one. I would recommend it for older teens because of the subject matter and the the language. Stories like this can open a reader's eyes to the suffering of others around them and teach them to be more compassionate, make readers who have good homes and families grateful, and make those dealing with the issues that drove these teens to run away realize that they are not alone. And that is something a lot of other books can't do.
April 25, 2010
Well, Compromised certainly isn’t bubble gun, popcorn fluff, that’s for sure! What a genuine, eye opening book for teens and adults. Maya has no one left. Her mother and father are gone, she is sent to an orphanage, and she must go and find an aunt that may or may not exist. There is only one constant thus far in Maya’s life and it is science. On her journey, with little to no money, food, or clothes, she finds a true family in her new companions; Nicole and Klon.
I know that I am in the dark about how kids live on the streets. I know that I am in no way an expert on raising kids. However, this book makes me want to take in every kid that has been mistreated by their parents or the system. What a waste of youth.
In true form of the book, please accept my review in scientific format:
Purpose: Write a riveting book review for Compromised
Hypothesis: If I can write a wonderful review, I can get people to go out and buy this book.
Materials: Compromised book, my computer, email
Procedure:
1) Read book
2) Love book
3) Write review of loved book
4) Post to website
5) Send to publisher
6) Be thankful that a book touched my heart
7) Hug my kids
Variables: Time: Kids – enough said
Constants: Me, Compromised, My computer
Compromised is a thought provoking, gentle way of letting the world know about the pain kids may face while on the streets and in the system. It brought tears to my eyes and makes my heart yearn for the safety of Maya, her friends, and the true kids out there that needs a safe place to stay.
I give Compromised 4 STACKS
With much love, Shannan at girlsinthestacks.com
Warning for parents of YA: There is a character with Tourette’s in Compromised. Foul language flows throughout the whole novel. The publisher states the age as 12+. I would recommend 15+.
I know that I am in the dark about how kids live on the streets. I know that I am in no way an expert on raising kids. However, this book makes me want to take in every kid that has been mistreated by their parents or the system. What a waste of youth.
In true form of the book, please accept my review in scientific format:
Purpose: Write a riveting book review for Compromised
Hypothesis: If I can write a wonderful review, I can get people to go out and buy this book.
Materials: Compromised book, my computer, email
Procedure:
1) Read book
2) Love book
3) Write review of loved book
4) Post to website
5) Send to publisher
6) Be thankful that a book touched my heart
7) Hug my kids
Variables: Time: Kids – enough said
Constants: Me, Compromised, My computer
Compromised is a thought provoking, gentle way of letting the world know about the pain kids may face while on the streets and in the system. It brought tears to my eyes and makes my heart yearn for the safety of Maya, her friends, and the true kids out there that needs a safe place to stay.
I give Compromised 4 STACKS
With much love, Shannan at girlsinthestacks.com
Warning for parents of YA: There is a character with Tourette’s in Compromised. Foul language flows throughout the whole novel. The publisher states the age as 12+. I would recommend 15+.
March 2, 2012
Again, like with You Don't Know About Me, I appreciated that the author didn't just skip over the story- she made it long enough that I felt tired for the characters, a part of their lives and their hurt and their trials. I loved Klondike, and ached for him.
The ending wrapped up a little too easily, at the very end, but let's be honest- if things hadn't somewhat resolved themselves, I would have been way more disappointed.
The ending wrapped up a little too easily, at the very end, but let's be honest- if things hadn't somewhat resolved themselves, I would have been way more disappointed.
May 3, 2012
I bawled my eyes out for like half an hour at the end, but it certainly enlightened me to a lot, and the characters were amazing! The only reasons it's not 5 stars are that a.) It was a little lengthy, b.) Cussing, and c.) ***spoiler*** An author is simply not allowed to kill off main character(s)! It's like against the code. Okay, I lied, I think it actually added a lot to the story, but still.
Anyway, anything that can keep my interest for that long and make me sob is certainly worth at least 4 stars. It's really worth 4.5, but let's keep it at 4 for now.
Anyway, anything that can keep my interest for that long and make me sob is certainly worth at least 4 stars. It's really worth 4.5, but let's keep it at 4 for now.
November 9, 2022
Maya's dad is a con artist. He pulls off these frauds to help them survive. Until he gets taught and Maya goes into the Foster system. She runs away to try to find her long lost aunt and struggles to survive as a homeless teen with 2 others and learns that her books smarts aren't really helpful to her out on her own.
This book starts a little clunky with her scientific method thought process but becomes more organic the longer it goes on. Good for those who like books about teens struggling with survival and family obstacles.
This book starts a little clunky with her scientific method thought process but becomes more organic the longer it goes on. Good for those who like books about teens struggling with survival and family obstacles.
December 26, 2024
This was hard to put down. It was about life on the streets and the struggles of homeless teens. I loved Klondike and was upset with the author for her decision to have him die. However, this added to the realism of the book. I was also angry with his mother for ascribing his Tourette's to demonic possession. Klondike was just too good for this world despite the language caused by the Tourette's. The open-ended ending was just right.
September 29, 2021
Maya goes into a group home when her father goes to prison. Sje decides to run away before she gets sent to a foster home, but another girl insists on coming with her. Then a younger boy joins up with them on their travels.
Trigger warning: attempted rape, beatings, hunger, and death. Shop lifting instructions.
Trigger warning: attempted rape, beatings, hunger, and death. Shop lifting instructions.
May 22, 2019
I thought it was a good book. It was interesting to read and some parts were sad. I would recommend it.
January 17, 2011
Summary: Maya has been living a peripatetic existence with her father, a con artist, constantly moving as each scam falls apart. Maya is a fan of science and uses the scientific method of formulating a hypothesis as a way of trying to impose some order and find solutions for the problems caused by her chaotic life. But when her father is busted once again and sent to prison, Maya must now acclimate to a group home where she waits for a foster family to take her in. Rather than accept this fate, Maya runs away to begin a search to find her long lost aunt. All she has are some paystubs and letters from Boise, Idaho, 400 hundred miles away. Another resident, Nicole, foists herself on Maya and they become (reluctantly, at first) partners in the search. They also connect with a Klondike, a badly scarred young boy with Tourette’s Syndrome who has been thrown out of his family because of his disability. They endure many hardships living on the street, as they scrounge for food and shelter. The journey becomes a nightmare of survival, with no guarantee at the end that they will find Maya’s aunt.
Themes: Family (what is it?). Is it your blood relatives or the friends who endure hardship with you to help you get where you are going? Loyalty. Maya feels that she has failed a desperately ill Klondike when she leaves him to find some food for the three of them and returns to find him frozen to death. Survival: what happens when the safety net fails and children/teens must live on the street?
Plot: A tense and harrowing journey keeps the reader engaged with what is happening with the characters and hoping that they will survive.
Characters: Original characters you have never seen before. Maya, with her fears of losing control and her desperation to find a halfway normal life and family. Nicole, street savvy but vulnerable, who has long since lost any illusions about control. Klondike, a heartbreaking character who thinks he has a demon because of his Tourette’s Syndrome and the superstitious beliefs of his religious fundamentalist family. The contrast between these characters, particularly Nicole and Maya, is fascinating, because at the bottom of it all they both crave the same thing…home and family. Layered characterizations. Nicole has no qualms about doing what is necessary to survive, Maya is still held back by her ethical standards (i.e. shoplifting)
Writing: Relies a bit too much on dialogue, which sometimes slows the pace. But author uses stark, vivid imagery to make the reader feel that they are there on this desperate journey.
It has an Ellen Hopkins feel that will certainly appeal to many teen readers.
Themes: Family (what is it?). Is it your blood relatives or the friends who endure hardship with you to help you get where you are going? Loyalty. Maya feels that she has failed a desperately ill Klondike when she leaves him to find some food for the three of them and returns to find him frozen to death. Survival: what happens when the safety net fails and children/teens must live on the street?
Plot: A tense and harrowing journey keeps the reader engaged with what is happening with the characters and hoping that they will survive.
Characters: Original characters you have never seen before. Maya, with her fears of losing control and her desperation to find a halfway normal life and family. Nicole, street savvy but vulnerable, who has long since lost any illusions about control. Klondike, a heartbreaking character who thinks he has a demon because of his Tourette’s Syndrome and the superstitious beliefs of his religious fundamentalist family. The contrast between these characters, particularly Nicole and Maya, is fascinating, because at the bottom of it all they both crave the same thing…home and family. Layered characterizations. Nicole has no qualms about doing what is necessary to survive, Maya is still held back by her ethical standards (i.e. shoplifting)
Writing: Relies a bit too much on dialogue, which sometimes slows the pace. But author uses stark, vivid imagery to make the reader feel that they are there on this desperate journey.
It has an Ellen Hopkins feel that will certainly appeal to many teen readers.
October 18, 2013
To be honest, I randomly picked this book off of the shelf. I do this every once in awhile when I don't know what book to pick. This story takes place at a number of cities and states. It is about two run-aways trying to get from the orphanage home to a long lost aunt who is possibly in Iowa. Along the way, they make stops in alley ways, strangers homes, and libraries across the country. The setting for weather is late fall and winter. The main conflict is Maya's dad leaving her because he is a con artist and convicted felon, and Maya has no known family left except an aunt she never heard of. Maya is mainly a static character, because at first she is shy and reserved but throughout the story she becomes hardened due to her life on the streets. I would describe Maya as enduring, caring, and she is also very persevering. Nicol, one of the girls from the orphanage that follows her, is very stoic, mean, and basically a loud-mouth. There wasn't really a quote that explained of signified any part of the story but at one point, on page 23, Maya says; "I'm screwed." Which is right before her dad goes to prison and she gets sent to the kids place so this kind of sets a mood for what happens. I think the message would point blank be 'Perseverance' because that's really what Maya does throughout the whole story is try to find some aunt she might or might not actually have and she risks her whole life and everything she has worked for to continue her life and help her dad. One of the reading strategies I used quite often was to make inferences because I was always developing an opinion about the characters or what they chose to do. Also, I used 'monitor' a few times because occasionally the story kind of hit a dead end or a loop hole and I had to stop and ask myself, "Wait, what?" and sometimes even reread what I had read. Last, I visualized so much of this story. I literally had a movie going in my head and I could just picture Maya and Natalie all dirty and thin, trying to scrape together change to find some type of food, and the disgusting alleys and old abandoned buildings they had to take shelter in. Finally, I thought this book was so amazing. This often happens when I pick random books off the shelf. I would for sure recommend this to any reader, except not if you don't like cussing because there is quite a bit of that in this book but otherwise it is so great and a movie just plays in your head the entire time.
April 9, 2011
Compromised by Heidi Ayarbe
HarperTeen, 2010
452 pages
YA; Contemporary
4/5 stars
Source: Library
Read for YA Book Battle; to me, this is a great example of overlooked. Although HarperTeen is one of the big name publishers, and I know I've read a great deal of their books, I had never heard of this. Additionally 2010 YA books were of great interest to me but I never saw anything about this.
This was a hard book to read, rate, and review, as it deals with teenage homelessness and the idea of family. Maya has her conman father who lets her down once again, causing her to enter foster care. When faced with a disgusting prospective set of parents, she decides to flee and attempt to find her aunt Sarah. As she and two unlikely friends make their way from Reno, NV to Boise, ID, they face unbelievable challenges and attempt to construct their own family.
I loved that Maya was into science; she would make up a purpose and hypothesis, followed by materials, a procedure, variables, and constants. Although I am not quite as strict, I have a similar habit that enables me to move through my to-do list. This helped me connect with her, which I valued because everything she experienced was completely foreign to me.
I also really liked her friends Natale "Capone" and Klondike. Natalie has long been fascinated with mob trivia hence her nickname and she follows Maya from the foster care building. They meet Klondike on the road, a young boy probably with Tourette's whose family kicked him out without understanding his symptoms. They were very sympathetic and their interactions with Maya was great; they made a good team.
The difficult part came when reading about their life on the road. Possessing about ten dollars and their wits, it is a struggle to survive. They walk and hitch their way north, searching for food and compassion but rarely finding either. The disgust for homeless people is frequently expressed and the struggles are described well. It was very emotional for me to read about and so very different from my own life.
Overall: A difficult read with characters facing some of the toughest decisions I've ever read about. Recommended.
Cover: The colors signal a gritty contemporary read as it is.
HarperTeen, 2010
452 pages
YA; Contemporary
4/5 stars
Source: Library
Read for YA Book Battle; to me, this is a great example of overlooked. Although HarperTeen is one of the big name publishers, and I know I've read a great deal of their books, I had never heard of this. Additionally 2010 YA books were of great interest to me but I never saw anything about this.
This was a hard book to read, rate, and review, as it deals with teenage homelessness and the idea of family. Maya has her conman father who lets her down once again, causing her to enter foster care. When faced with a disgusting prospective set of parents, she decides to flee and attempt to find her aunt Sarah. As she and two unlikely friends make their way from Reno, NV to Boise, ID, they face unbelievable challenges and attempt to construct their own family.
I loved that Maya was into science; she would make up a purpose and hypothesis, followed by materials, a procedure, variables, and constants. Although I am not quite as strict, I have a similar habit that enables me to move through my to-do list. This helped me connect with her, which I valued because everything she experienced was completely foreign to me.
I also really liked her friends Natale "Capone" and Klondike. Natalie has long been fascinated with mob trivia hence her nickname and she follows Maya from the foster care building. They meet Klondike on the road, a young boy probably with Tourette's whose family kicked him out without understanding his symptoms. They were very sympathetic and their interactions with Maya was great; they made a good team.
The difficult part came when reading about their life on the road. Possessing about ten dollars and their wits, it is a struggle to survive. They walk and hitch their way north, searching for food and compassion but rarely finding either. The disgust for homeless people is frequently expressed and the struggles are described well. It was very emotional for me to read about and so very different from my own life.
Overall: A difficult read with characters facing some of the toughest decisions I've ever read about. Recommended.
Cover: The colors signal a gritty contemporary read as it is.
January 27, 2019
Maya's father ends up in prison for his con-man schemes and Maya is placed in the foster care system. It is a less than ideal situation. Compromised is a gritty story of the journey she takes to find a relative that she has only recently been made aware of. The hardship of life on the streets as she travels with two other kids is heart wrenching. She uses her scientific mind to help her cope with the chaos around her. Eventually even that fails to help her through the bleakness of street-life. Despite the story's grim premise, the quirky characters and their journey together kept my interest up.
The above review was in 2010. I read this book again in 2019 not even realizing I read it before. My new perspective caused me to see how the book is unrealistic in many ways. So I've downgraded it to 3 stars. The kids don't spend a great deal of time looking for water or finding ways to carry it with them. Really? Water is more important than food. Even so, they somehow went days without food as well as water and managed to walk for miles. The journey is way too long and very boring to read about at times.
The book describes Maya as clever because she has to 'get out of town' on the lam when her Dad's scams are exposed. But when she is on the run from foster care she doesn't seem to have much sense at all.
Dumpster-diving would have been the logical choice for their shortage of food or hanging out at restaurants and grabbing food people didn't finish. She is definitely missing a moral compass through much of the story. It wasn't clear if she didn't want to shoplift because it was wrong or because she was afraid of getting caught. I might have liked her as a character if she had been more resourceful. There were hints that her father abused her but it was never clear how that affected her character and her relationship with other people.
The book will definitely keep any readers from glamorizing life on the streets. The story has a warning in its grim portrayal of living without adult support:'Don't run away!' Still a good read but not a practical guide for survival if you are on your own.
The above review was in 2010. I read this book again in 2019 not even realizing I read it before. My new perspective caused me to see how the book is unrealistic in many ways. So I've downgraded it to 3 stars. The kids don't spend a great deal of time looking for water or finding ways to carry it with them. Really? Water is more important than food. Even so, they somehow went days without food as well as water and managed to walk for miles. The journey is way too long and very boring to read about at times.
The book describes Maya as clever because she has to 'get out of town' on the lam when her Dad's scams are exposed. But when she is on the run from foster care she doesn't seem to have much sense at all.
Dumpster-diving would have been the logical choice for their shortage of food or hanging out at restaurants and grabbing food people didn't finish. She is definitely missing a moral compass through much of the story. It wasn't clear if she didn't want to shoplift because it was wrong or because she was afraid of getting caught. I might have liked her as a character if she had been more resourceful. There were hints that her father abused her but it was never clear how that affected her character and her relationship with other people.
The book will definitely keep any readers from glamorizing life on the streets. The story has a warning in its grim portrayal of living without adult support:'Don't run away!' Still a good read but not a practical guide for survival if you are on your own.
April 8, 2011
This is Ayarbe's second YA novel. and the author has been honing are craft. It's always been just 15yr old Maya's and her dad a con -man. Maya has a mind for science, using hypothesis, to outline ways to keep her dad from getting caught. This time there is no getting away. Maya's dad is sent to prison and she's placed in orphanage.After Maya meets her potential foster parents she decides to runaway. Maya's searching for an aunt she's never known and is not 100% sure exist.
Maya's plan to go it alone is changed when Nicole, a girl who has always been in the system follows. The two walk and hitchhike to the state Maya's aunt may or may not be in. Maya formulates hypothesis that read like journal entries.
Nicole is still with me. I never really thought seh'd actually go through with it - running away for real. It's unlike her previous patterns of sticking around and waiting to be found. That's the thing about humans - highly unpredictable variables. I have to construct a new hypothesis, change the materials and variables. And that irritates me, because even my purpose has to change.
Maya's is book smart. Nicole can keep them safe and feed on the street. The two had the worst luck finding places to spend the night.
"I sigh. It's like we're doomed to share our sleeping arrangements with druggies. From the smell of things, we might as we have been lying on a bed of smoldering pot."
After Maya and Nicole feel each other talking becomes easier. I'd call what Maya and Nicole had conversations not dialogue. Ayarbe's has written a wonderfully realistic well layered novel. I loved Compromised, especially the ending, which Ayarbe crushed.
Maya's plan to go it alone is changed when Nicole, a girl who has always been in the system follows. The two walk and hitchhike to the state Maya's aunt may or may not be in. Maya formulates hypothesis that read like journal entries.
Nicole is still with me. I never really thought seh'd actually go through with it - running away for real. It's unlike her previous patterns of sticking around and waiting to be found. That's the thing about humans - highly unpredictable variables. I have to construct a new hypothesis, change the materials and variables. And that irritates me, because even my purpose has to change.
Maya's is book smart. Nicole can keep them safe and feed on the street. The two had the worst luck finding places to spend the night.
"I sigh. It's like we're doomed to share our sleeping arrangements with druggies. From the smell of things, we might as we have been lying on a bed of smoldering pot."
After Maya and Nicole feel each other talking becomes easier. I'd call what Maya and Nicole had conversations not dialogue. Ayarbe's has written a wonderfully realistic well layered novel. I loved Compromised, especially the ending, which Ayarbe crushed.
June 29, 2010
Compromised is the story of 15 year old Maya - or Jeopardy - whose father is a con-man that has finally gotten caught. Her mother died when she was younger of an overdose. Jeopardy was the one who found her and she has been haunted by the death ever since, and has found solace in watching the Discovery Channel and spewing scientific facts every time she gets nervous. Her father is taken away to Federal Prison and she has been placed in a children's home. When her father signs over her parental rights and mentions something about a long lost aunt that she might have in Boise, Idaho, Jeopardy decides to go on a quest to find her. She is joined on her quest by Nicole - or Capone/Cappy - a girl fascinated by the whole mob scene. Together they travel from Reno, Nevada to Idaho and along the way meet up with a young ten year old boy with Tourette Syndrome that they call Klondike.
This book completely opened my eyes. I've never read a book where the main character was a homeless person. The dangers out there are horrible. Nicole/Capone/Cappy has done it before and helps naive Jeopardy stay out of trouble. And poor Klondike! You cannot help but love him, despite his nervous ticks of "Tallywacker! Asswipe!" They are all orphans who find family with each other.
This wasn't sugarcoated either. Death is foreshadowed towards the middle of the book and towards the end they meet it. It almost seems like two characters die, one literally and the other just seems to have lost their soul. It was heartwrenching and I hope to see this on a school reading list in the future.
This book completely opened my eyes. I've never read a book where the main character was a homeless person. The dangers out there are horrible. Nicole/Capone/Cappy has done it before and helps naive Jeopardy stay out of trouble. And poor Klondike! You cannot help but love him, despite his nervous ticks of "Tallywacker! Asswipe!" They are all orphans who find family with each other.
This wasn't sugarcoated either. Death is foreshadowed towards the middle of the book and towards the end they meet it. It almost seems like two characters die, one literally and the other just seems to have lost their soul. It was heartwrenching and I hope to see this on a school reading list in the future.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
July 18, 2011
In this story, we meet Maya, who is thrust into the world of teen group homes and foster care when her grifter/con man father is arrested. At the group home, called "Kids' Place," Maya learns quickly to defend herself from attacks of the other kids.
When Maya's father forfeits custody, Maya decides to run away from the home and seeks to find an aunt she never knew she had, in the hopes that this aunt will step up and offer a home.
What follows is an amazing, gritty story that sheds tremendous light on the challenges and perils of a teen's life on the streets. Ayarbe has ample opportunity to delve the story's conclusion into a happily-ever-after cliche of an ending, but she artfully concludes her story in a manner that is both rewarding and realistic.
What the reader is left with is a searing portrait of a lifestyle on the streets that is often purposefully ignored. At one or two points in the story, I felt that the author had strayed into a rant, or preaching kind of prose, but this is understandable given the subject matter, ie: the main characters' frustrations with a system that, ostensibly in place to protect them, has let them down so horrifically.
I couldn't put down this book. The characters were complex, amazingly well constructed, and the story moved expertly. While this is an example of a story some critics might deem "dark for YA readers," this is a tale that is all too real, and one that we would be wise to pay attention to.
An amazing read!
When Maya's father forfeits custody, Maya decides to run away from the home and seeks to find an aunt she never knew she had, in the hopes that this aunt will step up and offer a home.
What follows is an amazing, gritty story that sheds tremendous light on the challenges and perils of a teen's life on the streets. Ayarbe has ample opportunity to delve the story's conclusion into a happily-ever-after cliche of an ending, but she artfully concludes her story in a manner that is both rewarding and realistic.
What the reader is left with is a searing portrait of a lifestyle on the streets that is often purposefully ignored. At one or two points in the story, I felt that the author had strayed into a rant, or preaching kind of prose, but this is understandable given the subject matter, ie: the main characters' frustrations with a system that, ostensibly in place to protect them, has let them down so horrifically.
I couldn't put down this book. The characters were complex, amazingly well constructed, and the story moved expertly. While this is an example of a story some critics might deem "dark for YA readers," this is a tale that is all too real, and one that we would be wise to pay attention to.
An amazing read!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 18, 2011
I think you have to suspend a lot of disbelief in order to read this story of two "in the system" state wards on a road trip to search for one of the girl's aunts. I fully accepted the description of life on the streets, with all of its violence, despair, grime, sorrow, and desperation. I fully accepted Ayarbe's portrayal of the foster care system, with too many kids in it, too many cases per case worker, exploitation and abuse by foster families, etc. But I found it hard to believe that these kids, one of whom was not that street smart, could elude authorities so many many times, even when caught red handed.
Having said all that, this is still a good tale of hope, loyalty and how far that can and should go in different situations, and learning that you can't control every second, every item, every aspect of your life, which is what Maya has tried to do her whole life as a way to cope with her con man father and the transient life they lead as a result. Maya learns about commitment and friendship, and that miracles do occur sometimes. The story was hard to put down because Ayarbe makes the reader care about every character, and their descent into runaway hell is so full of clear description that it's like watching a train wreck - you can't turn your eyes away. And you do want to find out what happens.
Having said all that, this is still a good tale of hope, loyalty and how far that can and should go in different situations, and learning that you can't control every second, every item, every aspect of your life, which is what Maya has tried to do her whole life as a way to cope with her con man father and the transient life they lead as a result. Maya learns about commitment and friendship, and that miracles do occur sometimes. The story was hard to put down because Ayarbe makes the reader care about every character, and their descent into runaway hell is so full of clear description that it's like watching a train wreck - you can't turn your eyes away. And you do want to find out what happens.
December 31, 2016
Maya's dad has just gotten arrested and sent to jail. Maya is taken by a case worker to a place called Kid's Place. This place is torturous and Maya seems to be saying the wrong thing every time. Earning her bullying. There is people whom she meets and one is Nicole who has pills that Maya counts everyday. But when her dad tells her that she has to go find her aunt, Aunt Sarah, Maya plans out her hypothesis, variables, and constants. And Nicole is not one of her constants and neither is Klondike.
Maya was a geek. A science geek who loves Discovery Channel facts that she watched. There is Nicole who is like the caring one but you wouldn't know that until you got to know her. She talks a lot. Her personality was well fitted. Klondike was a boy who Nicole and Maya let follow along with them in search of her aunt in the middle of the story.
I have to say, this book left me have to tears. How Klondike I was like "WHAT?!" and then there was the part of Nicole and the ending. The ending wasn't like a happy ending. But it wasn't all that bad which just left it off in the middle. And Nicole's place at the end was so SAD. It was thick but it felt there needed more or maybe I wanted more. Either way the ending was sad.
Wonderful book and I loved it. It felt so real and makes you think twice before running away and yet it felt so adventurous.
Maya was a geek. A science geek who loves Discovery Channel facts that she watched. There is Nicole who is like the caring one but you wouldn't know that until you got to know her. She talks a lot. Her personality was well fitted. Klondike was a boy who Nicole and Maya let follow along with them in search of her aunt in the middle of the story.
I have to say, this book left me have to tears. How Klondike I was like "WHAT?!" and then there was the part of Nicole and the ending. The ending wasn't like a happy ending. But it wasn't all that bad which just left it off in the middle. And Nicole's place at the end was so SAD. It was thick but it felt there needed more or maybe I wanted more. Either way the ending was sad.
Wonderful book and I loved it. It felt so real and makes you think twice before running away and yet it felt so adventurous.
September 28, 2012
Maya is 15 and her whole world is changing. She and her con man father have always moved quickly when his scams went bad but this time they weren't quick enough. He is arrested and Maya is sent to a children's home. Realizing that her life wasn't everything she thought it had been, Maya uses her love of the scientific method to begin planning her escape. She had just learned about her Aunt Sarah for the first time and hoped she would take her in.
She hadn't counted on having company on her adventure, especially not mob obsessed pill carrying Nicole. The two of them are stuck together though as the runaways battle the elements, police, unkind people, illness, and a lack of money on their way from Reno to Boise. On the way Maya is forced to do a lot of reflection on the type of person her dad was and the type of person she hopes to be. Good thing Capone and Klondike are there to watch her back and teach her the rules of surviving on the street.
This book would appeal to either gender but is definitely for an older reader (high school). There is a lot of harsh reality in this book about the foster care system and the life of teens who find themselves homeless. It also has a very honest look at Tourettes and the misconceptions related to the illness.
She hadn't counted on having company on her adventure, especially not mob obsessed pill carrying Nicole. The two of them are stuck together though as the runaways battle the elements, police, unkind people, illness, and a lack of money on their way from Reno to Boise. On the way Maya is forced to do a lot of reflection on the type of person her dad was and the type of person she hopes to be. Good thing Capone and Klondike are there to watch her back and teach her the rules of surviving on the street.
This book would appeal to either gender but is definitely for an older reader (high school). There is a lot of harsh reality in this book about the foster care system and the life of teens who find themselves homeless. It also has a very honest look at Tourettes and the misconceptions related to the illness.
December 14, 2012
I chose this book because I thought that the cover looked really interesting. After 15 year old Maya's dad is sent to prison, she finds out that she has to be sent to a children's home, since her mother is dead. Horrified by this, Maya and her new aquaitence Nicole come up with a plan to ditch the foster system and travel from Reno to Boise, where Maya's supposed Aunt lives. Along the way they meet up with a boy with Tourrets Syndrome and he tags along with them. The book mainly talks about the obstacles they face while hitchhiking and basically living off the streets. My favorite quote in this book is "Not everything in this... world is about black and white, right and wrong, Jeopardy... It's about loyalty okay!". I ike this quote because usually people only think about what the right thing to do is versus what the wrong thing to do is and not about how important trust and loyalty is to one another. I liked this author's writing style because she portrayed each person's lifestyle and characteristics(through dialogue) very clearly even though they were all drastically different. I would recommend this book to anyone who likes suspense or plots like these.
May 9, 2011
Maya's life has been far from typical, but it's about to get even more so when her con-man father gets arrested. Maya finds herself in a group home - miserable and alone. Then she gets word that there is a relative out there that may be able to take her in, but none of the adults believe her or are willing to help her track them down. So one night she sets off on her own, a runaway from the state with a highly unlikely companion.
Maya, who now goes by Jeopardy on the streets, doesn't realize just how much she doesn't know about life until she hits the roads to try and find her aunt. She learns about life and responsibility, while tackling moral dilemmas she never even imagined before. As she comes to understand the world better, with the help of her the companions she meets along the way, she begins to doubt the way she looks at life.
A fantastic story of a girl finding out that there is more to life than she could have possibly imagined. Not all things turn out OK, but that's what real life is all about sometimes.
5/5
Maya, who now goes by Jeopardy on the streets, doesn't realize just how much she doesn't know about life until she hits the roads to try and find her aunt. She learns about life and responsibility, while tackling moral dilemmas she never even imagined before. As she comes to understand the world better, with the help of her the companions she meets along the way, she begins to doubt the way she looks at life.
A fantastic story of a girl finding out that there is more to life than she could have possibly imagined. Not all things turn out OK, but that's what real life is all about sometimes.
5/5
October 11, 2011
After 15-year-old Maya's con-man dad is sent to prison, she runs away to avoid the foster care system and is followed by Nicole from the system. The book depicts the rough life on the streets as they arrempt to make their way from Reno to Boise in hopes of finding an aunt Maya does not know. Along the way, they pick up an abandoned 10-year-old boy with Tourette's who thinks he is possessed. Maya is constantly fearful that the Nicole will commit suicide as Maya's mother did. This is one I couldn't put down. True the young characters made some stupid decisions given their intelligence, but that is typical of youth and logical consequences. I loved the presentation of the prose and dialogue. It so individualized the characters. Maya, e.g.,organized her world around scientific principles. Despite the absorbing journey and the awareness of students who have slipped through the cracks, I hesitate to recommend this to all young readers due to the strong language, most of which is portraying the Tourette's syndrome and Nicole's tough background.
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