I read some of this for my local romance reader’s book group. We chose it because the premise sounded like a lot of fun in the write up we read during our last meeting. The execution of that premise, however, was much less enjoyable than the glowing review it received in Romantic Times.
Alyssa’s best friend Mindy is getting married but Mindy doesn’t trust her husband-to-be to remain faithful during his bachelor party (her previous fiancé cheated on her during his bachelor party) and asks Alyssa to infiltrate the party disguised as a stripper. Alyssa’s a dancer and knows how to shake her thing apparently. During the party Alyssa drinks some booze laced punch and lets loose. Cooper, the best man and a straight-laced type, removes Alyssa from the party when she throws her bra in his face and lets her sleep it off in his den. When she awakens she decides to have a wild a night of sex with Cooper, throwing her virginity and all common sense to the wind . . .
Cooper is smitten with the smart-mouthed stripper who has just given him the best sex of his life and intends to get to know her a whole lot better but it seems she’s run away. He meets her again, of course, at the wedding the next day and recognizes her even though she no longer wears a black wig, stripper makeup and is acting all shy and innocent. But before he can have at her again she’s on the run back home to San Francisco . . .
The setup is cute (if you can suspend your disbelief enough to have some fun with it) but from here little things began to drive me over the edge.
Alyssa is nauseatingly over-the-top sweet. She meets a kid on a plane who whines that she wants a pony for Christmas and doesn’t believe in Santa because he refuses to deliver her one. When Alyssa learns from the mom that she’s struggling to make ends meet Alyssa (whose family is loaded) agrees to buy her one so she’ll continue to believe in magic. Seriously?! She dotes on her grandfather which I have to admit is kind of sweet but we're supposed to believe she has remained a virgin at 24 and then threw it away to have sex with a stranger? This girl is described as a gorgeous, wild, free-spirit but has never seen a man’s anatomy up close? Sorry, I’m not buying any of it.
Anyway, Cooper is so desperate to have a repeat of the “greatest sex in his life” that he nearly becomes all stalker-like. He interrogates the other strippers until they reveal private info. that leads him to Alyssa. He then boards a plane and follows her to San Francisco, leaving his important business in the hands of his partner. When he locates her, he spies on her while she dances at her place of business.
And this is where I called it quits.