Closer to a 1 star, if i'm honest! Before I get into this, please read Jeffrey Cranor and Janina Mathewson’s You Feel It Just Between the Ribs. Then, read the Wiki summary for Philip K Dick��s Man in the High Castle. Then, rotate a Penguin Classics mass market copy of 1984 by George Orwell in your head in all directions, while saying aloud, “hey, I read this in high school.” Okay, now you contain the knowledge of three compelling, reflective dystopias, and there is absolutely no need to read Biography of X. Congrats! I’ve spared you.
This book is set in an alt-reality United States where after WWII, the South seceded from the rest of the U.S. and became an fascist theocracy. We’ll get into that, don’t worry, but you need to know that this is NOT the main focus of the book. It’s the background dressing for the abusive relationship between X, the titular character, and her recent widow, who narrates the book as a semi-biography, attempting to gain insight into X’s life. My best guess is the dystopia setting was meant to serve as character background for X, explaining her behavior and art and lifestyle. Not really what dystopias are for, but whatever, artistic liberty, etcetera.
Despite it being the background and not the point, the author really, really wants you to know she put a lot of work into creating this dystopia. The first 50%-ish is riddled with long expository paragraphs filled with names and dates and fake citations and such. There was clearly a lot of thought put into the setting, and major plot points rotate around events in this world. So, naturally, my brain thought about it a lot, and I’ve turned up the conclusion that it’s actually pretty bullshit. I’ve added a timeline of events at the very bottom of this review, if you’re curious, but it’s as full of holes as you’d expect. My criticisms below are of the worldbuilding and weird politics of the book, not the main plot, although obviously the two are intertwined. I thought the main plot line was…fine. It was fine. It was whatever. But BOY was the rest of it bad.
Glaring oversight #1
Race is mentioned three times, total, in this 400+ page book. This is the first mention:
“Systematic racism was clearly evidenced in the ST’s judicial system, as Black citizens were imprisoned at rates far above those of the white population. (In this regard, however, the Northern Territory saw similar rates, as does the reunified country today).”
The second mention: “The vast majority of Black Southerners (after some uprisings in the 1950s) came to tacitly accept that the intensely racist structure of their society, the tailwind of slavery, was simply “God’s plan.”
The third mention: A group of artists named BASEL/ART (Black Americans for Southern Equality and Liberation through Art, Resistance and Terror). The only named artist from this group is Arthur Jafa, a real-life artist and in the book, a Southern refugee living in the North. X, who is full of herself, says he’s “out of her league.”
There are less than 100 words referencing Black people in this book about the South. a region built on slavery, nonexistent without the presence of Black people. hello???? What reality are we in?? Crafting a dystopia does not equal altering the past.
Because those 100 words are literally the only things a reader has to go off of, here are the following implications:
- systematic racism is identical in a seceded, theocratic fascist South and a “”sociocapitalist”” North
-Black Southerners accepted racism as God’s plan????
- According to X, the only thing better and more interesting than herself is a Black Southerner who is mentioned once and never again
…. yeah.
The only real-life Black people mentioned in this book, because the book is mostly about X hanging out with a boatload of real-life famous white people, are Jesse Jackson (who is textually called conservative in comparison with Bernie Sanders), Arthur Rafa, and fucking RuPaul. I wish I was making this up. There’s also a Toni Morrison quote, attributed in footnote(!!) from the dedication of Sula???? Embarrassing. Racist. Weird. Put this in comparison to the dozens of white authors, politicians, artists, writers, etc — and just to emphasize, here’s a non-comprehensive list of some of the folks that Lacey cites, replicates or fictionalizes in this book: Susan Sontag, Patty O’ Toole, Susan Howe, Renata Adler, Kathy Acker, Flannery O’Connor, Connie Converse, Bob Dylan, Vivian Gornick, Sheila Heti, Tom Waits, Lou Reed, and David Bowie, whose bits are particularly insufferable to read.
As the book dragged on, I kept expecting at the very least a mention of what the fuck happened to Black Americans. There is a blatant gap where race should be, as if it’s irrelevant to the substance and culture of world she’s created. The absence of Black people in this book, in this universe, becomes retroactive. That is a form of violence. And maybe if the political philosophy of this book was more intentional, you could view this as a choice made to provoke thought about that absence — but, it just isn’t. It’s a weak, uncertain replica of many better dystopias, and the outcome is racist and embarrassing.
Fuckup #2
The second-worst thing this book does is absolutely fuck the reputation of Emma Goldman, a real-life Russian Jewish anarchist who was, though the book sure won’t tell you this, very cool and constantly getting arrested for various publications and plots. Also, in real life, she was living in Spain at the time period described in this book (post-1940), so would have been no part of this fuckery. She sounds awesome, you say. Correct — and instead of doing anything interesting with this very interesting person, this book turns her into a socialist governor of Illinois.
You’re FUCKING kidding me.
anyways, so besides an extensive arrest (and prison) record that included inciting draft-dodging, inciting riots, and conspiring to blow up an anti-union factory owner (see: very cool), say she gets successfully voted into office. She would become aN ILLINOIS GOVERNOR????? When in real life, she was hootin it up with a bunch of Spanish anarchists post-Civil War? Fuck off. Fuck OFF. Slander.
To boot, the book makes her the chief of staff of the Roosevelt admin. Lol. The book then makes Goldman an anarchist who becomes a socialist (you know, as one doesn’t), and through this transformation, becomes responsible for all the cool parts of the New Deal. Then she’s assassinated in 1945 (presumably by Southerners? The book doesn't explain). They rename the Socialist party the Goldman party, and that becomes the predominant party in the North. Yeah. Okay. Artistic liberty, and all that.
The worst crime against her, IMO, is that in the book, she becomes a figurehead for the “Socialist Capitalism” movement. Yeah! Literally what the fuck is that! and to take radical anarchist Emma Goldman and make her a capitalist of any sort, even fictionally…jail. Not real jail, she was a big prison abolitionist. But like, metaphorically, jail. It’s not good. It’s cringe.
Hey Can We Be More Creative? #3
If the South has a sort of “sinister, hyper-capitalist theocratic government,” and the North has a “socialist capitalist” framework, with references to a “dirty need for money,” then what’s up in the West? Do they have the secret magical type of capitalism that is good and works (lol)? Or could we get Literally Anything Else, Please? There’s just no creativity. Has the space race still happened? Maybe there’s a moon commune, could we go look at that? Oh, no, the solution is actually mercantilism or something? Why not feudal mercantilism? The possibilities (of being under the thumb of capitalism) are endless! Hoo-ray! Ugh.
Here’s my biggest issue w/the author’s political philosophy, behind the veil: the issue with the theocratic fascist South, according to the text, is how willing Southerners are to go to their deaths like cows, following every rule, self-reporting, blowing themselves up over and over again. The issue is not with the man turning the crank of the machine that crushes them. It’s their fault for stepping inside. And even if the author resoundingly disagrees with this, even if she doesn’t harbor a hatred towards the “weak,” we’ll never know, because nothing better, more interesting, more important was written in the code of this dystopia. There’s nothing there.
I also think it treats oppressed Southerners like idiots, as the main character notes that they have “neutered their own needs and desires at the feet of the divine.” This is from the perspective of a Northerner acting as a biased narrator, but it’s still so…like, baby, they’re doing fascism. Religion as a hammer. Southerners didn’t autonomously neuter their own needs and desires, they were forced into doing so by shadowy figures that we never, ever get a clearer picture of, something done intentionally by the author, but for what reason, fuck if I know.
One last whiff off of this monstrosity of a world she’s created. Here’s the quote: “Goldman frustrated everyone, eventually. She seemed like a radical to conservatives, but the rest of us knew she’d had to make many compromises to get as far as she did.” Many compromises with WHOMMMM??? Hers is the dominant political party. What is she having to compromise about! Compromise is not inherently good! It is NOT what keeps society functioning and it is not a moral imperative! Shut upppp! I got poisoned dot com by this author’s boring terrible world and its boring terrible politics.
Minor sin #4
Why did this book make Connie Converse annoying and pretentious?? even if she was, that’s none of your business. get your hands off of her
ok that’s all book was bad bye
If you liked the pretentious art vibes and sinister lesbians of this book, go listen to the second season of Within the Wires, by the same creators of You Feel It Just Between The Ribs, the superior chaotic lesbian dystopia book. Seasons 1-3 of Within the Wire will cure you from ever needing to read this bad, bad book.
TIMELINE (for nerds interested)
“In the years preceding the Great Disunion, while the US military and the federal government had been engrossed in WWII, the ST’s future leaders had through steady propaganda campaign of radio shows, newspapers, reports, posters, pamphlets, and youth outreach programs, convinced a majority of Southerners that every state in the North was being secretly controlled by the Communist Party; an invasion of the South, they said, was imminent. Those who weren’t convinced of a Communist invasion were unsteadied enough by the widespread misinformation to feel there was no longer any objective truth, a belief that numbed any part of the population that might have objected to the forced theocracy.”
“The state governments of Mississippi, Alabama, Georgia, the Carolinas, Tennessee, Florida, as well as parts of Virginia, West Virginia, Arkansas, and Louisiana had been cooperating in secret for nearly a decade (assumed 1935) to enact the mass exodus.” The “Christian Coup and its wall had been in the works for years” and “what may have seemed like a coup from the outside was actually a slow mutation of a conservative democratic state into a country overtaken by invasive delirium—the fear of God—and ruled by whoever could most convincingly claim to know His Divine Laws, a ‘478 page document listing 1,364 laws that ST leaders used as a replacement for the individual legal codes of the southern states prior to the Disunion. Another 5,449 laws were added to the document during the ST leaders’ reign.”
In 1945, the “Great Disunion” occurs, the South secedes from the North, and the Wall goes up. A border is established in 1946, and later in 1958, a tripartite treaty is enacted between the Northern, Southern and Western territories, making it a federal(!) crime to run away from the South.
In 1996, 2,488 theocratic leaders kill themselves in a mass suicide, the North invades the South, the wall goes down, and Reunification occurs sometime after.
Questions for the group: Why is there a Western territory at all? Is it because the author read the greater work Man in the High Castle and said hey, that seems cool and interesting, what if My Book Too? What federal government exists, if the country is split into territories, and how can it possibly enforce the treaty? What the fuck is the “Christian Coup”? Who wrote the document “His Divine Laws”? Who were the ST leaders? Which church is “The Church”? Who killed themselves? How were they in positions of power? Why that number? Why in 1996? How did any state governments work together “secretly”? How did the North miss all of that? What the fuck? (You will not be surprised to learn that absolutely none of these questions are ever answered).