©2001
21 chapters/246 pages
Book Summary—Nori Edwards has just moved to Whisper Lake Crossings, having bought Trail’s End, a lodge-and-ten-cabins property. She’s moved to start over. Her husband, Marty, was killed, and anyone’s left with their twin 16-year-old girls, who don’t arrive at Crossings with their mother as they’re at a Christian summer camp. So Nori’s all alone. And, unfortunately for her, the place she now calls home is the focus of a centuries-old legend involving a ghost and, through the years, the backdrop for plenty of deaths and accidents Trail’s End is feared by the adults because of the ghost and seems to have a very sour effect on the older teens in the area because one of their own strangely disappeared from Trail’s End two years ago, with her boyfriend, and have never been heard of seen since. So the mystery is: What’s really the deal with Trail’s End? Is it haunted by the ghost of Molly Jones whose life was the first life touched by pain at Trail’s End? Or is it something else? Whose leaving little bells and opening cabinets and closing windows, tampering with Nori’s canvases, and removing her wedding ring? Molly or is Nori losing her mind? Steve Baylor, resident of Whisper Lake Crossings, hopes to help her sort it all out and claim her heart in the process.
My Review (spoiler alert!)—My notes show I read this book in 2011, but I didn’t remember any of it (just vague impressions but nothing concrete), so I read it again. When I read it before, I gave it my quick coding of (smiley face) plus ! (exclamation point)—which means I REALLY like it. But, having just finished it, I have to say I don’t really get why I was so gung-ho about it. The story, itself, was all right, though I guessed what was behind the mystery and why, but I didn’t care for the love story part of it. In 7-10 days of acquaintance, both Nori and Steve believe they’re FALLING for each other? Really? And it’s not even a full 7-10 days of interaction but sporadic meetings and conversations. Yes, I get “love-at-first-sight,” but I don’t buy it when both parties have issues to work out. I don’t know, but the romance was to contrived for me; it felt forced, as if Linda Hall were trying to make it happen to soon. If this is a series, why not allow it to play out over the series? For heaven’s sake, Steve doesn’t even meet her daughters in the book! By the Epilogue, he’s proposing! And, for me, his reaction to finding “incriminating evidence” in her possession, says that he has some real deep-seated issues with trust and women, etc., he NEEDS to work through before even contemplating romance! He went on the defensive attack with her, not asking, not getting her side—he tried, convicted, and sentenced her all upon SEEING two things that could’ve so easily been PLANTED on her person (her backpack), especially considering the backpack’s been out of her possession for at least a few hours if not all day or over night.
No, I didn’t care for the romance, but the mystery’s okay. Though I wasn’t a fan of Nori’s and kept rolling my eyes at her insistence of there being a ghost, the mystery was okay. As heroes go, Steve was okay (I’m all about his 6’-6” muscle-man description), but I wasn’t very into his character. Looks are good (and he had them—tall, dark with blue eyes, handsome), but they’re only skin deep, and, for me, his character needed lots of attention. Or, let’s say, his personality. His character was decent (he’s a good guy), but, because of his past, his soul’s been wounded. He’d need more than 7-10 days of work on his soul before he’d be ready for love (Romans 12:2).
Grade: B (including the “love story”)
A (for the mystery alone)