Knowing Geer by his reputation within the expansive Pagan community and his excellent books on Druidry, I had high hopes for this book. In the end, I was extremely disappointed. The story line jumps radically from spot to spot throughout the "mini-chapters" that are marked within each titled chapter or section. I've read this particular style before, especially within the works of LeGuin. Used sparingly, it becomes an excellent plot mover. Here, Geer uses it extensively, making the entire story feel very dis-jointed.
In the beginning of the book, Geer uses the plot mechanism of dropping the reader directly into the story - and parceling out small details a few at a time, building the suspense of the entire storyline. The reader is provided the primary perspective of Stefan, with slight looks through the eyes of two other seemingly minor characters who are hinted at having major roles within the story. Added to that mix is a "stranger" who has seemingly lost his mind through a traumatic experience. All of this works quite well, building towards a story line that promises some mystery, some character angst, and a potentially rolling plot line. Then, Geer shifts the story from the perspective of Stefan to that of the mystery character and one of the previously minor characters. Stefan completely disappears from the story and becomes an even more minor character than the previous ones. In fact, the additional plot sub-texts during the battle scenes, where Stefan seems to be suddenly awakened within the plot -- well, these left me feeling a little cheated out of realizing where Stefan had come and how he had gotten to this point.
Also, during the battle scenario, other characters are introduced and given prominent positions within the scenarios. I'm left with the feeling of "who the fuck are these people?" -- with no explanation of how they fit into the story-plot, and just where they started in on the strand of the story.
Lastly, the ending to the battle scenario felt as if it were a puzzle piece that was forced to fit in its location. Whether the sectional aspects were carved with a knife or snipped with a pair of scissors doesn't matter -- its clearly cut up to fit precisely where it is put. The judgment of the mystery character, now fully awakened to his original state as a member of the Directorate, is likewise far too clean. He goes through two periods of transition, trying to resolve the differences between the two different world views he holds. The first time, he admits during the judgment, took place over a two-hour helicopter ride - where he struggles with both perspectives and then makes a choice of rational proportions that doesn't seem to be easily made in 120 minutes, much less 120 days. The second period of struggle, the character willingly undertakes shortly after the end of the battle - alone in the caves during the dead of a strong Winter. Just a bit too handy -- plus, this period of transition would have made for an excellent addition to the storyline as well.
In the end, I found the story to be far too disjointed to be completely enjoyable. I found a lot of promise in the story's overall premise -- but almost is if only small sections of the overall story were not there. In short, I felt like I was reading a rough, first draft of a much more expansive and compelling novel - instead of a finished, published story.