I really enjoyed my previous read from Money-Coutts and so was excited to have the opportunity to read this new release. However, I struggled to get invested in the plot and found the protagonist to be incredibly frustrating.
At the beginning I found the story to be rather entertaining and I frequently chuckled at Stella’s mishaps. It felt like I was in for an entertaining read that was pacey and light-hearted. However, when the writer introduced the subplot concerning Billie, I found it too realistic and made the mood change considerably. No longer thinking it was an entertaining piece of chick lit, I was distracted by Billie and wanted Stella to grow up and be a responsible adult.
Along the way there are many scenes that lightened the story and I was particularly intrigued by Stella’s new job working with Marjorie. It sounded as bizarre as Marjorie’s character! I thought this added something a bit different to the story, even if it did feel a bit far-fetched. Yet, I did think Money-Coutts could have extended this element of the plot to engage more with Stella, rather than it being a job that she finds increasingly enjoyable.
As for Stella herself… well, she is clearly spoiled, selfish and pretty useless. Her obsession with finding true love means she keeps making the same old mistakes. Her growing connection with Fitz sent my alarm bells ringing, but Stella failed to pick up on any signs that this is not the right relationship for her. Coupled with how she behaves with Billie, I grew less interested in her as a character because I wanted to see Stella step up more for her best friend and not put herself first all of the time. I thought the portrayal of her relationship with Fitz was too obvious for the story and instead found myself wishing for the genuine happy ever after that I knew would come at the conclusion.
I especially liked Harold’s character and thought him particularly sweet. His is so patient towards Stella and it is a shame that she does not recognise this – more reasons why I grew to dislike her! Again, such a strong supporting character, I thought the writer could have developed this character further, providing a bit more balance to Stella’s headstrong ways.
For me, this book was not as enjoyable as my previous read from Money-Coutts. It promised plenty of romance and laughter, but I was brought back to reality with a bump with Billie’s story and Stella’s behaviour just grated with me throughout the book.
With thanks to HQ Digital and NetGalley for providing me with a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.