Now that she’s in high school, Renako’s out to reinvent herself and that leads to her friendship with the ultra-stylish and popular Oduka freaking Mai. But when the pressure gets too much for Renako, Mai confesses and they decide to start fake… no, they’re actually dating. Well, they’re halfway there anyway.
I bet the light novel is better. That’s my initial reaction to this manga, which is a series of occasionally rather charming and silly moments that are hung together on a framework that feels like it could use a bit more effort.
There’s a welcome attempt to do something new with the dating angle, as the arrangement between Renako and Mai looks primed to literally split the difference between friends and lovers in an effort for each to get their viewpoint across. It’s a fun change, certainly.
And if you enjoy Renako’s flustrations (she is equal parts flustered and frustrated most of the story) at the confident overtures of the perfect-to-a-fault Odura freaking Mai (yes, I love every time Renako says this, why do you ask?), then you’ll probably enjoy the heck out of this.
It’s decent yuri fluff, honestly, and the way Renako loses it (and vague suggestions that this is five seconds away from becoming a yuri harem) is pretty funny. It’s once we get down to the fine details that things start to become a little less cohesive.
For all that she was a loser in middle school, there’s nothing to really convey what Renako was like, nor does it really show how badly she’s struggling to keep up with a more popular crowd. We’re told this is happening, see a couple panels of it, but things feel a little rushed to get where they’re going.
As a result, the narrative gets the job done but is very workmanlike, but also frequently makes exactly zero sense. Okay, I know the coffee shop date is an excuse to get Mai in a bikini (just trust me here), but it’s not exactly a logical conclusion, whether it’s seeded ahead of time or not.
While Renako herself is a lot of fun, I wish Mai was a little more than she comes across. Despite lip service to her reasons for wanting Renako, she feels like a list of bullet points for characterization rather than an actual character proper.
So, it’s all over the place, basically. It’s kind of a shame since the structure of this premise suggests a lot more clever than we actually get, since Mai is frequently skirting the boundaries of the deal (although this can get pretty amusing at times).
There’s subsequently not a great deal of chemistry here, really, although it gets a bit better towards the end of the volume. I’ve certainly read worse romances, but I wish this was doing basically every single thing better than it actually is.
And, yes, special shout-out to Eku Takeshima, of Whisper Me A Love Song fame for their character designs. I was impressed that I noticed their style even before I realized that they were behind them and they did great work as always.
3 stars - it’s a simple truth that as the yuri supply increases we won’t be graced with winners every time. This is definitely enjoyable and I’m certainly going to keep reading, but it’s sure not a patch on Bloom Into You or Failed Princesses.