It was obvioius what was going to happen to his mom in the beginning.
Braveheart anyone? His mom dies. the little girl gives him a flower@the funeral.
It seemed like she wasn’t really heartbroken/concerned that her uncle was piping to his death.
‘puny’ and ‘fritter’ and ‘idiot’ are modern.
the butcher doesn’t fit him. at all. He didn’t seem to have that reputation at all.
WHY would the author have her character not be a virgin?! What could you possibly be thinking? I kept waiting to hear that she hadn’t actually had sex with someone, but oh no. this author sucks. Why have your book start off so sweet and then completely ruin it? you should put on the back of your book that your character has been with a man before, otherwise it’s misleading and like you tricked your readers. If I had known she’s been with someone before, I wouldn’t have read it. idl books like that.
&are we supposed to feel better knowing she didn’t love marcus? Because that just makes her look like a slut when she’s had sex with a guy she didn’t even love. During that time period, you were supposed to be a virgin. Why would she do that when she was expected to marry someone? I mean, she had some standing in the community. It wasn’t like she was a regular peasant girl who can do whatever she wants.
Did she not wonder how raven knew of marcus?
The names are weird-leitis and niall.
It was very sudedn how she thought raven might be ian.
How old are these ppl? The book doesn’t even say!
The ppl on the back of the cover don’t fit their roles at all. She doesn’t look Scottish at all &that dress sure aint Scottish. Its pretty, but its all wrong.
I love how she acted like she knew all along that he was ian, instead of just making a random guess a few minutes before. and when I say love, I mean hate.
I hate that her uncle’s rlly mean. It’s a lil sadsack &annoying.
He asks if you also find marcus fascinating. &u say it was disloyal to talk about him, cause he wasn’t there to defend himself. He doesn’t need to be there! Ian asked your opinion on marcus, you idiot!
Im annoyed that she never even mentioned ian, until all of a sudden when she makes that guess. I didn’t know she really liked him.
2mistakes in here-‘winding her arms around her neck.’ And ‘he places his hands on his arms, drew her closer.’
“it’s a strange experience, to be carried about like this in the dark. Makes me feel as if I’m floating in the air.” Please shut up.
“she felt like a supplicant, a neophyte, a virgin trapped in wonder&delight.” God save me from stupid comments. &use words we actually know. 1st off, who talks like that? 2nd, you as a virgin? Scoff!
Why would she be amused that he wants to know about marcus? &its annoying how she wont just tell him everything. Why are you being so annoyingly secretive?
She doesn’t feel guilty/trashy for sleeping with someone outside of marriage at all. Or disloyal to ian at all.
The author gave every indication that he was a virgin. Of course, I’d be mad if he was and she wasn’t.
“was it something English that you did to me?” omg. Shut up.
“if the world were perefect&kind, then we would be the 1st for each other. But we’re not.” Okay, hold up here, romeo. You could have held out for her. Its not like you didn’t have a choice in the matter. You had no idea that she wasn’t a virgin.
“offering succor &safety to those who would come with us.” There we go again with stupid comments.
‘her fingers unfastened his breeches, reached within them as if she’d done this before, as if she’d always been decadent.’ Decadent is so not the right word there.
The old woman putting her fingers on his lip was weird. &as if that wasn’t weird enough, an old woman actually kisses him.
Its so annoying that she can’t tell that ian is the butcher. &then basically realizes he is&doesn’t question him. who would keep silent?
The love isn’t exciting. Even the side story of Harrison wasn’t developed at all.
How is it that she’s able to leave the castle? You’d think Donald was the only one there. Its completely unrealistic.
So he isn’t a butcher at all. He was hauling Englishman on those carts. Hah!
She accepted him as ian &alec way too easily.
He’s pretending he’s dead. Ugh! I don’t like this.
‘she wanted a fire in a cozy cottage &to have him enter, slapping his arms against his chest&grinning, redfaced, at her.’ Uh…okay. Each to his own, I guess.
How depressing is this ending.
Idt she even mentioned that her brother’s were dead.
all we kept hearing about the scenery was the loch. I never got a sense of what things looked like.
All the touching/kissing is getting nauseating.
Its working out too well. Both Harrison/Donald are happy to leave their homelands. Um, could you make this any more fantastical?
Him picking up her uncle was ridiculous. &the fact that her uncle grinned and complimented him was STOOPID!
All of them not missing their homeland because it was about people, not places, was again, fantastical. You mean no one’s gunna miss their belongings, their homes, or homeland? Yeah, right! Can I get a BULLCRAP?
Seeing all those spirits was another thing that sent this book even further toward ridiculous.
The ending could have been a lot better/concluded.
I liked the title New Scotland. I hate that they had to move, but I like the fact that she put the truth into her book. Scots were actually run out of Scotland. &went to nova scotia. &its rlly emotional to read about.
the book wasn't horrible, but it wasn't good. the love wasn't exciting. I didn't really like the characters, especially the girl. I think the author ruined her book &the characters love by having her not be a virgin. I cant comprehend how you could start out your book and make it seem like they're destined for each other and give your book a sweet buildup knowing you were only going to pull a dive-bomb move with your book. way to go.
the book wasn't descriptive enough, and frankly there wasn't much to the story. there were only a few dif scenes in the entire book. the castle, the village, the secret passage.&a cave.
I was in the mood for a Scottish book, but this was just disappointing.