If Goodreads had half stars, I'd rate this around 3.5.
It wasn't bad, but it wasn't something that would keep me on the edge of my seat the entire book. I picked this up today at the library to give my brain a break--- between reading Oscar Wilde, Nabokov, and other classics, it needed some downtime with one of my favourite genres of book- historical romance. Especially the scottish variety.
I mean who doesn't love a dark laird? Really.
This book started out as quite a few have done. Adventurous, but shy heroine ruled by a domineering father in a castle seeks something and falls into a trap, gets into danger, etcetc. If you're going to use this method of introducing your female characters.. PLEASE do something to keep me hooked. I've read this sort of story so many times, and I find that a lot of authors simply gloss over details, in order to progress the story. There was -a- scene in which her father was cruel, but not enough to establish this as a long-term pattern, or simply a short term one.
Introduce the male protagonist Alisdair. A laird of scottish descent coming to reclaim his lands in Scotland which, coincidentally happen to belong (legally or not) to the heroines' father. Kind of cheesy, but lets roll with it. I'm kind of reminded of Robert the Bruce, thinking about it. Reclaiming Scotland from the English. It works, right? There are so many ways the author could have gone about this, but we got the always cunning 2 for 1! Can you guess what two he got for the price of one?
Well, if you guessed the land and an unwanted bride, you may have won what's behind door #1!
No seriously. There should have been one of the biggest points of tension in the story, and it seemed over before it really even began to happen! Which man would be totally accepting to this? I mean honestly. If you were presented with a spouse tomorrow, would you not put up a fight? Gah.
Throughout the rest of the story, there really wasn't a lot to keep me continually hooked. I felt highly sympathetic that Patricia, a guiding, compassionate force towards both of the protagonists was swiftly extinguished as a character, instead of living longer. I also wonder at the point of Fergus coming back--- extra fluff? Not sure.
Either which way. Not the best I've ever read, but certainly not the worst.