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The Hunter Legacy #4

Make or Break the Hero

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"All good heroes are insane". Was that really a joke?
Jonathon Hunter hasn’t the time to ponder the labels people try to put on him.
The war shifts from defensive to offensive. The stakes get higher, as the means to fight the aggressors finally become available.
But has he risen too high? Or are the consequences of his own actions, interfering with his judgement?
As fast as you move, the past is faster, and always catches up with you when you least expect it.
This is not a game, and being a Hero has its own price tag.
Just where is the point, where you Make, or Break, the Hero?

The Hunter Legacy series:
1. Hero at Large
2. Hunted Hero Hunting
3. Send in the Hero
4. Make or Break the Hero
5. Hail the Hero *forthcoming*

7 pages, Audio CD

First published August 7, 2015

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About the author

Timothy Ellis

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(New info added at the bottom, in response to feedback and reviews.)

Timothy Ellis lives on the Gold Coast, Queensland, Australia; where he constantly battles with his cat for possession of his desk chair, Daleks do guard duty, and he keeps his sonic screwdriver next to his lightsaber and wand. Now there is a female Doctor Who, he eagerly awaits the sound of the Tardis materializing in his house.

He has spent his life reading and watching science fiction and fantasy, and has been playing Space Genre computer games since he used to be smuggled in to play the original text Star Trek game on a university mainframe, long before the PC or Apple appeared. Since 2004, he's written game guides for the Egosoft X Universe series, culminating in two versions of the X3 Handbook. He has also designed major mods for the various games, and dozens of mini mods.

He has been a farm worker, Antique Dealer, Computer Programmer, Systems Analyst, Operations Manager of a small retail chain, and Retail Store Owner. He is now a full time author, who still does Spiritual Healer and helper work.

After leaving behind the corporate and business worlds, he was opened to his Spiritual gifts. Now a Feng Shui Master, Feng Shui led him to Buddhism, Karma, the Tao, and back to western spiritualism. Since 2006 he has been writing spiritual articles and helping people via spiritual forums and Facebook Groups. His spiritual books include "Personal Healing Using Basic Meditation", "Life Harmony, Feng Shui in Plain English", '101 Tips for the John of God Brazil Experience', and "The Wisdom of the Ages is available for the price of asking a question" series of 8 books. His own spiritual healing led him to writing novels.

His first novel, 'Hero at Large', spawning the long running 'The Hunter Imperium' universe, brings together his love of the space genre, magic, spirituality, and cats. Now 10 series long, the universe covers 3 galaxies, 4100 years, and as at Dragon Imperative, 62 Novels, 7 shorts, and 2 companion books. There are 7 main entrance points across 10 series: Hero at Large, Admiral of Gaia, Yesterday's Spacemage, Crossover, Midshipman Spacemage, Old Magic, and Dragon Rider. Alternate entrance points if you don't need backstory first, are Adrift and Mage King, although Dragon Rider has 3 books before it about the dragons.

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23 reviews1 follower
August 22, 2019
Imagine being your own game master in a role playing game, or playing a video game with a god codes on. That's what this book is for Jonathan Hunter oh, and that's what every book before this has been for Jonathan Hunter.

"I am literally killing so many bad guys and I got so much loot I don't know what to do with it all."
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19 reviews1 follower
April 19, 2018
This book is more of the same as the previous books, an endless string of winning by the main character filled with women, promotions, and ridiculous battle tactics. It's honestly getting to the point where it's not even fun to read anymore it's getting so ridiculous. I'm going to start the next book on KU but if something doesn't change I doubt I'm going to finish it.
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2,116 reviews75 followers
February 24, 2024
I've had more than enough of Ellis' writing. The complete lack of realism in terms of timing, resources and human behavior is hard to forgive. Once any sense of reasonable opposition is taken away, these flaws become ever more obvious.

This book's antagonist somehow has a device that spits out hundreds of warships in a day with no need for resupply and barely any human involvement. It's not magic though. They use these swarms ships to attack new systems at the same time every day, with no reconnaissance, reserves, or strategic observers. It comes as no surprise that these idiots are easily defeated. What is surprising is our hero, who's never been to officer school, being promoted to flag rank in under a year.

There's no challenge, no risk, and no concept of actual warfare. Even as pulp fiction, Ellis' writing has become lazy. Sorry for the rant... forcing myself to finish this book made me a little angry.
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2,128 reviews6 followers
August 31, 2021
Interesting, but …

The storyline continues in much the same manner as the previous books. Plenty of action, sufficient descriptions to support the activities and events designed to fit each situation. Unfortunately, this installment ends with the reader hanging, waiting for the next line. It was unexpected and not pleasant.
11 reviews
May 22, 2017
A repetitive grind through pointless detail

No character development. The spiritual arc started previously ignored. Important plot details left hanging. Starting to think the author is paid by the word. Those following the series could skip the whole thing
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120 reviews1 follower
June 28, 2018
Well i read all 4 books in 4 days. It's the kind of book that you have a hard time to put it down. As i said before, it's simple and straightforward. Hero always win and getting what he needs when he needs. But i really like it. No need to overthink just go with the story :) Starting the 5th book
190 reviews4 followers
January 18, 2021
Annoying cliff hanger at the end. Not as enjoyable as the first couple of books. No longer any tension since every situation is instantly and easily resolved by the hero, no matter how ridiculous. There is no challenge, therefore there is no triumph.
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812 reviews7 followers
November 18, 2023
I can Not get enough of this Series and wath is happening. This is a definite page Turner and I can not get anything done, because I am so invested in the story. Narrator again does a Great job with Voices and Storyline.
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817 reviews6 followers
January 1, 2018
Great series

This is one of those series that you can read and read again and enjoy it the second time as the first. This is my third time reading it
86 reviews1 follower
May 1, 2018
Samey samey. Hope next one more personal

Too many battles now then all that ranking. I miss the fun and the personal interchanges. Im going to try next one but feeling uhhh
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126 reviews
November 5, 2018
Can't Put them down.

I've fallen in love with this Series. It's very well written and engaging with the characters that you can see what their doing as well as feel.
77 reviews1 follower
August 30, 2020
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441 reviews
July 29, 2021
Good

Yeah I’m enjoying this series, sometimes the details are a bit much but the action is still good and enjoyable.
1,282 reviews5 followers
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December 9, 2021
Excellent

Fantastic read! I absolutely loved it! I can not wait for the next one to be release! Such great characters in this book!
2,505 reviews71 followers
July 13, 2022
The cliffhanger endings are cliche'.

Overall this is getting stale. It seems like a lot of filler with a little bit of story. I hope this arc moves on to better things soon.
388 reviews
March 22, 2017
Thought this is where I'd leave the series.

Kindle Unlimited~ YAY!

I genuinely thought that I'd reached the point where I wouldn't get through Book 4 due to the battle action & strategy centric nature of the storyline. There were a few spots where I flipped past military detail, but there were very few. Everything else held my interest and I truly enjoyed the story even though I didn't quite track some things. But, as I've stated, this is so not my usual genre.


4 stars to 1 star because if you read to the end, there's a reset to an alternate timeline path where none of the characters or events existed. So all of this is irrelevant, including my original review.
465 reviews4 followers
November 8, 2015
Okay, I know that I am not necessarily the target audience for this book, but I have to say I really enjoyed it. The science is a bit (to say the least) fanciful and the story puts me in mind of the musing of a young man daydreaming about being a hero (always saving the day, always accepted, always getting the medals, and of course, always getting the girl); but who cares. The writing is good, the storyline is interesting, the action is just right, and most importantly, the characters are people to love or hate. This book an entertaining escape, pure and simple. I read all (5 at the time) books in a row and look forward to seeing more in the future.
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456 reviews4 followers
December 1, 2018
I knew he would do it

It never fails when a story gets going good, a to be continued pops up. Now I have to wait for book five. It SUCKS. The story was excellent and the action was one of his best. I still have no idea how Jon will get through his visions.
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508 reviews2 followers
August 24, 2015
Boring

Still following the E. E. Smith plan. Lots of boring filler. Poor editing. Glad it's Kindle Unlimited. Video game not time travel.
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112 reviews1 follower
November 12, 2015
Excellent series, I hope there are many more..!!

Its an interesting series, some would say things are too easy, but i found it very entertaining!!
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2,994 reviews36 followers
April 1, 2017
There has been a slight touch of the ‘supernatural’ in the previous books, but in this, the mystical is more prominent. I’m not sure if I like this or not, it certainly breaks the flow of the story because you never know if what you are reading is real of yet another ‘flash forward’. I’m also not sure about the Yoda references.

Another Cliff-hanger ending!!!! It’s a good job the next book was published only a few months later or this would really be annoying.
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1,771 reviews19 followers
April 2, 2017
Bruises, Bruises, Bruises

The saga continues. Jon continues to gain power and rank. As a possible 18 year old, he may be comfortable with command and battle strategy, but he feels totally incompetent when it comes to girls feelings and thinking. I like the humor, characters, and story. The chemistry of the characters flows smoothly. The end of the book is a real cliffhanger. I look forward to the next book.
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