ANTONIO: Diablos MC

by Barbara Overly

When Haylee goes with her friend Monica to the store that afternoon she never imagined her life would change forever. She never imagined she would meet the love of her life. But she did. And his name is Antonio Hernandez. Or as his Diablos Biker brothers call him Toni. From the day she met Toni she knew he was it for her. She knew she loved him more than anything in her life. But she also knew Toni never wanted the happily ever after life Haylee had always dreamed of having. He lived a very dangerous and on the edge lifestyle. But her love for him made her look the other way on all the things she thought were in important in life. She gave up the idea of having the Cinderella love story. She realized that all she ever wanted and needed was Toni. Nothing else mattered. That was until everything in their relationship changed and life as they knew it would be different forever. Haylee finds out she is pregnant with Toni’s baby. But before Haylee can tell Toni about the baby something from his past chases her far away. Once Toni loses Haylee so abruptly he realizes that the freedom and fast paced life he has lived wasn't what he wanted after all. It wasn't actually what made him happy. What made him happy was Haylee. What makes him completely is Haylee. Nothing else matters if he can't have her as his own. It takes him a long time to get his family back together. To finally have her back as his woman. But after a short time together she is ripped away from him again. But this time is different. She is taken from his life only because of jealousy and pure hate. It becomes a matter of life and death. And if he doesn’t get to Haylee in time he will lose her forever. The family he finally realizes he wants and needs may be ripped from him forever because of jealousy and hate. Can Toni get what he needs. Can Toni get what he wants. Can Toni finally have someone who purely love him for who he is. Or will he be too late and be left without knowing what true love can be. UPDATE! Thank you to the readers who gave reviews. I took your comments to heart and edited this book again. I made some editing changes that hopefully will make my book a great read for all.

296 pages, Paperback

Published September 8, 2017

Reviews

[Judy · Rating 2 out of 5]

I am reluctantly rating this book 2.5 stars but I want to give the author a chance to make some improvements. The story line was basically good and the characters were engaging. With that said, this is undoubtedly the worse case of editing I have seen in a long time. There were multiple issues on every page, misspelled/wrong words used, etc. It is sad because I think this book had the potential to be such a better book. The book definitely needs to be taken down until it is edited better. Then maybe an objective reader will rate the book higher. I see so much potential in the author but I won't buy another book until I can see a decently edited book. A few good beta readers would be a good idea also.

[Pearl · Rating 1 out of 5]

Just NO!

Don't bother with this crap! So many grammatical and punctuation errors made it hard to get through this drivel. My 4th grader would do a better job easily. Just read the blurb and read someone else like Jeneveir Evans, Cee Bowerman or even Hayley Faiman. Seriously, I don't know how this got published. What a waste of time!

[Cathy Prevette · Rating 5 out of 5]

A other awesome book by Barbara Overly

Great book,, no cliffhangers, alpha males and HEA. this book it short, but the authors knows how to write the words that make you care about the characters. What more could you ask for.

[Kim Butler · Rating 3 out of 5]

Good story but needs some work.

[v'sreadingjourney · Rating 2 out of 5]

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Method: ebook

Rating: 2/5 stars

H rating: 2/5 - Toni

h rating: 2/5 - Haylee

Drama: 2/5

Thoughts: Not a huge fan..

[Parandoush · Rating 2 out of 5]

Read better. Author needs a better proof-reader. "Weather instead of whether" and many more errors.