Finished last night, enjoyed the story. But the writing style got to me. Transitions were not handled well and some of the dialog was rushed, and example:
"When was the last time any of you made another? That what I thought" She chugged the rest of the cognac, wincing as she handed the snifter back to Tristan.
To me the chugging the cognac sentence should have been directly after the question. To give a sort of pregnant pause. I am not normally so picky with such things, but I found it slowed down my reading. I would have to back track to figure out what I was reading and where the story was at, and who was in the room such things.
I did like it but am hesitant to buy the next one, especially for $8.00 for the kindle version on less then 300 pages, is making me take a couple steps back.